Controlling Beasts Starts with Predicting the Future

The character's perspective flashes back and forth too frequently, and the character's perspective switches without any warning. It took me a long time to realize that the perspective had changed. If it were a short story, it would be okay, but a novel would be too tiring for readers to read!

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I didn't understand the last sentence of the introduction: Do you believe me when I say that a master said that I am? How to segment this sentence? What does it mean?

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I feel that the writing is a bit messy (), and there is no simple introduction to the protagonist and family. Those who are impatient in the early stage will leave in the first few chapters.

The perspective switches too frequently and without warning, often jumping from one character to another in response to a specific word. This method must at least supplement the changes in time and scene. The novel is not an animation, and there is no picture supplement. Directly and frequently switching perspectives seem to come up one after another. There are a lot of psychological and verbal descriptions that do not play any role. Just like the fat bird, in the end it only functions as Jiang Qi's favor. In the middle, there are a lot of psychological and verbal descriptions about abandoned thoughts that just get lost in the end, which seems a bit anticlimactic. There are also details that I feel are problematic. Why can't the two-tailed cat kidnap the heroine and not just bite her to death? The same is true for the fat bird in front. I feel that many places focus on the plot but ignore rationality. Maybe the perspective switching is too confusing and I overlooked some descriptions, but it feels a bit pretentious.