I Became a Legendary Card

The subject matter is novel and interesting, but the new plot feels a bit fake. As a member of the four major families, there is no chance of losing in this kind of competition. Even if you pretend to be a deer in front of millions of people, you will not lose face by a few grandmasters. Besides, if you dare to accuse a deer in public, how can you be afraid of making things worse, and at worst, shoot to death all those who dare to stab someone? The face of the four major families is much more important than the lives of millions of people. (Okay, I can't make it up anymore, dog head)

You can choose your opponent at will, why not just find someone to play the role, but choose the protagonist? 🤔

It is strongly recommended that others plagiarize your subject matter. There are many people who can write what you cannot write, and I don't know what you have written.

Creativity is a good idea, but the author fw, the plot is just a messs

The setting is very interesting, but the plot is mediocre, the characterization is poor, and the logic is a mess. After three years, dozens of points of proficiency, and a beautiful summoner can easily reach tens of thousands in a few days, right? It is recommended to rewrite it.

Okay, I finally understand why we can't communicate! Upgrading is difficult! It's all just pretense, I think you have quite a lot of freedom! Various operations are available, and you can freely choose where to go! What kind of summons has a number of times? I didn't see you mention this when you were binge-watching before! Ten thousand times, the proficiency level was 9468 at level 6, and then another wave of heat comes, how many more times can you summon it? The cheap sword is hypocritical, and it has been silent for three years. It is an embarrassing situation. You just want a beautiful girl summoner. Author, if you don't want to improve the protagonist, wouldn't you think of a better excuse?

Do you think your plot is reasonable? If the four major families have this kind of energy, do they still need to put this kind of thought into a small trial? They all have the energy to easily influence the president of a small place, and they can't even pass a trial directly? And he also cheated in public. If there were other families with evil intentions and wanted to frame him, wouldn't he just send it? Then, the protagonist manipulates the market to allow people to reuse themselves and gain thousands of proficiency points. Then how many times did few people try in the first place? Why is it only sixty or so at the start? I don't believe there weren't a few big forces testing tens of thousands of games at the beginning.

The author will add debuffs. It is not enough to impose a limit on the number of times a card can be used. After upgrading, the debuffs will be reduced even more. I know that the strength of compression is poisonous, but I still rack my brains to think of such a thing. Is it really yours?

Able to appear and sign, but unable to communicate. Did you eat the setting as soon as it came out? This is the fastest setting book I have ever seen. I played more than 50 games in three years, and there was a guy who bought 20 tickets and didn't even play 50 times. It's really funny. People say it would cost them all to buy twenty pieces.

The idea is novel, the plot is very poisonous, just follow the setting, the spirit comes out to sign, being able to see it means that you can communicate, just to pretend to be a big one, pretending to be dead for 3 years

And there is a logical problem. You said that the protagonist upgrades because everyone is using him and his proficiency increases like crazy. Then the protagonist's card has been under development since it first came out. Logically speaking, his proficiency should be very high. Then his secret should have been known a long time ago. You are completely inconsistent.

Don't talk about conferring gods in one book, I feel that if you grasp the rhythm well, it will be a small masterpiece.

This setting is okay, but there is a paradox. If the fantasy card is not unique, then the upgrade is of no use to the heroine. Anyway, other people can also upgrade while lying down... This does not reflect the strong character, right?

I can only say that the subject matter is still interesting, but the plot is poisonous. Don't use female summoners. These are common themes. Don't communicate with others, or you can communicate with everyone, not just the protagonist.

The creativity is good, the plot is poisonous, the logic is illogical, and it is a serious bookworm.

It's very similar to "I Want to Be Eternally Famous" by My Sister's Bride, but there's a big problem with the underlying logic! If you try to use your brain later, you will see more problems, unless you don't use your brain.

Setting bonus points Plot points deduction Character points deduction Logic negative points

Don't you feel disgusted when you confuse right and wrong in front of so many people? Don't you think it's outrageous?

The creativity is really good😆