The Qin Dynasty Prospered and Flourished.

The first chapter is too long, to be honest, it's like a foot wrap. In order to come here to comment, I read it with patience. First, a chapter of about 2,500 words is ok. Secondly, the whole article is a bit shaky and clumsy. Simplifying the chapters can reduce the number of words by at least half. Thirdly, the plot lacks highlights and insufficient imagination. It can be seen that the author is someone who can't contain the plot as soon as he writes it. He always wants to write some of this and some of that, and the longer and longer he writes, the more bloated he becomes. It's best to keep the language concise, polish the plot a lot, and write something that others wouldn't think of to be brilliant! We hope to encourage each other!