Rune God Starts with Runesmith

Recruit a female vampire with a bad personality as a workshop employee and feed her with her own blood. What kind of thinking is there? There is a time bomb planted around the protagonist, so he simply takes a fancy to her female appearance, thinks he is not in enough trouble, and raises her as a harem?

I'm not trying to be arrogant. The protagonist has no strength at all and goes around claiming to be a rune craftsman. He also does so many things for free, and all the people he meets are good people? , As long as the protagonist meets a bad guy, he will work for him for the rest of his life, but he still spreads the secrets of runes everywhere if he has no strength? You are no different from a kid walking around the city with gold, and this village guard is outrageous. I don't know what the peak level is, but a small village actually has more than 30 levels of professionals? Are these people in their 30s retiring in villages? (After all, the beasts and wolves mentioned earlier are only level 2 or 3)

It shouldn't be extraction, it should be said to be copying. If you extract the ontology, it will be gone.

To be honest, I don't see how the protagonist looks like a rune craftsman until now. According to your direction, I guess you will write about the protagonist taking his own golems on adventures and claiming to be a rune craftsman. Then he will continue to use golem battles to gain rune entries for teammates and golems, and then train the vampire to take her into the harem together with the women in the team. Then there will be a god battle where you use the rune golem army to sweep everything and finally become the god king.

After reading a few pictures, it feels a bit strange. Since you are mainly about service, you should try to fill up your runes as much as possible. Then the protagonist awakens the Golem profession. Logically speaking, he should perfect his defense and attack as much as possible to create a relatively perfect Golem Army. It makes people feel that everything the protagonist does is an emergency. Then the plot is a bit slow and fragmented. I feel that the protagonist is a bit ignorant. He walked down the street alone with gold in his arms and told others that I have gold.

I just want to say, is the protagonist mentally ill? A puppet? If you don't use puppets, what's the use of changing jobs? This is really pitting your weakest point against someone else's strongest point. The aura of the protagonist is really big enough if you are not dead. There is definitely something wrong with your brain. It's okay to make two human puppets and keep them for assassination. I have two agility runes and two attack ones. It's more than enough for assassination. If there are puppets for me, I won't use them. I'll just use a sword.

Wu Nuwen, you have such a powerful golden finger, but you don't know how to use it. Let's find someone with some logic.

The idea is good, but the plot is so strange. Why do you think that the protagonist, a weakling, can pry open the vampire's mouth and let her tell her plan? Isn't it because the vampire is female and the hero is male?

The subject matter is really good, but it's a pity that the content is not psychologically appropriate and has too many flaws.

How to say it? First of all, there are gaps in the novel, and the characters' reactions to things are wrong. The writing method is Long Aotian's, which means that the protagonist is very awesome, and cheats can easily make people feel invincible. However, it does not write about Long Aotian's coolness, does not appear invincible, and makes the protagonist very dangerous. I never thought that normal people should be low-key and work hard to improve their own strength.

It's like a different person is writing the story later. I opened so many tricks and beat the BOOS in the novice village that I can't beat (the knight brother of the protagonist) with the sword that is described as very strong, but it's only 50/50. What do you mean by this? This rune describes how powerful the person mentioned earlier is. What does it mean to hit someone with the sword of someone else whose quality is obviously higher than this level and it's just a draw? It keeps describing the protagonist's brother's inner feelings, but it has no substantive effect at all, and he is not happy to return the favor. He cheated and was suppressed by others. In the previous few pictures, he vowed to say "I cheated". How could he write it? The style of writing in both the front and the back looks like it was written by someone else. The back is both clumsy and useless. It's so hard to beat this character with high-star equipment and equipment in these articles. It's so cool that I don't understand.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is very poor. I suggest you practice a few books before writing. Stop it now. Don't waste a good subject matter.

Judging from the introduction, your runes have nothing to do with runes, right?

Let's make a complaint about fighting. As a craftsman, why do you have to fight hard with warriors? Just like coins, you know that there is a high probability of fighting, so why don't you make some life-saving functional props when you go out? If you are not the protagonist, someone who doesn't know how to fight will have his weapon knocked away after just a few hits. .

This vampire kid is really useless if you keep it. It makes you sick just looking at it.

The writing style is relatively immature, and I look forward to the author's next book. This one will help me hone my writing skills.

After reading the latest chapter, the character creation is pretty good, but the ink spent on some supporting characters is a bit redundant. The overall flaws are not concealed, and it is still worth collecting.

What are these things written about? I just traveled through time and was tricked to death. I have a golden finger but it is a growth type. From actively contracting a vampire to actively being exposed to the murderer, I already know that this is a novel in which the protagonist can survive only ten chapters and then collapse.

It feels a bit superfluous. If you want to be a rune craftsman, just write rune inlay. The Golem Master at the back is obviously redundant. The production of Golems is done at a later stage. There is no need to write such a cool article like yours. Especially the part about the goddess is really disgusting to the readers. The revelation of the goddess feels like a mouse being watched by an eagle, and it will die sooner or later. Why do you want to sell such a cool article to misery?

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