Gundam SEED: Tomorrow's Poems

Author, I don't want to talk about the logic of the plot, I just want to talk about the attitude you show. Whether it is a post or the author's words, what you say reveals to the readers a feeling that you are unable to control the plot. You have not thought about how the plot will go and to what extent, and you are even hesitant about how to set up the characters. If nothing else, as the person who controls the characters and plots in the book, you reveal an attitude of having no confidence and no clue about the next development. How can you give readers the confidence to trust you? Let me give you a piece of advice. Even if you really haven't thought about how to develop it, your reply to the readers must be in a tone that understands the overall situation. "My book is fine" and "It's your problem that you can't understand the foreshadowing here." You have to do this. When readers see it, they will think, oh, the author has ideas. Only in this way can they give them the confidence to continue reading.

If it were a single heroine, I would like it to be Lux. I really want to see the emotional line between Lux and the protagonist. The emotional line of the final destination is all based on guilt and pity. I actually want to see some similar but different emotional lines, and not the kind of mindless one, but the kind of emotional line that feels like it is very suitable for Lux.

Come to your final destination, as long as the heroine is Lux 🤓🤓🤓

Damn it, the theatrical version is about to be released, the popularity is about to rise, and you end up being a eunuch?

Author, do you want to take a look at what you have written in these chapters? The protagonist wants to carry out a beheading operation, but he drives a special machine out of the war zone openly. He is discovered by the three gangsters and suspects that Cruze is cheating... Does his IQ need to be cheated by Cruze? If someone has a grudge against you, if he doesn't hit you on the battlefield, who will he hit? Then during the fight with San Xiaoqiang, he actually forgot that he was out to steal the house, and he still had to be reminded by others? Then it's time for the blood pressure to rise the most. After the fight, three heads are placed there. Oh, I won't take them. These three little heroes must be alive. The chicken and wolf want to go back to make a comeback because the battle line is about to collapse. Your protagonist's reason is actually to save it for later fighting, otherwise the battlefield will be boring? Chickens and wolves don't even dare to say that they will definitely win against the three strong ones. If you don't have a special machine and you can't defeat the chickens and wolves, how can you have the courage to let the tiger return to the mountain? After co-writing, you won't be the one fighting San Xiaoqiang? Just to be able to follow the original work, characters, logic, nothing else matters.

After reading it, I boarded the Archangel... I'm a Muggle. Sorry, I can only say that I can't stand it. The protagonist chose the wrong path. The most correct path is ZAFT. The author has his own ideas and ideas, which are pretty good. Come on. The author is recommended to read Gundam: New Humanity and Gundam: Dawn. Although the books were written a long time ago, they have always been classics among seed fan classics.

We need to write more emotional scenes and don't separate them. We can intercept Hu Lux on the Archangel and then decide whether to stay on the Archangel or accompany Lux back. I hope the heroine Lux can write more emotions

I hope the protagonist will lean towards the Earth Army or be independent. The moderator is tired of it! Those crazy massacred natural people dressed as adjusters feel awkward looking at them!

The heroine of hope who came from her home is a seductress

Here's a picture of Lux's driving suit, and then I'll say goodbye