Practice a Low-Level Profession Until You Become an Immortal and Call Yourself an Ancestor

After all, a low-level actor is a low-level actor. You still want to become an immortal and claim to be an ancestor. It's just a fantasy of an actor on the verge of death.

I took a look, it's okay, but it's better to change the introduction, after all, what you wrote in the introduction It's not that your introduction is bad, it's that your introduction is too similar to a brainless fast-food article or a studio article, but your writing style is obviously different from these. It is difficult for your introduction to attract readers of your novels, and novels of your type basically have to have 70 or 100 chapters before they become popular. I just saw that you were halfway through writing, and you said that you read less. Now look at it and you will say that it has been recommended for the fantasy genre. If the subject matter is not particularly eye-catching and a particularly novel idea, you basically have to wait for a certain period of time before the platform will provide resources. Now that you have survived, I will give you some advice to find your own pace. Save two copies a day in advance. I will write them today and send them out tomorrow. Can I post them this way? Water should not be too watery as it will easily lose readers. The progress of the plot must be advanced every day, and at least people must see what you are doing. Come on, I am very optimistic about you.

Let's quickly return to the topic of being an actor and carefully polish the characteristics of an actor. Don't just learn about martial arts and martial arts in a whole day.

I feel that the protagonist's current cultivation level is not enough to play a real immortal like Lu Dongbin. Now he has the strength to play the kind of Fahai who is about the same. Don't push it too high. The author should learn more about some mythological systems. I think that

I hope the author will find out the ninth-rate professions clearly and don't insist on calling a certain profession a ninth-rate profession just because of some skills.

After reading Chapter 51, I feel pretty good so far. But actually I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. Maybe I am too picky. Now I look at the three views and world background first when reading books. The three views are not very different, and the world background is logical. Nowadays, many authors want to design a tragic and passionate background for the protagonist. As a result, the world background they designed seems to be in a very miserable state at first glance. Personally, I feel that this is actually a bit discouraging. To be specific, it is these novels. Once you understand a little bit about the background of the world in the first few chapters, you will feel that if this dynasty is not destroyed, it will not be enough for the people to be angry. (Mainly ancient background). Now that I think about it, I feel like this kind of novel used too much force in the early stages and overly aroused emotions. There have been several novels of this kind that I could not read after reading only the first two or three chapters. Goldfinger is interesting, but the background dissuades it. In other words, the early background development persuaded people to retreat.

Then the ninth level cannot create the world? Pangu?

I finished reading it in one go. The old bookworm said that it is a masterpiece. It has the same feeling as when I watched Yakuza. It has a few flaws. One is the experience data at the beginning. The other is that there is no reason not to unlock the sculptor when I get into sculpting. It feels a bit like forcibly locking the three professions in the introduction. I also know that everything is covered. There are so many professions that can be unlocked that I can't write them down. How about adding a setting later to determine how many professions have been unlocked? When the slots are full, you have to fill up a certain profession before you can continue to unlock new ones. Let's see how things work out later. Keep this level up and I'll definitely order all of them when they're on the shelves. Come on 🙂

To be honest, if the book doesn't involve the real world, it would still be good. After reading the latest chapter, I felt that the writing was a bit lost. It was too early to dig into the hole. It touches on all kinds of genres. It seems a bit messy and not smooth to read.

Author, you have to find a way to gain some popularity. Otherwise you will only be able to earn perfect attendance if this continues. Your book is okay. At least ensure it is above the standard line. There's nothing poisonous about it either.

Looking at the introduction, I get the feeling of studio flow.

I haven't read the content yet, but the introduction reminded me of Wang Zhenqiu in Under One Person

The storyline is too tight, changes too quickly, and doesn't develop enough. The level of martial arts improves too fast, and it is estimated that it will collapse later.

That brother is right. It is indeed possible. The introduction is indeed not good. You cannot say that grass jelly is good. The food and grass are good.

The writing is okay, but should I change the title to a more suitable one 😎 (personal thoughts for reference)

Urgent, urgent, urgent

Very well written. Update quickly😌😌