Reincarnation Paradise: Do You Even Know What a Clone Is?!

. . . It's better not to choose a knife as a weapon, right? Combining swords and guns, isn't this getting closer to Bai Ye again? Most of the original Paradise fans followed this template. Like Bai Ye, to be honest, the appeal has dropped too much. It might as well be a second brush. You can't use a war scythe. The abyss system was chosen as the profession at the beginning. Isn't there someone who uses a war scythe? Nowadays, it's not bad to use a war scythe in the soul system.

WOC, it's too abstract. When it comes to falling in love in the Paradise of Reincarnation, I'm looking for Esdeath (a character in the pan-life world, from The Crimson Eyes, who is also the second-dimensional wife...). I'm sorry, I'll explain it first.

I felt relieved when I saw so many people scolding the author because of Esdeath. It was so disgusting.

Keep writing, it looks great! In fact, you can also have a clone mage, the kind of mage who can analyze the origin and create his own magic. The magic destroyer does not just wait to kill all the magicians.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. There were a lot of mistakes in the setting, such as the arena was a virtual battle, only the equipment was real, and there was no harm at all. There were also a lot of bad sentences and typos, and I couldn't even count them. The abyss plus soul power, the result was not as good as some rubbish professions, a fight, it was rubbish to death, the personalities of various original characters were magically changed, and the speech patterns were all written randomly. And author, you don't think the protagonist is cool when he fights and the weapons change, right? There is an extremely powerful ability called Melee Master. It requires mastering at least five melee master skills to master it, and several master skills can be forcibly upgraded to master. Only with this ability can this combat method be used in actual combat. The author just wants to come up with it, and use the world view of the original work. If you don't check the information carefully, what will you get? It's completely the author's own yy article!

Your Crimson Eyes are really 6. I jumped directly to the previous Shizune and Byakuya, but the second dungeon ended up playing an emotional scene. To be honest, I felt something was wrong when I saw Esdeath appear. It turned out that you actually wrote an emotional scene, okay, you can just play it, but you took it to the paradise, okay, the worst case scenario is that we will never interact with each other until we die. But in the next sentence, give me your number, wow🌿

I have read more than 200,000 words. I haven't paid much attention to the ghoul, but it is actually quite poisonous. I gave a "female" colleague who does not have much combat power valuable recovery items in the early stage and later stage, and then had an affair with the female general in Zhanchizhizhihong To be honest, I have found many books without a female protagonist, and this is the first one that is so blatantly ambiguous I can only say it is extremely poisonous Shen Nong Ji Le 🤭

It's too easy to become a contractor for Esdeath. It's not that easy to obtain uniqueness. The reason why the stupid king became the judge is because of bugs. It's okay to recruit contractors in the native world, but the derivative world directly loses an important supporting role, and all the derivative worlds of that work are abolished.

To be honest, the writing is not good. Among Paradise fans, only those two can watch it. The rest are basically too cheap

I've seen the latest, so let's comment. Generally speaking, it's still worth watching. The author seems to be a newbie, but he is still growing and will correct any major problems. Let's talk about some small problems, for example: It's uncomfortable to stack the data panels together. Isn't it possible to make them original? He and she made too many mistakes. The protagonist's behavior is very strange. The protagonist's cheating is relatively strong, but not as outrageous as other fans. Therefore, the protagonist of this book also needs to treat the environment of the paradise carefully, but the protagonist in the ghoul world is like a bastard. The hidden missions in Zhanchi World have finally been accepted. Maybe this is just an adjustment. There is also the Zhanchi egg, which also continued the bastard mode of the ghoul. I left it alone, but I found it later and turned it into an abyss creature servant. Maybe it's changing too. It's still the emotional scene with Esdeath. To be honest, why are you doing this in Paradise? Do you want to talk about it or not? This is a derivative world that can be reset at will. Do you want to take it away? I haven't written down how to deal with it yet, but there's really no need for emotional drama. Just add it if you like it, and don't dwell on it. And practice writing emotional scenes, don't do it in Samsara Paradise. Even if you really want to write emotional scenes and have a female protagonist, it's better to have a female hunter in the park or a female protagonist in the void. However, you said that the clone type can still stay with you. This ? What do you want the heroine to do? Finally, although there are many flaws, the author seems to be a novice, with only a few hundred thousand words now, and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on!!!