Martial Arts Immortality: Set a Goal and Complete It

I thought it was set to become a god, but I became a god directly. I felt lonely after watching it.

The author has already been put on the shelves. How long can we wait for more updates?

The creativity of the book is quite good, but the author is not very good at writing and has some witty plots. The first currency system is confusing (not many authors can write it well), but the most important thing is the city entry fee of 100 Wen. Speechless😒. Can you imagine that providers of daily necessities such as firewood collectors, evening incense collectors, farmers selling rice, etc. Have to be charged 100 Wen every time they provide materials or services. Selling firewood once is not much more than the city entrance fee (the protagonist's second uncle only earns 100 Wen a month to work as a laborer). In the end, these necessities were unable to enter the city, and the city collapsed long ago. The second one is that Chen Sanye forced the protagonist to hunt tigers and leopards. Another way to put this plot is that a gangster leader in a village knew that Wu Song had the ability to hunt tigers, and coerced Wu Song into hunting a tiger for him. If Wu Song didn't go, he captured Wu Dalang and Pan Jinlian forced Wu Song to hunt tigers. If Wu Song agreed to hunt tigers and came back with the tigers, the gangster leader was not prepared to pay the promised tiger hunting money, and would kill Wu Song and take away all Wu Song's family property (at that time, Mr. Chen didn't know whether the protagonist could hunt tigers). Ridiculous. People can kill tigers, but they can't kill you.

In order to post, I subscribed to a chapter. I couldn't bear to read Chapter 16, but I was able to read it because this golden finger attracted me.        ，，，，，！ Ask, ask hard, write down all your guesses, until you can't think of anything to ask. Do you understand goal splitting? With the goal, it is divided into three steps, five steps, and ten steps, plus the word safety. As a result, the author played like this? Another product whose golden finger is too wide to grasp! There are a lot of fish problems and bugs in the river. There is food in the river. In years of famine, people are afraid of starving to death, so how can they let it go? If there is something weird, how many people will ignore it? Besides, the width of the river is not very long, so people only try to drain the river water to get food. Raise your hands if you haven't heard of the saying that you can live off the mountain and live on the water.        ，，，，？ Fast forward three months and you're laughing at me. The development time of the first three months has been briefly mentioned, and the protagonist only needs a bow and arrow to get started? This golden finger has been wronged.

The golden finger is too wide open and cannot be controlled at all. For example, the protagonist wants to make money by hunting and enter the city. In fact, after spending 100 yuan to enter the city, isn't it easy to make money by entering a gambling house? Just use cheats to get safe money. Some people even say that those who pick up money are those who pick up money. This golden finger has no limit on the number of times it can be used. It means omniscience, and omniscience means omnipotence. Every safe one-two punch can snowball and complete an exponential explosion.

Goldfinger's abilities are limited, so don't make it a concept level, and don't be so tough on it, okay? Taking the example of killing tigers and wild boars, it is obvious that the level is deliberately suppressed. When the normal strength is not enough, shouldn't this golden finger guide the protagonist to set up traps? Bite the bullet and let the protagonist kill himself? There is also a concept-level cheat to make money. Are you telling me that the only way to make money is to exchange wild boars for money? Normal people don't take this path. Although this book looks okay, don't add a conceptual level of disgusting people. Ordinary gold fingers are ordinary gold fingers. You must add a prefix.

Well, maybe I don't fit the author's thinking. First of all, since the protagonist knows that he has traveled through time (the process of reviving a dead body), modern people must know that there are unclean things in the river. Then Goldfinger has shown that he can become a god, which means that there must be a cultivation civilization in this world (in the end, the protagonist has no idea of ​​becoming an immortal except for thinking about becoming a god at the beginning and then forgot about it). Of course, I understand that the author wants to write more and directly let the protagonist want to practice martial arts and not become an immortal. I understand.

The protagonist's master, a peerless genius, was deposed due to internal fighting. The human race was raised and killed by demons as pigs. The protagonist was besieged and killed by dozens of high-level people in the sect. After surviving for several months, he was besieged and killed by dozens of the same realms of the strongest sect. The protagonist's master was also besieged and killed. The protagonist's father and brother were besieged and killed by demons. From this, we can conclude that this world is not suitable for geniuses and righteousness, and there is serious internal fighting. I hope those who travel through it will be careful.

This setting is completely suitable for matryoshka dolls. How to become a god? He was struck by lightning for three days. How to withstand lightning strikes for three days? What a thunder-resistant fruit. Then how to get the fruit safely? Wait, wait. Or simply set up a one-step process to learn how to become a god safely and risk-free.

I watched it and thought it was pretty good at first, but as I watched it I always felt like something was wrong. Then I just went to work for a while and came back to watch it and finally found the problem. It was too compact. All kinds of problems appeared when the protagonist came, forcing the protagonist to move forward. It was okay if I kept watching, but once I stopped and started watching again, I couldn't watch it.

