Laying Low on the Unorthodox Path to Immortality

I want to write something in-depth, but I can't control my writing skills. It looks weird.

The protagonist was abused. You downplayed the matter too much. You have to show your hatred, and then you will be more happy when you take revenge. I personally think that the indigenous protagonist is a minus point.

Such a holy mother can live so many chapters

The weird storyline written about the protagonist's character is not smooth and attractive at all.

Driving is crazy and banned, but don't worry, I'm thinking of a way, anyway, it's not on the shelves yet, it will be officially on the shelves tomorrow

Don't worry, the protagonist is definitely not a virgin. He just starts with a bit of aboriginal simplicity and will soon become mature. The plot of this book is very complete, neat and tidy, and the protagonist is already an absolute ruthless person around chapter seventy, so don't worry.

The author must be a girl, right? The writing has the flavor of a perverted romance. If you really want to write about strange things, you can look up classical materials and don't make up your own mind.

Look👀it's okay, but I feel a little bit uncomfortable. Why is the protagonist a native and there is no sense of empathy at all?

It's a pity that I don't like books with female protagonists

I'm a little surprised. Others killed everyone in that family, so why does the protagonist still blame others? In my opinion, no one in that family is good.