
Pokémon: Start with a Pokémon Ranch
宝可梦:开局一座精灵牧场
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- Completed
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- 838k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The Elf Canteen is open!
Quoting from classics, give me a follow-up reading~! (Roaring loudly)
I think I should go see a doctor. My first reaction when I saw the title of the book was to start with an elven graveyard.
To be honest, I don't really like the transformation of the green caterpillar into Rayquaza. I feel like this is a fantasy pet novel, not an elf novel.
Exist? Let's have some gourmet design. The author is a gourmet fool, and he has to rely on everyone to save him 😭
It seems okay so far, but can we not call the evolved form Pidgeot? Since I was a child, most of them were Pidgeots. The official translation of the bullshit Pokémon knows nothing about it.
Should there be a more powerful Pokémon looking after the house? Now that your poaching gang has been organized, it makes sense to hire a bodyguard for the ranch, right?
Sorry, it looks like a cemetery
The green caterpillar that can connect the power grid should be considered a joke, right? The cause was a Pokémon battle video by AG, the owner of Bip. Com. At the end, the Green Caterpillar used the genetic skill Grid to defeat Rayquaza, who was still alive. According to the website's records, that was the Green Caterpillar's only defeat record that year. It's AG's Rayquaza.
Ranch style Pokémon! 😍 It really pokes fun at me. I like to read some Ranch Lord Farming-style Pokémon novels
If the green caterpillar really evolves into Rayquaza, I hope it will be a third-level god or a second-level god. Don't raise it too high. The ages of other Rayquazas are calculated in billions of years. If the green caterpillars you cultivated in two or three years evolve and are stronger than him, not only Rayquaza but all the mythical beasts will have their abilities crushed to the bottom.
Since the IQ of elves is good, why are they always called by their species name instead of their name? Author you can be the exception in all elvish literature. Only in this way can the world view be more perfect
Is pasture popular again now? Is there anyone out there who wants to go to a cemetery and send bells to the elves (dog heads)?
I just saw a poster saying that the author's article was off-topic at the end. I think so too, especially the plot at the end. I hope the author will reorganize the outline better. I feel that the later things are less amazing than the earlier ones. First of all, what I hope to see is daily life, but how can I put it, it feels like it is written about daily life, but it doesn't feel like it, it is too rigid and stereotyped. Secondly, I hope that ordinary elves will not be too transformed into mythical beasts. They can have some characteristics of mythical beasts, but they will not turn into mythical beasts in the end. Again, what is the reward after capturing the mythical beast? Is it going to be a game about collecting mythical beasts in the game? You can be friends with mythical beasts (but with less drama), but it's still hard to accept subduing them. I hated the episode where Suicune was caught in a net during the trip. I almost felt like vomiting when I saw that episode. Here again, hey, it's a minefield to be trampled like crazy😫 Finally, I hope the farm doesn't have too many other factors. The author has been filling the farm with things, including fish ponds, gyms, decoration companies, and convenience stores (this one is okay) , after all, it is for elves), barbecue house (I heard that it is going to be opened in the town, the farm only needs enough money, why do you want to expand the business territory crazily), it feels a bit full, the big tree of green caterpillars and a group of green caterpillars (thinking about it makes my scalp numb, there are too many) The more I look at the back, the more boring I feel. Although it is difficult to write daily articles about ranching, because the subject matter is relatively new and the Chinese farm farming genes are deeply rooted, the audience is still good. I hope the author can return this book to a pastoral nature rather than a commercial and adventurous one. You can try to pay more attention to the relationship between people and Pokémon in the ranch, rather than the relationship between the protagonist and other characters. I hope that most of the elves in the ranch can be created with distinctive character traits, so that people can know the character of this elf when they think of it (it is a bit difficult, I hope the author will work hard), instead of simple story superposition and fast pace. In excellent elf writing, the character creation of the elf is really important. The above is my feeling as a reader after reading more than 200 chapters. I hope the author can write better and better.
