Evolution Campaign

Critical comments from friends

This book is still the original type of book, but in terms of content, it will be restarted according to the new outline, so don't be nervous. I am alive (laughing)

I didn't expect that a book about kayaking could have fans.

The plot is very well written. But it lacks a trace of kayak's charm of perfect integration of super power and industrial system. Adding more content about this would be perfect.

Is it because I have no income that I can't write anymore? We can pay for it to be put on the shelves. I just discovered this book today.

Let everyone see what I found💩

The author is moving too fast. The plot can't even be called an outline. There is no need to update every day. Read books and historical documents from the past. Hope to add some realistic content. Rather than describing the general content of an event. The barrier to entry for kayaking is very high. It's not like some daily life or fantasy, just tell a good story. What is required is that the author really has real materials and has a relatively in-depth understanding of various aspects of things. Understand, the author has written very well to this point, after all, there are so many people in the group. There are not many people who actually write fan fiction. Most of them put in a lot of effort, but they only wrote a few or a dozen pictures. At most, I only wrote one. A simplified version of the fan universe. From the beginning of the world, there is an amazing feeling. Although it borrows a lot, the method of climbing vines and big trees also makes sense. But now the vines have stopped growing at all. Now it is gradually shrinking. I hope the author will think carefully about what kind of article he wants to write. Probably articles like this won't say too much about people's love, money-wise. Probably, there won't be much support. If it is for hobbies, then it is even more important to study hard and write an article that suits your interests.

Is it because it's not on the shelves and there's no income, so I can't continue writing?

Shenhe is really sensitive😅

A wave of support. I have always believed that The Battle of the Wellhead is the best, most interesting and most interesting book on kayaking, with the most complete system and the most capable of secondary expansion Sure enough, there are heroes who share the same views. Support support

Why is it not updated again? I have been waiting for two months.

The author may or may not listen, it's just my suggestion. I have never written a book, so if I am wrong, please point it out. I feel that the author has improved a lot, at least his ability to describe things has improved a lot. But the relationship is so tiring! It feels like a pot of industrial saccharin has been poured into my throat. There was no departure and no passing suddenly. Love blooms like a flower. For the author, there are certain reasons that must have appeared in his mind, and then he wrote out the results. But there is no description of this aspect in the book, or there is very little description, which is particularly abrupt for us. This does not mean that you cannot write about emotions, it just means that the ability required is relatively high. Kayak said, "An evolved officer is not a good person." Setting up a companion creation system can solve this encounter problem. But in the Battle of Jingkou, in the nuclear steel plane, how did the levy soldiers emerge with life and consciousness?

The author updates too slowly. Do you have any recommendations for other similar books? Have you seen the nuclear powered battleship?

Can the author release the 100th chapter immediately? I've read the first three volumes and it's not enough.

I think the time travel monster will not let the variable wear out in these eras, and will use it at least in the steam era. Moreover, 50,000 people can directly rely on organizational structure to destroy any country in ancient times regardless of anything, which is one of the best in the steam era. Is there too many people in this base?

I suddenly thought of the colonel in Jingpo who built a maritime empire, built ships crazily, and was finally killed by the natives with a nuclear bomb.

I have to complain about the author, are you excited to write a fanfic after watching the Battle of Jingguchi? Have you ever had a fantasy that you have imagined many times in your mind? Is your writing level still at the level of primary school narratives? Your protagonist is aloof. There is no complex psychological struggle, no battle of wits and courage dialogue, and no endless curiosity about the new world. He just relies on past formulas to solve the problem. Evolution not only evolves that shabby era, but also evolves the protagonist in your novel. Lu Dagu's first experience with every ugliness in this era should have been from being unable to sleep at night, to gradually becoming numb, and then gradually having the consciousness to become a beam of light. And you went through the motions happily. He didn't let me see the transformation he was trying to make. Ren Di is distracted by his evolution war, and what about you?

Battle of the Wellhead Evolution Officer That's awesome

This rewritten article is much better than the previous one

Everyone should listen to it again

How did the Song Dynasty overthrow the feudal monarchy and establish a feudal Song Dynasty first?

I really don't understand why you deleted the previous one.

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There is no other fanfiction like this.