Era, Taking the Whole Family to Counterattack

"Rebirth 1999: Awakening of the Prodigy System at the Beginning" Chapter 1: Is he really a genius? Chapter 2: Dad, Mom, go to Beijing to buy a house ... Chapter 30: Nani? Is the house rented? Chapter 31: Opening up

This is a book about women's videos, with mischievous parents, various family conflicts, and various partialities.

The time-travel novels are full of bullshit stories about parents who have trouble with family matters! What did you do when you traveled through time? !

The frame is pretty good, but the text is very sloppy and verbose.

After reading the author's article, it can be seen that the author worked very hard to describe that special era in the past, but it seemed very procrastinating and long-winded. Why? I thought about it for a while, and what he said may be wrong. Please don't mind. The author describes too much about the inner drama of non-protagonists, which pulls the reader's subconscious too much. Moreover, the more he describes the surroundings, the less sense of rhythm appears. Everyone will feel that the reading is a bit confusing, the focus is not highlighted, it is not interesting enough, and it is too wordy. It is recommended that the author write before writing the article, and then describe the unnecessary details in one sentence, and delete unnecessary psychological descriptions of the characters. Your vision should all serve the protagonist. The protagonist is the most critical line from beginning to end!

All I ask is that I don't want to be a saint.

This novel is a piece of water,,,

The writing quality is there and the pacing is just okay. Since there are disgusting people, I hope the counterattack will be sharp.

Scholarships existed in the 1990s, and it was true that they were set up by the boss of Fat Ka, but they stopped after two or three years.

Only 220,000 words are left for me to recommend! Accepted