There are too many bugs in the world background. . The biggest thing is that demonic chaos happens too frequently, once in more than a hundred years, every thirty years, and each time the population is only a few hundred million. It is impossible to develop so many people in more than a hundred years, and there are still so many small cities. The most ridiculous thing is that except for the three main cities, other cities even I don't know about the demonic chaos, and people in other cities just created it out of thin air. People in big cities know that there has been demonic chaos for more than a hundred years. How stupid do you have to be to let people who have survived the demonic chaos go to small towns to spread their branches? And they don't know anything for more than a hundred years. How did their ancestors come here?

I don't know why, but when I read novels, I really hate cumbersome characters, such as parents, younger brothers and sisters. I prefer the main character to be alone. If it's a big story, it's okay to have a single heroine. In novels, if this is the case, I will work hard, have a sense of responsibility, want to live a better life, have a sense of family, and pity others. But I don't know why. Anyway, when I read a novel about my family, I feel very sick and overwhelmed. It's a bunch of rubbish and it's all a burden. I can't do it well no matter what I do. Is it because the author is not good at writing and can't empathize or what to say. Anime doesn't feel like this, it's just like text novels.

The character of the owner's daughter is really nonsense. She is avoiding people who are chasing her, and she is so careless. How does the owner teach his daughter? Are you afraid that your daughter will not be killed? In this dark and windy world, anyone who is not vigilant would have died long ago.

This golden finger can be changed. Changed to strategy system. The strategy objectives are trigger-based, and you can choose from several options. Otherwise, if you just say "Become a god after three days of lightning strike and stop playing", it will give people the impression that you are really considerate of Goldfinger... It is not difficult for others at all... Your three-day thunderbolt to become a god, and the actual usage behind it, these are two concepts... The former is a weapon of the law of cause and effect, and the latter is a game strategy... This golden finger is completely useless... Although if you ask me to say, if you write it directly according to the law of cause and effect, it will collapse in a few chapters... So, it's a waste of time. Why not just be more straightforward and just tell the strategy... Normal logic, the condition for you to become a god is to survive three days of lightning strikes, then your next question should be, how to survive three days of lightning strikes, one day, half a day... You should always find a path along this line. You can infinitely subdivide it into the first step is martial arts training, the next step is to enter the city, and what to do with the next step, but it is really confusing to just leave it alone...

What the hell? At the end of the human race, only the protagonist can save the world. It's still early in the novel. Speechless. Let you travel through time and see if you can survive. There are always people who like to write this kind of book. Speechless.

Change to a cheat finger. You can't write with this cheat finger. This cheat finger is equivalent to predicting the future. With this function, you can eat as much as you want. It's like digging a hole in advance for a wild beast to pass by. If you just fall in and get stoned to death, it's the end of the world.

After I placed an initial subscription for you, I just commented from the perspective of a reader. It doesn't count as a comment, it's just common sense. Human beings are really not that fragile. The protagonist in the book beat a wild boar and caused many people to marvel. This is really contrary to common sense. As long as they are carbon-based creatures, are not invulnerable, and are still made of flesh and blood, they are scum in front of Homo sapiens who can use tools. You can check the information. In ancient times, where Homo sapiens passed by, many land creatures were eaten to extinction. You can even check hunting videos of primitive African tribes on Baidu. I have seen a video of a dozen hunters throwing spears around an elephant, instantly turning the elephant into a hedgehog. Hippos and crocodiles were taken away by the flying spears without even raising their heads in the water. I remember that there was a primitive tribe in Africa. The rite of passage for adult men in the tribe was to hunt a lion. This caused the lion to smell the scent of the tribe and run away.

It takes ten days to get calluses out if you write in a mess and without any brains? I was so hungry that I couldn't walk. After ten days, I was able to shoot hundreds of arrows. Can I still shoot while running? May I ask what magic elixir you took? Write it in the book too

In the year of the great famine, how could there be any living things in the mountains and rivers? You wrote about the famine yourself, and how could there be anything to raise pigs? There were no wild vegetables, and all the plants were eaten by you.

The routine is getting boring and too old, and the golden finger feels like it is useless. Such an awesome golden finger does not need to be used anymore.

Today's books are not as rigorous as Tomato

Same as above, you can talk about the various uses of this golden finger, good ones will be adopted.

The world view is so comprehensive but it's so unfinished. Isn't there even an author's outline?

It was said before that the peak of the Fusion of God Realm is the peak of the first step, and it was also said that humans cannot break through the second step. Now the Peak of Fusion of God Realm is the second step, which is contradictory...

Chapter 100 has been frustrating since it was released. I still love being the Riddler.

😥😥😥Speechless=_=!

I haven't watched it yet. Is he a loser? ? ?

Wrong sentences have typos, don't change them even after saying them, they slip away, it's a waste of money

Are you waiting for the finale? !

One chapter per day is too outrageous