Create Gods in the World of Full-Time Hunters

I have given you nearly 30 recommendation votes, but your book is not yet popular and is probably going to cool down. Also, starting from Chapter 15, the protagonist is a bit stupid, weak and arrogant, but others think that the protagonist is very strong even if they have a halo of intelligence reduction. The nine-headed skeleton that had just been boasted of invincible defense in front was smashed and knocked away from behind. Ning's upgraded version of Fire Eyes Clear (which costs a lot to set up), can the protagonist still use it permanently? Ning is a unique move, and you should find time to use it during the battle. The protagonist uses Fire Eyes Qingqing as a buff, which causes his mind to be almost exhausted. This is too pure.

The dialogue is a bit white, but the setting is pretty good. Then I feel that the protagonist's goal is not particularly clear, and he takes things for granted. The rest is okay, not very toxic. Anyway, I can read it. I am looking forward to what abilities the protagonist will develop later🤔️

Deceived by the word count and kicked by the writing, Shuhuang planned to endure it, but in the end his brain rebelled and he ran away from home.

Chapter 6, I met two people who were about to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist let them go when they begged for mercy. It's hard to comment on why they can't adapt to killing, but this book is not my cup of tea.

I've basically read all the hunter stories. But I really don't like following the original plot. Hunter's world view is so vast, it's boring to follow the plot.

The combat power was not divided correctly at all, and the defensive object was unable to prevent 30% of Hisoka's attacks. It's so funny that Hisoka's fighting IQ is not as strong as his strength. This broken defense item will break when touched by the strengthening type or the releasing type.

The trap tower does not have five fixed passages, there may be as many as there are. And the levels encountered in each channel are also different.

A starting-point hunter novel, you must be involved with Hisoka at the beginning, life or death

The first three pictures are so retarded that I can't stand them.

It feels like writing a novel for the first time...

Congratulations on the release of the new book and wish it a great success🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

You can write a cunt, but it can't be a dodge.

First, there was nothing wrong with the ability items in Journey to the West. If there were too many, they wouldn't be messy. However, they were too powerful, which led to fatigue when upgrading and acquiring new abilities later. Obviously, there was some restraint in the mid-term, but later on, I couldn't keep up with the plot, so I finished the book hastily. Of course, familiarity with abilities has advantages and disadvantages, and you understand them all. Second, there are big flaws. Sometimes the order of chapters is out of order, or the plot of two chapters suddenly jumps too much. I don't know whether it is a correction or a lack of writing skills, which particularly affects the reading experience. Third, Dark Continent is not written with sincerity. Of course, the overall plot of the original Hunter story jumps a lot, the change of world view is actually a bit abrupt, and the combat power level is confusing. These are inherent shortcomings. It is not easy to write well. It is even harder for fans to correct or cover up these shortcomings. Maybe it would be better to change it to the infinite flow of the telekinesis core or the hunter-dominated world? Of course, if you have enough imagination, it would be better to directly adopt some parts and then overthrow others, or it would be better to borrow some parts and rebuild a new world. For example, introducing players to fight against the Dark Continent, such as reshaping the astronomical legislation and physical laws of the Hunter World. Fourthly, it is really meaningless to form a habit of making plots cheap. It is impossible to become a strong person with this kind of petty citizen mentality. Without one's own goals, the later scenes may seem intense, but the actual contradictions in the main plot have disappeared. I don't even know what I'm going to do when I go to the Dark Continent. The characters in the plot have much clearer goals than the protagonist. The younger members of the protagonist's team also don't know what they are doing. It's weird. The operation on the ship completely takes advantage of the plot and is actually useless. Since the protagonist has no goals, he is completely reduced to a tool for plot tasks. The core is that after the protagonist's foundation has become stronger to a certain extent, and the survival crisis has been basically solved for the time being (is there any?), He no longer knows what to do or how to become stronger, so he starts to pretend to advance through the plot. The actual core conflict does not exist at all, only urine pure water is added. I would like to emphasize that the Dark Continent chapter is really rubbish.

Zhou Mingrui listened to Hisoka's judgment on his abilities and said silently: "According to you, I should be from the manipulation system, right?" All around, countless birds, mice, and bugs all expanded and turned into Zhou Mingrui's appearance. They answered in unison: "Yes, we are from the manipulation system~!" 😂

Cloud Hunter, any passerby who comes into contact can force someone to enter the extreme, not one, but several 😥

There are a lot of psychological activities. After reading three chapters, the main character is basically talking to himself.

Novel abilities, others. . . Hard to describe in one word

The Journey to the West series is realized and matched with the scenes. Hey.

Congratulations on finishing the book! 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸Looking forward to the new book! 🎈🎈🎈🎈🎈

Stop looking at it🙈 This is just a piece of shit

You can delete the first few dozen pictures. This writing method of suppressing first and then rising is like a primary school student's composition which is too formulaic and annoying.

After reading the first part, the writing style is average, and the rhythm between the lines is like dreaming, intermittent, and it feels unreal and unsettling.