Playing the Role of Erlang Shen Yang Jian, the Police Called Me to File a Report

After reading Chapter 4, I feel that the national government crimes in the novel are extremely heinous. This kind of management will fail the country and the people until they die.

I can't understand this kind of mentality of deceiving family members. Since there is a fixed time period when these monsters are coming, why should they hide it? Even at the beginning, the male protagonist was tricked because he got the leaflet. If he didn't explain the situation to his family at this time, wouldn't the protagonist be willing to wait until they were tricked and died? So this kind of concealment logic is nonsense. Although it is a supernatural story, the basic logic must be followed, instead of the author patting the butt and setting up an illogical plot.

It's a bit of a grind, in terms of performance, you should at least get the suit together first, and there's nothing happening for 10 chapters, first the statue, then the idol, just like Lao Jiao did, what are you dawdling about? At least you can get a set of weapons, even if they are plastic ones 🤔

The subject matter is good, but the writing is watery and smelly.

I feel like a fool. My sister is wearing a headband and something is wrong. When my sister's friend disappears, can't I think of the connection? I am still an adult and have no brains.

You're 11% acting, and you're still sweating profusely while walking? I feel embarrassed when I have an eye pattern on my forehead, and I don't even feel like I am Erlang Zhenjun. Are you acting like a chicken? The horse-walking actors are more dedicated than you, not to mention that this thing is a matter of life and death, and it is really powerful. I really don't know what to be embarrassed about.

Sorry for poisoning. Goodbye! Author, stop writing books and find a job in a factory. This is my first review of a novel after reading it in so many years, but I have to say that what you wrote is really rubbish. You are really insulting the Erlang Shen in me.

The biggest problem is that the author is not good at it. If you want to write a plot, you can only let the protagonist act like a stupid dog to push it. The first dozen chapters are annoying. If you don't open your eyes to see if something is abnormal, you will only be confused. There is no way to confirm without evidence. Are you investigating the case? You need evidence. If it is written like a human being, you can still read it.

This is a typical example of the mismatch between writing power and ideas. If you have a good idea but your writing power is too stretched, the writing will be awkward and poisonous. The author should find a class

The protagonist's IQ is really questionable. I didn't see a trace of his cool demeanor, but I saw a fool.

The topic was very good, but the main character was forcibly reduced to intelligence, and there were too many poisonous points. The more I read, the more anxious I became. After reading more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't hold on anymore, so I said goodbye!

Why is Yang Jian at the lowest level of Taiyi Golden Immortal? Twenty percent of the performance must be performed by Nascent Soul. It's written like a retard. Wouldn't it be great if you play as a kid and fight monsters to level up? The start is so high. Who else can you play next?

Does anyone have a book with the same theme? The theme is very good, but the author's writing is very poor.

This is too stupid, like a mental illness. If the third sentence is not mental illness, it is provocation. Also, Erlangshen's name is "Erlangshen"?

🤫🤫🤫 You don't want to write Erlang Shen, you can write a minor god. You play such an awesome mythical character at the beginning, and then it's 13%, and the monsters next to you can't find it, and you still doubt whether the illusion is real or fake. Please, Erlang Shen has written down the price for you. Not to mention the number of water words, but also the combat power, the performance progress is 12%, which is different from ordinary people, and the physical increase is not used, so I wrote too much about the third eye that has the power to ward off evil spirits, 😡😡😡 That's it? I really don't understand. Anyway, that's all I can say, I can't stand it anymore.

Many netizens said that you can watch it without using your brain, so I stored my brain, but I couldn't watch it without using my brain. If you don't believe it, you can watch it and leave a claw after the diagnosis. I persisted until chapter 12

The subject matter is good, but the plot is fucking shit. People have slapped you in the face with the situation, so they almost shouted with the protagonist's ear, but the protagonist didn't react at all. Erlang Xiansheng Zhenjun, I think it's the fungus left by the hungry wolf. With the divine power of the second level, he just waited until the other side completed the preparations and killed the whole village before taking action.

It's like a disease. Is the Heavenly Eye just a decoration? Do you think there is a problem and you can't use it? ?

Weird events happened on a large scale across the country, but the government didn't notice at all. It's too low.

I thought at first that you were writing about a protagonist who traveled through two lives and would not fall in love with a child who grew up in the second life, but I didn't expect that I was slapped in the face as soon as I turned the next page. If it really doesn't work, it can't be changed to the protagonist's body that is already an adult when he travels through time. It's hard for me to understand that an adult in his twenties or thirties will travel through another life and grow from a baby to an adult. He will like the children who grew up with him. How can your adult thoughts disappear so easily?

It's too toxic to play the role of Erlang Shen and still struggle with whether to pay or not.

The more I write, the worse it gets. The heroine appears inexplicably and I can't understand the operation. Let's talk about playing Erlang Shen. If you have to have a eldest brother, will the eldest brother die later? Then the younger sister rebelliously falls in love with someone else and you stop her. After all, the more the role looks like, the faster she will improve. Then later, the parents are imprisoned and you have a plot to save the parents. Don't forget that Erlang Shen is single. You are so anxious to find a heroine. Also, don't forget that Erlang Shen has several brothers. How can you improve your acting progress if you don't have brothers?

This is my first time speaking. Please don't insult my intelligence and eyes 🙂

The writing is worse than that of tmd studio

10% Acting. He should have at least tens of thousands of kilograms of strength.

Brother, go find a factory to make screws. You are really not suitable for this business!

It's smelly, long and watery. A thousand words can't describe the whole plot. I just randomly named the chapters. Since you want to have a great start, don't write something that's not even awkward and stupid.

Good guy, the main character is like a retard

Very speechless. Where is your dog? The simplest thing is the eyes and the dog. It's really unbearable to have to grind and chirp here.

I'm writing about Bull Demon. It's the same as history. Find a class.