I Farm in the Original Elf World

Your tip should be more detailed, and don't let something suddenly appear from the system. If it suddenly appears, it will give a bad impression.

The metal, wood, water, fire, and earth in the first chapter are really angry. If you don't change, you will definitely be in trouble.

Electricity is not a necessary condition for its realization stage, unless you have conquered a certain population of electric Pokémon such as Meili Sheep. First, there are fire-type Pokémon to ensure fire sources, water Pokémon or fixed water sources, grass-type Pokémon to plant farmland, flying-type Pokémon to explore paths, and mounted large Pokémon as transportation tools. Then, tame Pokémon with lots of fur to prepare clothes for winter. Of course, you need a starting Pokémon to start.

It's too bland, and the training for elves is only to fight when looking for food. It does not train the fire attribute ability control and physical strength of the Kati dog. The protagonist has a golden finger and is not outstanding at all. Not to mention improved equipment, he does not even have a little knowledge about elves. The system is written and gives a lot of information, but it is not reflected at all. The knowledge is not as good as that of primitive people.

Regarding the issue of no paper. My idea is that everyone has mental power, and they can just use their mental power to stand on their butts. Wouldn't it be better if the poop was moved away?

The protagonist is not conspicuous. He is among a group of people named Bai. The plot does not revolve around the protagonist, but around the supporting characters. The protagonist revolves around the supporting characters. He has always been a bystander. The protagonist has no important plot.

The pace is too slow. The author writes that the main character is retiring and has a dog by the way.

Where are the fields for farming? . . Always fishing and hunting. . .

The third question is, if you are writing a piece of shit, why are you writing so many characters with the surname Bai? In a group of people with the surname Bai, don't you think the protagonist will be easily overwhelmed? You shouldn't think that what you wrote is some kind of group portrait, right?

Update soon, the writing is pretty good

What exactly does the system do? When did you wake up? What is in the system space is not explained clearly. The main thing is to compile it when needed. You need a detoxification pill. Suddenly there is one left in the system space. You need to bathe your pet. Suddenly there are a few bottles of shampoo left in the system space. You might as well change the system to an online shopping system and buy it when you need it. This is very bad for you. Otherwise, you are primitive. Social survival, besides, giving a pet a bath is a very simple thing that can be written clearly. In one sentence, you can bring water to clean it. You have to add a system space to have a few bottles of shampoo left. Do you have to use these bottles of shampoo to reflect something, your current civilized life, or the relationship between you and your pet? Survive on one side and shampoo on the other. Do you know how abrupt it is?