Death: Beyond Two Realms

It's currently non-toxic. I've read a lot of Death fanfics, but there's nothing that's not toxic. This one is pretty good. Come on, author.

By the way, does the author have a picture of what the protagonist's Zanpakutō looks like? If there is, even the ugly ones will have higher interaction volume.

One point that cannot be avoided when writing about the God of Death is the removal and naming of the monk. Aizen is easy to say, he rarely kills people. Don't be afraid if you have haha, the blur can be solved, or you can ask Pu Yuan to research medicine. Only the monk...

Civilization: Beyond Two Realms🤓

I'm very curious about how the protagonist will deal with interpersonal relationships in the future. After all, the protagonist is too close to Aizen, but he is also the adopted brother of the Shiba family. The Kyon Jubana who killed Haiyan, and the subsequent Masked Army can be said to have been arranged by Aizen. Aizen is a character that Shinigami fans can never avoid. If you control it well, you will be looking forward to it. I hope it will not fall apart later.

If you like this kind of getting stronger through practice, it is best for the protagonist to become a master and a pioneer in the practice system. After the swordsmanship and ghost path reach their peak, they can integrate the secrets of ghost path and achieve the effects of those attribute sword techniques in martial arts novels. Reiatsu is equal to internal strength. For example, in Tai Chi Sword, everyone else in my field is slower.

Although the life span of the God of Death is very long, his growth is very slow. Is the timeline too far behind? Unless you are a loser like Ichigo, it is impossible to reach captain-level power in a short time. Even if you have amazing talent, it will take hundreds of years.

I will work hard to write the first book, and I will do my best to code it. I hope you can give me more opinions, thank you! Never fail, eunuch, otherwise you will be single for the rest of your life! (￣▽￣)~Oh yeah~

Come on! Recommended online, I finally saw one writing about the god of death. Our death writers are about to rise

After reading it, I feel that the plot arrangement is stable. It is successful if it is not poisonous these days. However, the writing is very lacking and a bit dry. My personal suggestion is to use more embellishments and character descriptions. Some scenes can be roughly drawn in the mind and then written out. For battles, add more passion and dialogue, and intersperse one or two sentences in the middle to form separate paragraphs to increase the reader's interest.

I started watching Death: Wow, that's awesome. After watching the Thousand-Year Blood War: The God of Death is so weak, his ultimate move was snatched away by all kinds of people, and after watching the Thousand-Year Blood War in Season 2: Is the Soul King's Palace Really the God of Death? Not one of the weapons is a knife, and the only one is a dick.

It seems that the detection methods of thunder and lightning and hunters are not enough. They have to evolve into seeing and hearing. It is best to further evolve the effect to "see through", similar to the "intuition" of King Arthur Arturia Extending a little further, thunder and lightning, seeing through, can't help but make people think of Wen Zhonglai Wen Zhong is the nine-day Yingyuan thunder, which universalizes life and death, rewards and punishments for good and evil, makes clouds and rain, kills demons and subjugates demons, and commands thunder. It illuminates the great road of Tianxin from above, and relieves the suffering of the people in the netherworld below. Responsible for the disasters and blessings of heaven, the balance of objects, the control of objects and people, the division of life and death, the seizure, opening and closing, and the generation of keys. From the emperor above, from the emperor below, nothing but thunder can carry out its orders. Big and life-and-death, small and prosperous, nothing but thunder can dominate its politics It seems to be compatible with the protagonist's Shijie The thirty-sixth of the swastika... Seems to be more related to the thirty-six thunder masters and the thirty-six types of thunder Wen Zhong's thunder and lightning, heavenly eyes, and divinity all seem to be what the protagonist is pursuing It seems that The Taoist Wang Lingguan seems to be good too. He also has three eyes and palm thunder. In Journey to the West, he also has thirty-six thunder generals. He is "the innate chief general who protects the road with a pure heart and the three-five train king Tianjun whose powerful spirit manifests the deity." , Just like the one in Water Margin [This Bao Daoyi was watching from the top of the city, and then he performed a magic spell, muttering words in his mouth, and shouted: "Quiet!" He recited the helper spell and blew on it. A black air rolled out from Demon Lord Zheng's head. In the middle of the black air, a golden-armored god appeared, holding a demon-conquering pestle, and he looked into the sky and struck it down. In the Confederate army, dark clouds of confusion and darkness were rising. When Song Jiang saw it, he called Fan Rui, the demon king in the world, to come and see him, and ordered the method to be performed urgently. He also read the secret of the secret spell in the heavenly book to return the wind and break the darkness. I saw a white cloud rolling up on Guan Sheng's helmet. Among the white clouds, there was also a god general with red hair and a blue face, green eyes and raised teeth. He rode a black dragon and held a hammer in his hand to fight the golden-armored god on the head of Demon Lord Zheng. The two armies below were shouting. The two generals clashed and fought countless battles. The heavenly general riding the black dragon above was able to defeat the golden-armored god. Next, Guan Sheng cut Demon Lord Zheng off his horse with a sword.

What left me speechless the most when reading the Bleach manga was the various robberies of these characters. It was obviously a life-or-death battle, but each of them could not wait to reveal their abilities. They always felt confident of winning as soon as they gained the upper hand, and started teasing their opponents (refer to Hirako Mako and Hobashi Rojuro), but in the end they were always counterattacked. Shouldn't we try to hide our abilities and intelligence? Shinigami, Quincy, and Arrancars have all kinds of weird abilities. If you encounter any one of them, your boat may capsize in the gutter. However, it seems to be a routine to share your information with the enemy during battle.

Come on! Author, your book is very smooth to read, no worse than some older authors. He looks like an emperor!

Entering the palace😒

I have been looking forward to the arrival of this plot, but when I wrote it, I felt it was too bland. I have been working as a nanny. Basically, everyone I know knows what the plan is. The plot can be seen at a glance. There is no climax at all, no excitement at all, and it is so bland that there is no sense of involvement at all.

Strongly recommend, there are too few good-looking Bleach fanfics. It's rare to find a copy. The monthly vote has been cast, I hope there will be no eunuchs.

The writing is very good and the plot is very interesting. Good luck to the author.