Bronze Dragon: Tyrant's Road to Conquest

It doesn't matter if the character image is not prominent, and the protagonist of the online article is not prominent (the hollow person is convenient for readers to substitute), but the supporting roles must be in place, especially the people around the protagonist. It is a pity that the author used all the pen and ink to write the whole story, and the focus of the characters is even more blurred. The plot is set up in a straight line, with no ups and downs, and no constant excitement. It's probably just one step at a time. And it's also following the path of the invincible flow, so hurry up to the sea of ​​stars. Anyway, it's all pushed sideways, push after push, and it's slow and slow. Half of each chapter has very unnecessary and repetitive explanations on the settings. This makes the plot more flat. Invincible style can be written as flat, but that is daily life, and you are still writing about King Tu's dominance... So why do everyone talk about it? The key points are not highlighted. The author picked a chapter for reading comprehension and summarized the main content of the chapter - xx things are like xx, have xxxx origins, and xxx has xxxx attitudes towards xx things. This is the focus of each chapter of yours - are you writing a novel or a setting book? There is a big difference between expository writing and novels. The description of the environment is tall, tall, gorgeous, gorgeous and gorgeous. It does not contribute to the atmosphere in any way. It is not impossible to write a setting book, but the problem is - most of the readers who can be attracted by Longwen are familiar with the DND setting, so why should the author bother with it? Either you have a particularly creative setting, or you can stop talking nonsense and tell a story. The author himself said that the subscription was cancelled, but before it was put on the shelves, some readers complained that it was unreasonable. The author himself did not listen to the advice, and then the results were not good, so he put it aside and wanted to let himself go, so he just added water to the water, right? Occasionally, a few readers say that water can be ignored, but if a lot of readers say water, you are the real water. It doesn't matter if you are straight when it comes to blind dates and making girlfriends, but there is a real problem with being straight when it comes to your career. I hope the author will not mess up, learn more, and write good works.

Long-winded, the image description is too profound, and the content is noisy. The plot is bland and boring

The plot is moving too slowly, let's wait until a hundred chapters later

Highly recommended, good book, worth reading

There are three requirements: Handsome! Handsome! Handsome! Don't show weird pictures (disgusted) Weird pictures will be cleared from time to time!

I feel like the protagonist is both a bitch and a bitch, accepting all the kindness from Shan Long, but he doesn't do any good deeds, it's all for his own rule. There is no use of the knowledge or thoughts of one's time traveler to transform the world, only barbaric conquest, and inconsistent words and deeds. It is better to start directly as a color dragon without so much moral baggage.

I previously found a book about dragons and started writing about Fruit Treasure Special Attack, which made me die. This book is about starting to write about Jackie Chan's Adventures... Isn't such a huge world view of DND not enough for the author? You want to write about childhood and the fairy tale world and the Lord of the Rings, even Harry Potter, but you think the data is not good and you have to find an excuse to cut it?

It's no longer amazing. From the latest chapter, we can see that the author doesn't know much about "productivity" and "production relations", which are never easy to achieve overnight. The legal area is the hardest hit area, and the liberation of productivity has not even been seen. Social relations are in a mess. Gu Jinlong's question can be answered by law or even by destroying his own ideals, but the author has no reason, not even an excuse to give the protagonist a legitimate execution. The author repeatedly emphasizes the law, but in the end he still has to rely on the paladin. This shows that the law is a decoration. There is no relevant legal expertise, and there are no legal personnel, no lawyers/judges/prosecutors/public prosecutors, not even courts, and no judicial system at all. "Law is the ruler's national will." The first knowledge point on the basis of law is this sentence. The author describes a lot of laws, but it is still the dragon that does things. This is the rule of man or dragon, not the rule of law. There are a lot of so-called public trials in the article, but they are based on social morality rather than laws and regulations. They are full of petty bourgeois characteristics, not even feudal characteristics, let alone idealism. In terms of productivity, there are obviously so many elves under my command, and there are even a few "trees of life". It is obvious that we can use a method to get the seeds of the tree of life and plant them, and then fertilize the land. Druids obviously have the ability to optimize specialized high-yielding grains, why can't they find ways to solidify this part of their abilities for large-scale production? After the protagonist established the country, there was no normal industrial construction at all, and no large number of "state-owned enterprise" jobs were created. The only state-owned industry was a port, but it was still handled by another dragon. The staff below were still the protagonist's subordinates, and there was no recruitment for social positions at all. In the pseudo-market economic environment created in the article, how does the domestic population support their lives? Homeowners have no future, and this has nothing to do with whether they cultivate intensively or use high-tech seeds. In spite of having a large amount of combat power, the protagonist actually prioritizes military expansion. Modern soldiers are out of production. Even if they grow and harvest by themselves, they are provided by fast-growing vegetables. Fast-growing vegetables are not natural products. These require national taxes to support them. There is no mature industry in the country, and even steel needs to be imported. Without a large amount of tax revenue, what can be used to support such a huge war machine? The author has not yet explained what exactly the dragon eats to survive. The protagonist has a large number of powerful units. If it is based on the low production level in the article, I doubt why it has not starved to death. How much energy and calories can fruits and vegetables provide to be comparable to meat? In the absence of artificial breeding and optimization of meat-producing species, and the large number of high-maintenance units produced without natural elimination, how does the protagonist maintain it? In the article, it appears a lot that the protagonist cares about his blood relatives, but most things rely on blood relatives to produce, so the resources provided in the early stage are not care, but investment in production equipment, which does not count as humanism. The author seems to have forgotten that the protagonist's parents are not dead yet. He talks about caring here, but completely forgets about his parents there. It is impossible for dragons to take over, but he doesn't even ask where he lives and then visit, and he doesn't even ask his siblings. Is this really a metal dragon that pays attention to blood relationships? It would be better to let your parents die in battle, at least it would give you a reason.

