Palace-Level Achievements, to Be Humble or Not to Be Humble?

The beginning is very well written. But it's not balanced. Some achievements are of no use at all. And there is a problem with the level. Since cheating, don't be afraid of imbalance. For example, the power of the mountain army. You can consider upgrading later. And what about one penny a week? Isn't this nonsense? At least one tael of silver. You have a glass of water every day. Every bun is better than him.

For example, if you forcefully torture the owner, you will definitely look distorted. While abusing the protagonist, it also gives the protagonist a reputation for being abused and finds an excuse to advance the plot. For example, in the first few chapters, the protagonist got the ability to mask his aura, and he could have just walked away. But instead of leaving, the protagonist was left to be tortured, and the protagonist grew up. When I went to Cao's house and saw Foxtail, I had doubts in my heart, but ended up telling him the truth. As a result, I was morally abused and became notorious as the "son of the monster". The government official was put in jail. He could have left early, but he had to be tortured inside. His reputation was to wait for the arrester to come back. If the weeds are not removed, someone will be let go, someone will be assassinated, etc. Although the above are all links that advance the plot, I found it very depressing. Objective comment: The plot has abrupt twists and turns, and character creation will only use the suffering of the protagonist to describe other characters. I just want to say that not everyone is an idiot. The complexity of human nature is not only reflected in greed, anger, and ignorance, but also in people who follow the trend and invest early. Hope to grow!

There's really nothing poisonous about it, and the plot is okay. I just feel so uncomfortable when I look at it@_@Maybe it's my own fault

How can I put it, the writing, style, and imagination are all good, but the rhythm of the writing and the logic of the plot are a bit confusing, and I can't watch it anymore. A paragraph has a beginning and no end, and it jumps suddenly, and I think of where it is. Hope it improves. It is quite difficult to talk about authors. Some of the books I have read are full of writing styles and plots, but no one reads them. In the past, if you were good at these things, you would be popular, but now it is hard to say. Maybe it is my reading problem.

I've finished reading it, and the beginning is pretty good...

How can I put it... Very strange. It looks like the writing is good, but when I read it, it feels awkward and weird.

Author, please practice your writing. The twist is too abrupt and the plot is so fragmented. After killing the tiger at the beginning, you will get the achievement, and then you will directly switch to guard against your parents. What about the middle? Do you have the inheritance to write the plot of Xiehu?

Why did I feel a little confused after killing the weasel?

The plot was written too bluntly, and since the death of the two weasels, it was completely intentional to create hatred for the protagonist. This person has a feud with the protagonist but cannot defeat the protagonist, then his boss comes forward, the boss is killed, and then the boss's family comes forward. Anyway, how to target the protagonist, one link after another, the network of human relationships is very complicated. According to what the author writes, you may kill a slave and eventually offend the emperor. I have thought about the plot line, killing the slave - offending the slave owner - offending the slave owner's friend - corrupt official - corrupt boss - prime minister - emperor

The tiger ate the protagonist's parents, the tiger was killed by the protagonist, and the protagonist adopted the tiger's child? How will this tiger get along with the protagonist if there are more scenes in the future? Thinking deeply, this little tiger will be criticized no matter how he behaves. It would be better to just kill him.

The subject matter is very attractive, but the content is awkward to read. The weasel has been lurking for ten years, and catching the head is not a serious matter? ? ? Then the weasel casually killed dozens more agents? ? ? Funny?

The plot is a bit messy, the transitions are too fast, and have no connection with the previous plot. It's like writing whatever comes to mind. Other than that it was ok.

The beginning is okay, but the rest is too messy...

The beginning of the plot is really good, from the spirit hiding its identity to the counter-attack, and the ending is not forgotten at the end, leaving clues for the subsequent plot. However, when the Yamen plot begins to go wrong, the combat power is high and low, the skills are sometimes strong and sometimes weak, and it jumps out a lot. Before the plot line is explained, a branch plot is suddenly added, which is more confusing to watch. I hope the author can continue to maintain his original intention and be patient.

If you put it on the shelves and use the word count of achievement water, you will definitely die.

After seeing the introduction, I just want to ask when I will avenge my parents. Let me read that chapter.

The author still needs to look at the continuity of the master's plot, transitions, and character design. The continuity is too low, come on

What can I say, the introduction attracted me

I really put some thought into not making the protagonist invincible.

The writing is okay, but it just feels so awkward, and I don't know why. Maybe it's my own fault.

This book is too rough I suggest the author to learn from the works of great masters with good results Copy the writing ideas and worldview structure Slowly improve yourself The writing is okay, but the storytelling skills are lacking

Let me tell you something, it was the first time I saw a protagonist with the same last name as me.

The writing style is too rough. Brother, you should learn to write novels first. The idea is good, but the writing style is really unbearable.