
Gundam SEED: Poetry of Tomorrow
高达SEED之明日诗歌
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 629k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Author, I don't want to talk about the logic of the plot, I just want to talk about the attitude you show. Whether it is a post or the author's words, what you say reveals to the readers a feeling that you are unable to control the plot. You have not thought about how the plot will go and to what extent, and you are even hesitant about how to set up the characters. If nothing else, as the person who controls the characters and plots in the book, you reveal an attitude of having no confidence and no clue about the next development. How can you give readers the confidence to trust you? Let me give you a piece of advice. Even if you really haven't thought about how to develop it, your reply to the readers must be in a tone that understands the overall situation. "My book is fine" and "It's your problem that you can't understand the foreshadowing here." You have to do this. When readers see it, they will think, oh, the author has ideas. Only in this way can they give them the confidence to continue reading.
If it were a single heroine, I would like it to be Lux. I really want to see the emotional line between Lux and the protagonist. The emotional line of the final destination is all based on guilt and pity. I actually want to see some similar but different emotional lines, and not the kind of mindless one, but the kind of emotional line that feels like it is very suitable for Lux.
Come to your final destination, as long as the heroine is Lux 🤓🤓🤓
You got the bonus, but the result won't change?
Damn it, the theatrical version is about to be released, the popularity is about to rise, and you end up being a eunuch?
Author, do you want to take a look at what you have written in these chapters? The protagonist wants to carry out a beheading operation, but he drives a special machine out of the war zone openly. He is discovered by the three gangsters and suspects that Cruze is cheating... Does his IQ need to be cheated by Cruze? If someone has a grudge against you, if he doesn't hit you on the battlefield, who will he hit? Then during the fight with San Xiaoqiang, he actually forgot that he was out to steal the house, and he still had to be reminded by others? Then it's time for the blood pressure to rise the most. After the fight, three heads are placed there. Oh, I won't take them. These three little heroes must be alive. The chicken and wolf want to go back to make a comeback because the battle line is about to collapse. Your protagonist's reason is actually to save it for later fighting, otherwise the battlefield will be boring? Chickens and wolves don't even dare to say that they will definitely win against the three strong ones. If you don't have a special machine and you can't defeat the chickens and wolves, how can you have the courage to let the tiger return to the mountain? After co-writing, you won't be the one fighting San Xiaoqiang? Just to be able to follow the original work, characters, logic, nothing else matters.
After reading it, I boarded the Archangel... I'm a Muggle. Sorry, I can only say that I can't stand it. The protagonist chose the wrong path. The most correct path is ZAFT. The author has his own ideas and ideas, which are pretty good. Come on. The author is recommended to read Gundam: New Humanity and Gundam: Dawn. Although the books were written a long time ago, they have always been classics among seed fan classics.
We need to write more emotional scenes and don't separate them. We can intercept Hu Lux on the Archangel and then decide whether to stay on the Archangel or accompany Lux back. I hope the heroine Lux can write more emotions
The heroine of hope who came from her home is a seductress
I hope the protagonist will lean towards the Earth Army or be independent. The moderator is tired of it! Those crazy massacred natural people dressed as adjusters feel awkward looking at them!
No, if you stop updating, can the eunuch tell you in advance?
Just tell me what you are doing, and the eunuch will also say no? Directly falling out of love, ruining the character of the old man.
It won't matter if this fake protagonist is deleted! The plot still develops according to the original drama. Even if it affects the plot (Michelle, Nicol), it seems that it only postpones the time of death. Will Nicol and Thor still be unable to escape death in the future? Will Mu also escape death?
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Here's a picture of Lux's driving suit, and then I'll say goodbye
I don't want to say more, it's too cowardly, I will delete the book and return it 🙏
Is this author a eunuch or deceased?
From the current point of view, it is quite satisfactory. The multiple personality is a bit poisonous. He is a time traveler, so how can he empathize with other people's memories? It will definitely have an impact, but with the current way of writing, it won't be a bitter and hateful thing if it is written down.
Thu Zora Osiris
I have read a Gundam novel by Shuzora Osiris. It is the only masterpiece.
The floor has been wiped out The author, please come back to me
It's rare to see the original version, so give me the eunuch, Amynos
I was finally defeated by you guys, so I won't update anymore. What are you looking at now 😭😭😭
I just wanted to raise you once, but I didn't expect you to be a eunuch.
The good guy suddenly gave me a recommendation to play. I thought I was resurrected and was still in the grave. I played so well.
The official sequel plot has just been presented to the world.
🤫Where is the new book?
Let me first be shocked and then tell me why it's not gay
There are too few fanfics on this subject. I have read it and found it quite good. I hope the author can give me a perfect ending.
Two seedlings, I feel they are quite generous, so I am cheeky enough to recommend them