Shocking! The Game I Designed Has Descended into Reality

The writing is quite good, but the use of retroflex endings could be improved; as a southerner, I'm not used to them. Otherwise, it's great, and the premise is also good.

When will it be available? I'll definitely subscribe to the whole thing when it's released; it's a really great book.

The pacing is fast; the plot reaches a minor peak in the first three chapters, and the protagonist is quite intelligent. It's a good read so far. I'll add it to my favorites and read it later when more chapters have been released.

Three moles and he got taken down right after he appeared? I thought he was a mini-boss.

I don't know what the author's purpose was in writing the character Xu Taozi; personally, I feel she's too pretentious and overdoing it.

The protagonist's combat power increases quite quickly, and the battles are basically one-sided massacres, which is very satisfying!

Please update faster, I can't get enough! Can you update three times a day?

The protagonist's personality is decent; he's decisive and ruthless, without any hesitation. It would be even better if the fight scenes were more epic.

To be honest, I can't accept the fact that people die so often. After all, this is a game. In reality, can't you at least add a respawn point or something? Even if you were talking about another world, I wouldn't be this averse to it.

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