There's Definitely Something Wrong with This Sailing Adventure Game

Don't you think there's a problem? I feel like someone must have copied the two of you.

The subject matter is good and the writing is okay, but some issues could be changed for the better. For example, if the protagonist kills the black boss, he doesn't get any money? He was obviously extremely poor, not to mention having none. He always had cash from loan sharks and plenty of lockboxes. The protagonist's profession is well-proclaimed, but in fact, any hell character will turn into a loser in an instant. A hell nemesis is so useless among the same level. Instead of being killed by one, all the characters who appear will kill the protagonist. What is the meaning of writing this? Author, what do you think? Later growth is not the reason. I hope I can write better and better.

Just write less about the reality. People who don't know may think you traveled through time in 2013.

I feel that the protagonist's profession, Ghost Rider, is a waste. It is written at the beginning that it is a rare and awesome profession that cannot be defeated by the mobs. Only by using time retrieval can I clear the level and restrain the advantageous dungeon. The protagonist's own strength conflicts with the time retrieval. If I want to highlight the theme of time retrieval, it is better to directly give the protagonist a career similar to an adventurer. Constantly seeking death and time retrieval, I have to give the protagonist a high-level profession at the beginning. What I am doing now is not suppressing and weakening the protagonist's strength. It is blossoming at both ends and focusing on the head and the tail.

This debt plot is really difficult to pull off

The profession specializes in dealing with hellish creatures. As a result, even level 8.9 Creatures can be instantly killed, so how can I get a boost?

The reality part is really rubbish, I'll tell you the truth, my IQ is worrying

The protagonist is a real loser. He is useless. He is useless except for his talent. Even the mobs may not be able to beat him, let alone the same level. Almost anyone can abuse the protagonist. I have never seen such a loser.

You, the author, wrote some things later, but they don't have the feeling of being in control of the overall situation as the protagonist did earlier. I feel like some of the protagonists in the later chapters have become exhausted. It's just this kind of feeling, it's weird.

It's really hard to collapse, don't write about reality Usury can eliminate excessive debts through legal channels, and directly hitting people violates the law Regular debts can be repaid through negotiation and asset mortgage.

Now I have a question? Ask the crow if you can't backtrack? The stuck bug keeps asking a lot of questions 🙂

Killing the black boss is really not an ordinary poison. Possessed the gang boss, stabbed his subordinates, broadcast live about his experiences in gangs, and then committed suicide. It's really poisonous. Suggested changes: Possess a subordinate of a black boss who was bullied by his own people, stabbed the black boss, and then said live broadcast that he was very angry, and then stabbed the black boss. It is more reasonable to go into the crime boss's crimes and evidence before jumping off the building.

The last time I was speechless was the last time. Please read this book with caution.

A bunch of garbage. The writing in the game is okay, but the writing in reality is too bloody. At this time, there are still people who write such nonsense, which is also a bad criticism.

Wash your face with sea water, the protagonist's face is so skinny

Why is the Ghost Rider so weak in the dungeon? Judging from the trap monster's attitude towards Blade Boy, why don't you pull the Immortal Brother to complete the dungeon?

Start with time talent! ! Let's see how long the author can last!

It feels like a familiar path, I feel like I've seen something similar a few years ago. However, most of the routines nowadays are repetitive. It feels good. Come on, the author. +1 For further reading.

I have read Chapter 35 so far. I have a question for the author. How is combat power reflected? If there were a Ghost Rider and a pig-footed Ghost Rider, which one would be stronger? Are the upgrades, attribute increases, and characteristics of the same profession the same? If they are the same, how to tell who is stronger and who is weaker? Rely on equipment? If it's different, why wasn't it explained clearly? Also, when I saw it, I saw the attributes of the pig's feet. The other character attributes were not written. Anyway, I didn't see them. So why did you write the attributes of the pig's feet? There seems to be no attribute point allocation for upgrading There is also Pig's Feet. When I saw the training of the savages, I said that it was useless for my ordinary training. It seemed that those professional skills had no levels. If they were to fight against each other with the same profession and the same skills, how to judge who is stronger? So this is an upgrade game? Whoever has a higher level is more powerful? Can you win with equipment at the same level? There is also a question about characteristics, skills, and professions. Can they be upgraded? This will be different from other people's professions If you, the author, want to use the sequence of the Lord of Mysteries, is it better to fix the profession template unchanged, or not to write specific data? The important thing is to write it, and I haven't seen where to explain the difference in attributes clearly, so. . . . I'm sleepy, I'm going to sleep, I won't write anymore, I'll look at it later

Why must we abandon our wives and children and go to sea?

I want to see big ships and huge cannons. Do you have any recommendations?

After reading some, when I saw the first copy, I thought of a sentence, there must be antidote herbs near poisonous weeds! ! ! !

When will the author update? It was the author who wrote about King Arthur cards. Very much looking forward to the next plot. I hope the author will write more. Can the author give an accurate time? It's time for an update.

Update time description. Guaranteed two chapters per day. One chapter around 8:30 in the morning, and the second chapter around 17:00 in the afternoon. The new book Seedling hopes everyone will support it. Please read! It is very important to read new books. The author thanks all the book friends! !