Shocking! The Game I Designed Has Descended into Reality

The writing is pretty good, but I need to pay more attention to the erhuayin. As a southerner, I am not very used to the erhuayin. Everything else is pretty good, and the settings are also good.

When will it be put on the shelves? I'm sure it will be fully subscribed and supported. It's a really good book.

The pace is very fast. Basically, the first three chapters have reached a small peak of the plot, and the protagonist's IQ is online. It's okay to read so far. I'll save it first and gain some weight before reading.

The three moles were killed as soon as they appeared? I thought it was a mini-boss

I don't know what the author's purpose was in writing the character Xu Taozi. I personally feel it's too pretentious.

The protagonist's combat power improves very quickly, and the fights are basically crushing rounds, which is very exciting.

Updates should be faster. It's not enough to watch. Is it okay to update three times a day?

The character of the protagonist is okay. Basically, he kills decisively without being sloppy. It would be better if the fighting scenes were more grand.

To be honest, I can't accept the fact that people die at every turn. After all, this is a game. Realistically speaking, can't you do something like resurrection? Even if you are talking about another world, I am not so disgusted.

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