I think the most serious thing is that the author can't distinguish the priorities. Let's look at the protagonist Long, look at the title of the book, and then look at the latest chapter. Recently, he has completely become a nanny. The so-called prince and princess story, one reviewer said it well. For the so-called epic feeling of a prince meeting a princess and saving the world, he completely gave up logic and IQ, and the protagonist became a nanny.

I originally thought the real book was pretty good, with a big world view. Although the plot developed a bit slowly, it was understandable. But I was ready to give up. In this novel world that is full of parallel imports, this book is a good one. It took me a few days to catch up with it all, and it can be said to be the end. The reason for abandoning the book was my own. I originally came here for the monogamy of the metal dragon. Maybe you think it doesn't matter, but I feel a little uncomfortable in my heart. Although it is a novel, who reads a novel and doesn't bring themselves into it? Thinking about yourself as a polygamist, but from another perspective, like Janna, a matriarchal society, polyandry, how does it feel? Share your wife with another man? I can't accept it. I'm leaving, I hope you will write higher later.

I'm willing to pay for this book because of Chapter 71. "If such a child appears in my country, then it is my fault." It made me burst into tears. The author describes an ideal country. At least it can make people angry and yearning for it. What you wrote next makes me feel like this one is like a shit basin with a gold rim. Maybe the words were a bit vulgar. But the gap is too big.

Let's take care of it for a while first, I've been a little bit addicted recently. Finally, I would like to remind the author that I am here to read Long's story, not to see the nanny Long's SB mission and honor when he meets the princess for the so-called prince. Author, you must remember that your protagonist is a dragon. In the future, you want to establish a dragon kingdom with a multi-dimensional empire of absolute order. This is the result.

Tweeting orders is not a strange thing in the West. Anyone who has played a strategy game like Crusader Kings knows that even in the Tang and Song Dynasties, most feudal lords in the West followed the system of give birth. For example, the famous Frankish Empire was divided because of give birth. For example, the king often forces the big lords to use equal inheritance in order to prevent the nobles below from getting bigger. Obviously the author's political foundation needs to be strengthened

In the early days, the number of your ancestral dragons was already getting out of control. The golden dragons, the protagonist and his family, and the current red dragons all feel like they are on the verge of ruin. They are not as strong as I said before. In the later stages of your book, it is about to collapse again...

The author has finally returned to writing about dragons. That's how it should be. We followed the author because of his Titans and Dragon King, but as a result, he wrote about cultivating immortals. Come on, the level of expectations is higher than before.

