Can a Fighter Become a Legend in the World of Jockey Girls?

I was deeply attracted by this article the first time I saw it in NGA, so I followed it all the way to the starting point I don't know much about fighting games, and I don't know enough about the relevant knowledge, but the writing style that perfectly suits my preferences, the smooth yet dramatic beginning, and the interesting character creation made me immersed in the world of a visitor from another world named Zhang Wei for a whole night Whether it was the chance encounter symbolized by Sirius, the brief love affair with Windsor Nestor, or the romance with Diewu Youmeng's preparations before the competition, and the brief contact with Lauren Donal after accidentally encountering a supernatural incident... These are the motivations for me to continue watching, but the biggest one is undoubtedly Zhang Wei himself I don't even know what words to use to describe this cross-racial warrior When he and Donal actually stood on the field, standing on each other's battlefield to fight, the resonance of cheering swelled in my chest. In those last forty seconds, my heartbeat was as fast as if I had run more than ten kilometers I undoubtedly hope that this man who is working hard in a foreign country can get his own victory When he overcame countless doubts, stood on the top of the world, stood on the stage as he wished, and shed those clear tears The corners of my eyes also dropped. I shed some tears For me, this book has ended at this moment But out of curiosity about the follow-up, I still read it ... Well, it was really unexpected It was unexpected like the flying pasta god appearing in the sky The passionate and passionate feelings were all gone, and the fragmented stream of consciousness narrative Full of familiar chaos I think about it, it's the feeling I've seen countless times in the dead tree hole of NGA's horse racing girl But I can't read it with interest like I'm reading those strange documents, I can only feel sad I don't want to say any more, they are all meaningless negative accusations anyway As an ordinary person, love People who are good at literature, I understand the author's thoughts I also understand that I am not qualified to do anything to point fingers at your works But as a reader, a reader who expresses his own feelings, a reader who spends money to suffer in the last chapter No matter how many explanations there are, I can still only say "I am very disappointed. Very, very disappointed."

It's different from the final loss of Armored Punch. Maybe my perception was wrong or something else. I only saw that everything about Lao Zhang was shattered in the end. It wasn't like breaking the barriers, but simply crushing Lao Zhang. I couldn't understand the meaning of this paragraph. It was reasonable for Lao Zhang to lose. It was the worst state after all, but Why, this is an ending, but it is definitely not a good ending. I am not talking about family fun or anything like that. I just simply think that this ending is "bad". It is reasonable, but not good Because Lao Zhang is broken.

The biggest advantage of having it enabled is that you can continue to fight later. The great, please make a comeback!

I saw a post on nga, is this you?

Ma Niang's physical strength is much stronger than that of humans. It is really unreasonable to rely solely on human physical fitness to win without giving the protagonist some help.

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Judging from the physical qualities shown by Ma Niang, it can only be more terrifying than what is described in the book. . . They are all monsters that are faster than flyweights and hit harder than heavyweights. And judging from Ma Niang's stature, most of their blows would be real armor-piercing injuries to humans (super high blow force and super small force-bearing area). Maybe even a sweep and kick could break the arm. Even if they are walking on the ground, it's hard to say. Ma Niang's weight is still a mystery. It's okay to be small. If we really calculate based on their situation, it is estimated that each of them must weigh at least 100kg or more. I even think their average weight must be at least 200kg or more. As long as they carry out simple wrestling training at this weight, they can throw humans casually, but humans can't throw them.

Xdm Give me a ticket and you will be fed. Your random words are my motivation. This novel is expected to be four to five million words long. I will not fill in the water and describe a story I love.

Ma Niang's expressiveness has been greatly reduced.

Your talents are exhausted. If you really can't continue writing, finish it as soon as possible. This is the best result for newcomers. There is no need to write anything else to make up the plot.

I keep talking about starting to play, but the progress is slower and the rhythm is still dragging to death. The story has been smooth from the beginning. The protagonist understands the background of the world, sets goals, starts taking action, and later establishes a professional fighting competition. Everything goes smoothly. The protagonist's vigorous and vigorous style is hidden in the writing. Even though I don't understand fighting, I am excited. It feels better than writing about sports fighting. The protagonist's tough guy style and full of fighting spirit also inspire me. But starting from the time when I openly announced my challenge to Ma Niang to the world, the plot was half-baked. As long as such a gimmick plot remains as productive as before, I dare say that the number of people watching is more than ten times that of now. Not to mention the top ones in the monthly ticket recommendation list, at least it is more than enough to be a high-quality product, but there is no but, it is a pity 😅

I'm speechless. The plot is too long. Just to delay this scene, a supernatural plot was added. I'm speechless.

The horse race girl is a completely extraordinary creature, but the protagonist is not extraordinary enough to beat him on the head? Human technology is like a joke, as a certain master said, If a strong man meets a strong man, he relies on technology to win. Just crush the strong against the weak. Technology cannot bridge the gap between strength and weakness, just like a person can never defeat a Tyrannosaurus rex with bare hands. But if two Tyrannosaurus rex fight, the more skilled one will win.

The writing is a bit too stream-of-conscious, and there are too many past events and other things interspersed, and the coherence of the plot is directly fragmented.

To be honest, the group of fighters in Blade Tooth World are probably not much different from Ma Niang. Bazuga practiced dodge while walking, and the upper body almost disappeared in the eyes of passers-by. Pinching diamonds with bare hands at the beginning of the Fat Boy chapter Miyamoto Musashi's consciousness slash Not to mention demolishing the Statue of Liberty with bare hands, falling from a 30-story building without getting hurt, and Aikido, which are incredible things. Bagado, my super goalkeeper!

Fast forward to a thousand years, and each generation of the direct Zhang family has married a strong horse racing mother to give birth to children, and the bloodline has been continuously optimized. Later, it was even said that their bodies were inhabited by gods and demons. One hundred percent liberation.

Emotional scenes are boring. I want to watch physical fights. There are so many chapters and there is not even an interesting game process.

Although the main character is a realistic fighter, I think more lines from Beuga can be used. On the one hand, he is really handsome, but on the other hand, he is not as crazy as Haihu.

The distance control of the mouth gun, the combination punch of Diamond, the heavy hitting ability of Pereira, and the boxing quotient of Black Dragon.

Why don't you give Viagra a small golden finger? I'm really afraid that my skull will be blown off.

The progress of the plot is too slow. Up to now, Ma Niang has not fought in the first game. Now the whole feeling is just a fake plot. These days, I have even forgotten the name of the protagonist of this book. How about changing the name to Fighting Sirius? What I want to read is a memoir of Ma Niang? What I want to see is the protagonist relying on his will and trying his best. What is this?

As he watched, a slit girl and a strange investigation bureau suddenly appeared, completely incomprehensible.

I can't spread any flowers, author, I'm going to fucking beat you, you are so excited! Write such an ending, ah ah ah ah

The writing was good at first, but the more I wrote, the more messy it became. It's not that the writing was bad, but that it was messy and unorganized.

The more I read later, the more I couldn't understand it. After Lao Zhang won the championship,

This protagonist is very self-righteous. When facing Ma Niang, he also thinks he is self-righteous and withdraws his strength. He does not dare to attack the opponent's weakness.

What did I watch this night...

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! I've just read a few chapters and I'm hooked. I might have to stay up late tonight!

Can anyone tell me if there is a better story behind it?