Doupo: I Made Zhang Daxian Cry in the Chat Group

To be honest, this book is pretty good among Dou Po fans. Even the chat group chat is too easy to write down. I also read two chapters every morning to catch up on the update. Let's talk about the armor world. When writing about the world, you say it's not very expressive, but the setting is very outrageous. The emperor is the master of the bright world of heaven, and Shura can travel through time and space. These don't seem to be much better than the Dou Emperor. However, the current description in the play is that the emperor's armor does not increase the protagonist's performance much. These are points that can easily cause us to fight against each other. Therefore, if you want this book to be long-lasting, I suggest that you discuss it with all-purpose book friends when writing the combat settings. The most difficult thing about group streaming is balancing the combat power in different worlds. If you join different types of worlds, it will be even more difficult. This book currently has three elements: fantasy, animation, and special photography. I hope the author's diploma can withstand it, and I wish this book can last for a long time. The student party also has no money left, so it can only give me a chicken leg as a comic version of the childhood goddess Xun'er.

Hey hey hey hey.

The first three chapters, pouring poison 1. The family is not a sect, the servants are just servants, and there is no such thing as a disciple. 2. Both of Pig's Feet's parents died, how did they grow up? A person who grew up relying on the financial support of the tribe is worse than a shabby house in the eyes of pig's feet. 3. Pig's feet are afraid of persecution, not to mention that the Xiao family is not the kind of family that commits suicide. As a person without a father and mother, in the eyes of others, if you marry a daughter and have children, you basically can't run away, because if you are given resources, family affection, and a family, you can run away. I won't tell you what kind of person you are. 4. What is the level of the sixth level of Dou Zhi Qi? Do you have no idea when writing fan fiction? The child of the elder Xiao is only in the eighth stage of adulthood. In the eyes of others, you are completely the elite of the family, and you are still a handyman. 5. Where does the handyman have a blood relationship? You are a descendant of the Xiao family and have a blood relationship. 6. Hiding one's cultivation level, I don't understand. It's normal for high-level people to hide their cultivation level from low-level ones. But for a lone star of evil, who wants nothing, how can he hide his cultivation level? Where does the technique come from? And let the entire Xiao family not see it? Let's just say they are all hidden skills above the earth level. 7. This additional issue is about the heroine. I don't think it's a big problem for Xiao Yan. There is no need to force his wife. Moreover, Xiao Yan was able to get Xiao Xun'er by relying on traditional Chinese medicine skills in his previous life. Do you know how? The most important thing is that there are too many high-quality women in the competition (emphasis added), ranging from the one in the auction house to the little princess Taixu Gulong, or even the whole world. There are dozens or nearly a hundred high-quality single women for you to choose from, but you have to grab someone else's scheduled wife. As for why I complain, it's just like the author complaining about cheating in chat groups. I've seen it too many times and I'm instinctively disgusted by everything I see. Let me make it clear that I complained about the author's writing arrangements, but not about the author's writing level. The author's smoothness and writing style are quite good. This is the reason why I can resist the third chapter.

The writing was originally quite good, but unfortunately Xun'er and Xiao Yan's writing was a mess, and the group leader also deliberately belittled it.

The plot is awkward and foot-picking The Xiao family is a family, not a sect, so where do the handyman disciples come from?

A Douluo god can be beaten to death by a hidden weapon. You are here to compete with a Douluo named Douluo. The ultimate Douluo cannot lift a hundred and eighty thousand kilograms of floor tiles. Dai Mubai and Zhu Zhuqing use the Netherworld White Tiger Titled Douluo to kill only a few thousand soldiers before losing their soul power. Your novel's combat effectiveness has collapsed.

Even if you write Xiao Yan like this, you won't be afraid of Tudou looking for you.

Author, your latest chapter is outrageous if you don't kill her. You lust after the heroine and provoke the protagonist. The Seven Monsters were written so disgustingly at the beginning, but then they were gently put down at the end? This is not how the plot is promoted.

You designed such a plot. If there is a whole scene where the little doctor forgives Yun Yun and Nalan Yanran, and then is even taken away by the protagonist, I will feel very disgusting.

Um, is the ninth level of Dou Qi very powerful at the age of 15? Have you been sucked into Dou Qi by someone else? 😰🥵

I read so many fan fictions mostly featuring women from the past of the protagonists. Alas, I used to read them which were interesting, but now I read them too much and it's as disgusting as breaking my shoes. To put it bluntly, it is poisonous.

I don't know how this rhythm will come back. It's so abrupt. I feel like I'm not far away from it.

I haven't read it. I've seen a lot of stories about fandoms fighting against each other, and those trying to steal the protagonist's wife and the protagonist's opportunity. Forget it. They even openly ridicule the protagonist at every turn, as if he's not a human being if he does something, and he can't be beaten to death. This way of writing is really inhumane. It's true that anyone with more beautiful women can pursue them. But targeting people everywhere is disgusting.

Little Doctor

You write a fanfic. And a family. As for trying to steal the protagonist's wife? It's really numb.

When you see Saving Xian'er, it's understandable that you suppress it first and then advance it, but if you write about six Dou Zong and six Dou Emperor, and the protagonist has one Dou King and directly uses Wushuang Yi Dao and a child, why do you have to lower the level in the beginning? Dou Wang is a bucket, Dou Huang is ten big buckets, and Dou Zong is a hundred big buckets. This is outrageous if it doesn't explode. How can the Gama Empire have such a big face in digging up the ancient river? Can call six Dou Zong

The first three chapters are acceptable, but the fourth chapter is straight up poisonous

It's always like this, besides taking in girls, you still take in girls. The greatest desire should not be superpower, immortality, control over all things, a higher power.

I thought it was Zhang Daxian, but it turns out he looks like the Tang Shenwang.