Can a Fighter Become a Legend in the Uma Musume World?

Ma Niang's physical strength is much stronger than that of humans. It is really unreasonable to rely solely on human physical fitness to win without giving the protagonist some help.

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Judging from the physical qualities shown by Ma Niang, it can only be more terrifying than what is described in the book. . . They are all monsters that are faster than flyweights and hit harder than heavyweights. And judging from Ma Niang's stature, most of their blows would be real armor-piercing injuries to humans (super high blow force and super small force-bearing area). Maybe even a sweep and kick could break the arm. Even if they are walking on the ground, it's hard to say. Ma Niang's weight is still a mystery. It's okay to be small. If we really calculate based on their situation, it is estimated that each of them must weigh at least 100kg or more. I even think their average weight must be at least 200kg or more. As long as they carry out simple wrestling training at this weight, they can throw humans casually, but humans can't throw them.

Xdm Give me a ticket and you will be fed. Your random words are my motivation. This novel is expected to be four to five million words long. I will not fill in the water and describe a story I love.

Ma Niang's expressiveness has been greatly reduced.

Your talents are exhausted. If you really can't continue writing, finish it as soon as possible. This is the best result for newcomers. There is no need to write anything else to make up the plot.

I keep talking about starting to play, but the progress is slower and the rhythm is still dragging to death. The story has been smooth from the beginning. The protagonist understands the background of the world, sets goals, starts taking action, and later establishes a professional fighting competition. Everything goes smoothly. The protagonist's vigorous and vigorous style is hidden in the writing. Even though I don't understand fighting, I am excited. It feels better than writing about sports fighting. The protagonist's tough guy style and full of fighting spirit also inspire me. But starting from the time when I openly announced my challenge to Ma Niang to the world, the plot was half-baked. As long as such a gimmick plot remains as productive as before, I dare say that the number of people watching is more than ten times that of now. Not to mention the top ones in the monthly ticket recommendation list, at least it is more than enough to be a high-quality product, but there is no but, it is a pity 😅

I was deeply attracted by this article the first time I saw it in NGA, so I followed it all the way to the starting point I don't know much about fighting games, and I don't know enough about the relevant knowledge, but the writing style that perfectly suits my preferences, the smooth yet dramatic beginning, and the interesting character creation made me immersed in the world of a visitor from another world named Zhang Wei for a whole night Whether it was the chance encounter symbolized by Sirius, the brief love affair with Windsor Nestor, or the romance with Diewu Youmeng's preparations before the competition, and the brief contact with Lauren Donal after accidentally encountering a supernatural incident... These are the motivations for me to continue watching, but the biggest one is undoubtedly Zhang Wei himself I don't even know what words to use to describe this cross-racial warrior When he and Donal actually stood on the field, standing on each other's battlefield to fight, the resonance of cheering swelled in my chest. In those last forty seconds, my heartbeat was as fast as if I had run more than ten kilometers I undoubtedly hope that this man who is working hard in a foreign country can get his own victory When he overcame countless doubts, stood on the top of the world, stood on the stage as he wished, and shed those clear tears The corners of my eyes also dropped. I shed some tears For me, this book has ended at this moment But out of curiosity about the follow-up, I still read it Well, it was really unexpected It was unexpected like the flying pasta god appearing in the sky The passionate and passionate feelings were all gone, and the fragmented stream of consciousness narrative Full of familiar chaos I think about it, it's the feeling I've seen countless times in the dead tree hole of NGA's horse racing girl But I can't read it with interest like I'm reading those strange documents, I can only feel sad I don't want to say any more, they are all meaningless negative accusations anyway As an ordinary person, love People who are good at literature, I understand the author's thoughts I also understand that I am not qualified to do anything to point fingers at your works But as a reader, a reader who expresses his own feelings, a reader who spends money to suffer in the last chapter No matter how many explanations there are, I can still only say "I am very disappointed. Very, very disappointed."

I'm speechless. The plot is too long. Just to delay this scene, a supernatural plot was added. I'm speechless.

The writing is a bit too stream-of-conscious, and there are too many past events and other things interspersed, and the coherence of the plot is directly fragmented.