I have read Chapter 377. I will summarize some comments and describe my feelings now: 1. After beating Blue Dragon, there is no outstanding main plot. To advance the plot, the protagonist just wanders here and there. 2 The characters are getting thinner and thinner. The protagonist becomes more and more like a P Club player who posts pictures, and the supporting characters who interact with the protagonist become more and more like NPCs or tool people (except for the heroine Su Hailun, but she is basically invisible), and they can be directly divided into labeled friendly/malicious NPCs. 3 From the perspective of p club players farming and pushing pictures, the protagonist's actions are also very careless, and domestic and foreign affairs are all based on his own preferences. It's not like running a country, but more like the protagonist returning to the country whenever he remembers. The author did not write enough about the background of the world, and did not vividly describe the main contradictions of society, so he began to force reforms. The method was to use tool-man paladins to purge and then start to work as hand-off shopkeepers; or to capture tool-man devils and start forcing them to draft laws. It does not reflect the wisdom of farming, but more like a player who has turned on the console and does whatever he wants. There are several book friends downstairs who have summarized this part (farming, productivity, law, etc.) Very well. 4 There are still some things that make me feel more and more uncomfortable the more I read it. Of course, I will just add this one: The author writes that now he is getting more and more involved with the protagonist. He is the "noble ancestral dragon". The other characters are all miserable short-lived species (and they are also background versions of the protagonist). They only need to enjoy the favor of the protagonist (ordinary people in the protagonist's country) or serve as tools for the protagonist (paladins) or be smart villains (hanged nobles) and wait for the protagonist to explode with gold coins (other human kingdoms). I felt even more strongly when I saw the protagonist's attitude toward the kingdom that was plagued by insects in Chapter 377. 5 As a supplement to the previous point, it is acceptable to accept that the protagonist is a villain, a five-color dragon wearing a metal dragon skin is also acceptable, but if all the supporting characters are written as background NPC tool men to set off the protagonist, then this novel is just a picture pushed by P Club players-it is better to push the picture after turning on the console. I also followed the novel all the way from the beginning, but after the blue dragon was finished, the rest of the plot began to go downhill. To sum up, the problems include: the main plot is not prominent; the characters are getting thinner and thinner; the farming plot is sloppy, reflecting the author's lack of understanding of social development, etc. There are not many good-looking dragon novels, and most of them include unfinished eunuchs (Wings of Frost, Green Dragon's Nest, etc.). I still hope that the subsequent descriptions in this book will be more detailed. Give it a few days and see if you can continue watching it.

There is some doubt. It is repeatedly shown in the article that the blood of the Star God is almost useless to the protagonist in the legendary stage. So why does the demon god who is countless times more powerful than the current protagonist still covet the blood of the Star God?

Externally, I am submissive, but internally, I am aggressive. The protagonist has no legal system at all and relies entirely on the Holy Warriors. This is even worse than the rule of man in our country's feudal society. And the protagonist simply ignores the development of productivity? Developing production relations without developing productivity will ultimately be just a castle in the air. And I really can't stand it when I see the five-color dragons who sacrificed their loyalty being made into something like undead and then deceived them into saying that they can rest in peace after death. The five-color dragon has given its life to you, but you can't let the five-color dragon rest in peace after death. The extreme human empire next door will respect the sacrifices and corpses of such loyalists. If the soul returns to the Golden Throne, the soul returns to the Golden Throne. It turns out that the protagonist will not even let go of the soul of the loyalist. As long as you are Warhammer 40k, I can tolerate it, but you are not Warhammer 40k.

I really don't understand why writing dragon articles always has to be related to people, and why do you always like to wipe people's butts? Didn't you grow on your own? Can't write without people? It's really smelly and long.

I hope this is a new high-quality dragon novel

It is far different from the Black Dragon Codex. This dragon gives people the feeling of being a dragon. There is no sense of majesty or coldness at all like a dragon emperor. If you want to write about order, it should be cold and rational.

I started reading Titans and am barely considered an old book friend, but this novel feels extremely uncomfortable. It can be seen that the author has made no progress in so many years and can even be said to have regressed. The author has wrapped this book full of arrogance with the skin of a dragon. Through this book, he wrote some of the author's extreme thoughts, which can be regarded as a metaphor for others. It can even be seen that the author has not had a mature outlook on life for so many years, which is really disappointing.

It was fine in the beginning, but in the middle, she became a nanny. Everything didn't matter. The so-called punishment for stealing his things was even more funny.

Why did the eunuch surrender now? He was invincible at the beginning.

Brainless time traveler

There is only a plot of continuous conquest, with little promotion of civilization development. The war is written very briefly, which can only be said to be a dragon's time travel novel.

I always feel that the author has pushed the plot too fast, and some plots have been taken over in one go, from conquering the world to splitting the abyss, and some early characters have never appeared, such as Uldia, White Blade, the silver dragon, the devil, the spiny dragon, the legendary six-armed snake demon, etc.

Is the battle between gods and epics a bit broken?

After reading about two hundred chapters, it's almost done, and then it's dabian

I don't know the plot of Jackie Chan's world, and I'm no different from the natives. I'm just a time traveler. Selling dog meat on sheep's heads is in name only.