A Man in Dream of the Red Chamber Solves Cases with Science

The writing is okay. It is rare to see a story in Red Mansions where the main character is chivalrous and intelligent. The logic of solving the case is also reasonable. It is finally not a garden drama. But this combination of yours is too cool. Don't serious people like to watch the harem after watching The Red Mansion? Who cares about solving the case? Your writing is so gross. Also, your protagonist's starting point is too low. Based on your advancement method, it would take hundreds of thousands of words to write about my Daiyu? Who do you want to see if you don't see Daiyu when you see Red Mansions? Just listen to me and cut it, no one will see it. The next book is about a man named Jia from the Jia family. He straightens up the family style and collects Daiyu. I like to see it.

I really can't get enough of it. It's rare to see a protagonist who is pursuing a career in the world of red mansions instead of just collecting women to have sex with. I remember there was a world where the protagonist, in order to collect twelve hairpins, forced himself to have a son of the Jia family and was adopted. I'm not afraid that all the princes in the harem will be born from the Jia family's daughters. Will there be trouble when they grow up?

I hope to write a novel Red Mansions, but unfortunately there is a little problem with the pacing. The most important thing for readers who watch Red Mansion is to watch Jin Chai, so there should not be too many original characters, and the identity arrangements must be relevant. Unless it's a pure harem stud story. In my opinion, the biggest highlight of this book is the angle of entry, directly killing the Xue family and the Wang family, and going straight to Yangzhou with a vigorous atmosphere. This is a really good beginning. The four major families, except for the useless Jia Shi, have merged two families at once. He also became a neighbor directly with Daiyu. It's really fun to think that as the enemy of the four major families, I can directly kill and maim the trash of these families. My friends, they jumped out from the same old house. They can kill Jia Zhen with real swords and guns, maim Baoyu, behead Xue Pan, and make Mrs. Jia angry to death. Friends, who wouldn't be excited! Use power to suppress others, spend three springs together as concubines, cultivate Daiyu, and use Chaifeng as a maid. A miracle is in sight. It's a pity that the author is a bit self-reliant on his writing skills and ideas, and has written quite good original characters. The four Zhu Su Yeyuan have written many exquisite short stories. Unfortunately, because the writing is quite good, it has directly diluted the content. Look at the little girl Daiyu, it is completely irrelevant. These original characters, the White Lotus Sect branch line, wouldn't it be good for you to open another fictional martial arts history? Why do you dilute yourself by writing in Red Mansions? The best original character design in Red Mansions that I have ever seen is also a princess. The purpose of her character is to save Shi Fengzao, the palace maid who was almost sentenced to death due to palace conspiracy, to praise herself and marry her together in the future, which means to increase her hair content. So the author has good writing skills, so it is definitely okay to eat this bowl of rice. However, for this book, it is recommended to enter Beijing quickly, spend less lines, and start a group to kill the dragon as soon as possible.

Dear book friends, don't be afraid, please feel free to continue reading. This is the 11th year since I have been writing novels on and off for so long. The first novel signed with Qidian. I cherish this opportunity very much and will not cut it off. Besides, I don't rely on novels to support my family. This book has been written for more than fifty days so far, although the data is overwhelming. But there are two chapters and more than 4,000 words a day, and I have never stopped updating, and I updated three chapters in three days. Even during the National Day holiday, I went back to my hometown to attend a wedding and was delayed for two days. During the period, I wrote on my mobile phone in the expressway service area and in the hotel, and the updates were not interrupted. Even if the data is not good when it is put on the shelves later. I will continue to write. I am still waiting to write a million dollars and reward myself with a silver alliance. So please feel free to read and thank you all.

I don't really like Daiyu as the heroine in The Red Mansion. She's too pretentious, and her health is not good. In ancient times, giving birth to a child meant going through hell. With Daiyu's body, she might kill two people. She's also always sentimental, which makes the heroine angry to death. I still think Baochai has the demeanor of a great woman.

The writing is good, but there are a few points 1. The pace is a bit slow 2. The protagonist seems to be too low-status now, and the Xue family has just a few showcases to make the protagonist tired to cope 3. The hole dug is too big, and now it seems that this is a world with sharp contradictions and great risks. Various rebel groups are already blatantly causing trouble. In such troubled times, how does the protagonist prepare to break into the Red Mansion Line? Imperial examination or recruitment?

First of all, I love reading Red Mansions, and this book was recommended in the last chapter of other Red Mansions. Youdao is to read the comments before reading the book. After browsing around the comment section, I think this book is a good book worth reading. Author, do you know what the people who read the Red Mansion article want to see? I want to see Jia Baoyu slapped in the face, I want to read the story about the harem, I want to see the collection of the twelve golden hairpins, I want to see the main book and the supplementary book about saving many women. Of course, it would be better if the process is a little edgy 😰 When I returned to the book and looked at the character cards, it was just a Daiyu and a Mandarin Duck, and I instantly lost the desire to read on, okay? You are in the Red Mansion but don't do anything about the Red Mansion. Based on the comments in the comment section, I believe that the author would be better off writing novels on other themes than in the pit of Red Mansions. Otherwise, if the character cards are removed, many people will try to read it. With the quality of the book mentioned in the comment area, many people will stay.

The writing is okay, but at this pace, I might have to read a hundred chapters once. .

Feng Yuan is a double plug, it takes courage to travel to him

The writing of this book is very different. There is no garden scene in the setting of Red Mansions. It would be nice to not be able to find a familiar substitute 😰 Readers who come here for the setting of Red Mansions may be very disappointed.