Just right, hehe
It is a little less restrictive than the other book, and the pace is faster. There are fewer farming things, but it is still very interesting. For your reference You can raise some Pokémon with by-products, silk and honey from insects, pollen from cute flies, cotton from kapok balls, green sheep, bald sheep, and the racial value is not low, goat milk from mount goats and large milk tanks, grass-type nectar can also be used to make medicines and perfumes, and some can also produce fruits, and use The absorbing technique sucks up ordinary weeds without using pesticides. The poisonous spores of the Oops mushroom can be used to make medicine. The mushrooms of the Somniferum can be eaten and left to fall off naturally. The pollen of the cotton wool has a healing effect. The seeds of the evolved form of white fluffy are also medicinal and can nourish the earth and produce cotton. The water system can help with watering and the pearl oyster A. Macroglobulus can produce pearls. The saliva of the tree pillow bear is also medicinal. The natural carbon of the little carbon boy is also very strong in its evolved form. The sweetness of the Fengmi Dragon, the scallions from the Scallion Duck allow him to grow green onions, the fresh cream from the Fairy Milk, the tongs of the Hairy Crab, the high-grade silk of the Ball Spider, which is comparable to metal, the Salt Stone Barrier of Salt Shibao can help make pickles, the high-grade mineral salt of the Stone Giant is also said to heal any serious injury instantly, the yeast of the paparazzi, the charming aroma exuded by the Twist Dog helps the growth of wheat, the fallen front teeth of the Hot Lava are used as spices, and the high-grade sugar of the puffs, The seeds of the cactus flowers are highly nutritious, and the leaves of the lily root can be used as insect repellents and medicinal materials. With Europ's 10-kilometer radius detection radar Fatty Ni's 100 million times sense of smell can solve difficult problems and find mountains. Goods, messenger birds can help harvest, magic wall dolls, auspicious eggs, Gardevoir, Zhihuixing, almost dolls, Miss Gothic, love steward, nanny bug, porter, giant vines, monsters all have high IQs and can be used as helpers
Feeling a little messed up
I caught up on it in one go. The early stage was indeed very exciting. Although it felt full of stitches, it was not that uncomfortable. Instead, I wrote my own new ideas, so I immediately subscribed in one go. But the more I read, the more uncomfortable I felt, and the combat power collapsed. However, the combat part was omitted slightly, which can be regarded as making use of strengths and avoiding weaknesses, which is pretty good. Even when the mythical beasts come one after another, it feels like a running account, especially the foreshadowing of Kyogre coming to the ranch. I can predict the content behind it, which is a bit unsightly. Let's take care of it for a while and see if it can be saved. What I wrote above is really good, but it's a bit of a pity.
Wasn't the ending a bit hasty?🙂🙂
The ending is a bit rushed, please read the next one
Why do you write about ranch?
Why not write Pokémon: My Construction Company (Why are all the books in the book Charizard? Gardevoir? Gengar? Why can't they be female monsters? Fighting types form a construction company or mining, and the speed of making money is comparable to doing bounty missions, gym leaders) Pokémon: My Breeding Farm (Mr. The farm comes and goes. Isn't it just the Three Bees and the Big Needle that produce honey? Grass-type Pokémon use grassy fields to make crops grow better. Brother, I don't even know what to write before I read it. You might as well build a farm or a fish farm. Isn't it more profitable to sell elf eggs? Of course I don't mean breeders) Pokémon My Circus (Bring a group of members, learn the skills of a coordinator, perform everywhere, or train your own Pokémon idols, actors) Pokémon My Shop (Special Poké Balls only began to appear in the second generation of Johto. The author can develop various Poké Balls, what? Flame balls, elf balls, tracking balls, splitting balls, the recovery rate of special attributes will be higher. The materials for making elf balls are also those tree fruits and it is not difficult. Isn't it possible to have my own scientific research team to develop different products for sale) I really didn't know that there were so many things to write about, why do so many authors write about ranching?
It draws on the dual-world fusion flow of the Elf Leader and the tree-planting pasture flow. It seems to be pretty good writing so far.
After watching almost 30% of it, I personally feel that the settings are too complicated. It's time travel, system, farm, mythical beast template, Pokémon doctor, Junsha relatives, secret realm again. Okay, most of them are okay, but the secret realm + the farm don't feel like a good match. The arrival of the secret realm means opportunities and crises, but the main character is the farmer. It has nothing to do with him. It is better to start directly in the Pokémon world. This way, I can still write about familiar characters instead of someone's ancestor coming and finally giving birth to people who are roughly the same as those in the Pokémon world. The fight, especially the man in sunglasses with the poacher at the beginning, was too bluntly written. The man in sunglasses made a move, but was blocked by the tropical dragon. As a result, he didn't take the opportunity to make up for it and was still grinding. Later, the protagonist was surprised that the man in sunglasses had a backup plan~ It feels quite fragmented. It's okay to launch new products in rural areas, but the protagonist also has to be a doctor, invest in the unlucky foreman, participate in competitions, make all kinds of incredible Pokémon food, and cultivate green caterpillars into empty seats, and then compete in a competition that I don't know whether it counts as a gym competition.
Author
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
I saw the author writing a chapter about the New Year during the New Year, and I liked it very much! Happy New Year! With the Year of the Dragon coming, I wish you a successful career, a happy family, and good luck!
It's good to take your time. Good health is the most important thing. I'll just update when I have time.
Is this supposed to be a reference to me not wanting to be a trainer?
I think it's better to write about a ranch than a cemetery.
It can be seen that the author is working very hard to innovate, but it would actually be better to choose an area in the original Pokémon world to write about. If the author replaced the original region with an existing Pokémon region, I would say that the author was writing about ranching and not plagiarism. But because the author wrote original areas, Pokémon World Invasion, and Ranch, it gave me the feeling of inferior plagiarism, and I wanted to throw all the Pokémon themes in recent years into one book. Personally, I think different themes have their own advantages. The advantage of Ranch is that the interaction of Pokémon makes me feel like a Pokémon world. If I hadn't seen the author trying new things, I might have started plagiarizing. The most important thing is that the fusion of too many elements can't find a sense of substitution. I have tried to read this book three times, but every time I couldn't find the sense of empathy. Although I have given up reading this book, I want to say good luck to the author! Ranch is a great theme! I want to see more ranch themes!