The Beast Tamer Who Went Broke

I was recommended this book by someone else, and they said it looked familiar. I turned off my last book because of the elders around the protagonist. But since I'm already here, I hope this one pays more attention to the positive characters and avoids those disgusting character designs, focusing more on plausibility.

After reading over two hundred chapters of this book, I have only one feeling: there are no bad points, no exciting moments, it's just plain and bland, and there's no anticipation to read on. It's no wonder it's not popular.

I want to see the main characters, so why does Bai Xiaoyu have more screen time than the main characters, and why is her character so unlikable?

You need to work on this one! Don't forget some of the important settings. In the last book, you forgot about the pet strength levels and only compared bloodline levels. That felt really unrealistic.

I really dislike that little white fish; she seems to have no sense of boundaries.

A well-developed book review section wouldn't be complete without a word chain game, so I'll start: Great fortune and prosperity!

The character is unlikable, and she goes to dangerous suburbs just to take photos.

What's the point of Bai Xiaoyu's character? He just seems like an annoying, brainless brute... Is it used to prove that human talent can be as strong as cheat codes and countless resources? They act impulsively and are annoying, without ever considering whether their actions will cause trouble for others or put their friends in danger.

Can't we kill this disgusting thing, Bai Xiaoyu?

The concept is decent, but the power structure and historical setting feel somewhat disconnected. The sentences are also not concise enough. The protagonist often talks to himself. Rhetorical questions would be better. The constant use of declarative sentences shows that the protagonist is ignorant and incompetent.