I Left a Sword in the World

The characters are well drawn and the plot is decent, quite fascinating, but the characters are relatively single. Everyone has his or her own personality. There are no purely hypocritical people in the world, nor are there purely mature and steady people. Only with diversity can characters become more three-dimensional. It might be better to assume that these characters have inner conflicts The characters don't need to appear so much at the beginning, which makes it a headache to read. When they appear again, don't just show their names, but more relevant descriptions of appearance that match their status I have only read a few chapters, so I can't make a more accurate evaluation But the overall situation is still very good, with great development prospects, and I am very much looking forward to your next publication