Transmigrating to the Great Liang Kingdom, Starting With a Fall Into the Water

I won't comment on the plot, but the sentences are really disjointed and difficult to read. Sometimes the sentences don't even connect to the next. Doesn't the author ever read it himself after finishing it?

This sentence doesn't make sense; it's completely incomprehensible.

The beginning was okay, but it was a bit confusing to read; I skimmed through it. 😰

I came across this because of the subject matter, thinking it would be a story about fleeing famine, but it turned out to be a combination of farming and domestic intrigue. Oh well, the golden finger (advantage of having a big villa) is definitely there. Then I opened it and started reading. And then… the female lead is truly nauseating!!

The plot is acceptable, but the writing is indeed disjointed and difficult to read.

The sentences don't flow well... It's a bit tiring to read.

It's truly well-written, both in its conception and logic! However, perhaps due to voice input and a lack of thorough proofreading, there are many awkward phrasing and inconsistencies! It's a pity to waste such a good article; otherwise, it would have garnered several times more subscriptions!

Capable people are just working for incompetent people; they may lack ability, but they're invincible. I must also say that after reading the author's three novels, I'm truly impressed. The author creates difficulties for himself, making the protagonist anxious all day long. He divides the characters into several parts and tells the same story in several chapters. It's really amazing.

The article is detailed yet rambling, requiring careful reading. The later sections, with their everyday family squabbles, demand close attention, otherwise you'll lose track of what it's about. It's incredibly long-winded and verbose.

Talkative, frustrating, and self-righteous. There's hardly any plot.