Red Devil Dynasty

What the hell is this writing? It always says that the protagonist is young, but never mentions his age. Even on his birthday, he deliberately doesn't mention the protagonist's age. The author intentionally poisoned

First: The age of the protagonist has always been unknown. We only know that he is in the age group of 91 or 92. Second: What is the use of the system? ? After watching it for a long time, I didn't see what the system does. Third: The protagonist's business investment suddenly appeared. A minor made money to start a company? How do you manage and develop when you still have to train and compete? Even if you want to dig a hole, you should at least wait until you are an adult Fourth: The description of the game where the protagonist does not play is really annoying. I skipped through it. Basically, it is only 3-5 chapters, and then the protagonist comes and ends in 1-2 chapters. After reading about 30 chapters, I really couldn't accept it anymore, so I left now.

After looking at it during the day, I don't know what the system looks like. What about the protagonist's parameters? Is this the author's first time writing a novel?

It is normal to write more than ten or twenty chapters for a game, and you have to have a B! Abandoned

Let's just assume that the protagonist was born in 1988. As for investing in high-tech and contributing to the development of science and technology, every time I see these, I think of financial giants. It's boring to be so strong that you look like a saint. If you don't have enough realm, there's nothing you can do about it.

After Yang Guang, people tended to avoid the word "Yang" in their names, just like after Qin Hui, people tended to avoid the word "" in their names.

This is really boring to write. . . . . . . No ups and downs at all.

The book at the end of May can be said to have started in June. It is now September 21 and has more than 200,000 words. Does that mean 70,000 figures per month and 2,000 updates per day?

New book, please collect it, vote for it, and support me in any way!

I really want to know how so many protagonists can play in the English Football League without labor certificates. Continental Europe only needs to have non-European quotas and it still makes sense. Don't talk about the genius clause.

Stop watching if you join the national team! The men's national football team is a big dye vat! Even the king of football becomes bad! It's so magical and unrealistic that I can't imagine not being able to feel immersed! People's hearts are good but they are not practical

How many words did the author make the website short?

Like this book very much. By the way, I would like to use Guibao's place to advertise. The new book "Standing in Style and Sports Begins from the Variety Show Draft" at the same time is also a book about football culture and sports. I hope everyone can take a look.

There are a lot of problems. Let's talk about the things that are easy to change: there are too many psychological descriptions and explanations interspersed at the beginning, which makes it impossible to guarantee the smoothest development of the scene. Let's put it this way, it reads like you are driving a supercar, but driving The author has been stepping on the accelerator and then on the brake Secondly, it is important for the author to distinguish between objective and subjective, and it is best to balance the descriptive position, otherwise there will be great controversy. No matter how unsightly some books contain private goods, they are only expressed through the tone of the characters.

Water must have a B! Each game requires several chapters! Fighting Arsenal, I wrote twenty chapters! It really makes people speechless! 👎👎👎

After watching it for half an hour, the game was written too slowly, as if it was broadcast on the radio. The only thing I remember is that the author did not let Ronaldo score. It seemed that he was eager to keep Ronaldo clean.