Creating Gods in the Hunter X Hunter World

I've given you nearly thirty recommendation votes, but your book still isn't popular; it's probably going to flop. Also, starting from chapter 15, the protagonist becomes somewhat stupid, weak, and arrogant, yet others seem to be under a spell of reduced intelligence and believe he's incredibly strong.

The dialogue is a bit simplistic, but the premise is quite good. However, the protagonist's goals seem somewhat unclear, and he tends to act and think without thinking. Otherwise, it's alright, not too bad, and I was able to finish it. I'm looking forward to seeing what abilities the protagonist develops later on. 🤔️

I was lured in by the word count, then disappointed by the writing style. I was planning to put up with it because I was looking for something to read, but then my brain rebelled and ran away from home.

In Chapter Six, the protagonist encounters two men who are about to kill him, but they beg for mercy, so he lets them go, saying he can't handle killing. It's hard to judge, but this book just isn't my cup of tea.

I've basically read most of the Hunter x Hunter fanfics. But I really don't like following the original storyline. The Hunter x Hunter universe is so vast; just following the plot isn't very interesting.

There's no proper division of combat power. Conjuring a defensive object can't even stop 30% of Hisoka's attack. It's laughable. Hisoka's strength lies in his battle intelligence, not his brute force. This lousy defensive item would shatter at the slightest touch from a Boost or Emission type.

The trap tower doesn't have a fixed five passages; some may have more, some may have fewer. Furthermore, the challenges encountered in each passage are different.

In typical Hunter x Hunter novels, the very beginning inevitably involves a life-or-death situation with Hisoka.

The first three images are so idiotic, I can't even look at them.

This is probably my first time writing a novel...