Ms. Player, Please Don't Cast Spells on Me.

As the title states, I enjoyed watching it anyway, and the jokes were played to a moderate degree throughout, and I didn't write specifically for the purpose of making jokes; I kept wanting to get into bed while watching it. In short, there is nothing bad about this book except the ending.

A very interesting piece of music, rated (4.5/5), Highly recommended! The advantages are obvious. The protagonist is well-written and has a strong sense of immersion. I couldn't stop laughing when I watched it. The writing is extremely smooth, the rhythm is great, and the ability to stir emotions is top-notch! Obviously, this is the top batch of books. If it doesn't collapse, it will be the first batch of high-quality books to be ordered, and it will be rushed towards the direction of thousands of orders. If I have to say there are any shortcomings, the most important thing is that it is not easy to follow the reading. When I was reading, the mood kept getting stuck and I couldn't get up, which was a bit uncomfortable. Of course, this can also be evaluated as an advantage. After all, keeping one's appetite is one of the author's basic skills. [Separating line, the following is a poison to others, personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] But, for me. The background setting is a bit complicated and confusing. I still don't understand what the background story is. The author made it very clear before that the role of gods absorbs emotional energy from ordinary people, and then slowly rises through the ranks. It seems to be an upgrade article, but the feeling of upgradability is not written out, it is more like an invincible article. The protagonist has already reached the highest combat power at the beginning, which makes it difficult for people to rely on the direction of upgrading. The overall combat power is a bit confusing, giving people the feeling that they have to write about upgrades and invincibility at the same time, and they also have to write about copywriting, which is a bit complicated but not refined. But perhaps because it is Le Ziwen as a whole, these things are just background boards, and the obstacles to reading the work are not that big. So if you ignore this point, this work is indeed quite good. What I am most worried about now is how many thousands of words this book can contain.

Update soon, I can't wait to use your book as a spell casting material 😌

Lele, Lezi books, Lezi people. I just want to see the players go crazy! When I think of the scenes in the book where people are so painful that they go insane, I feel so happy that I can't help myself! (Distortion) Both Shanol and the performance system have grown on my xp. I really look forward to the protagonist being trained by fans to look like Shanol! (Twisted) Mind control, personality modification, memory overwriting... All of them are so exciting! (Twisted) I really hope that the protagonist and the players can spend a painful life (happy) (Yes, I know I am perverted)

This cover is great! I want to swim for fire!

Why don't you change it to "How can the Shota Kami who wants to collect incense and faith from his fans be an electronic yandere succubus?"

The "god" who earns faith × The "clown" who makes a living by performing arts √

The screen-peeping skill can be used as a whole, and it can provide some hidden plots that break through the fourth wall. I remember I saw a picture of an otaku touching a woman on the screen, and the woman was crying. It feels very shocking, and it can definitely increase the emotional harvest value of otakus.

Crazy, time travel otome game. We will arrange 800 husbands for you in minutes to form a male-to-male CP with you. Are you afraid? 🐶Contemporary time-travelers really dare to go to all kinds of dragons and tigers' dens.

Okay, okay, I don't believe people when they say you are a eunuch. It's my fault.

What does it mean to cast a spell on an object? ? ?

Friendly reminder The protagonist setting of this book: the appearance of Slaanesh, the behavior of Khorne, the strategy of Tzeentch, and the mercy of Nurgle

As expected of you, if you don't update for three days, you will become a eunuch's nest even if you don't know how to use a trumpet.

What do you think of Chanol? Feeling a bit like Joan of Arc

I feel like this book isn't too long, and I admire the content and imaginative thinking. However, there has been a problem with the coordination of the world view since the players who responded to the battle. (I can accept that a love game has a character with explosive combat power, and I can also accept that some people do not regard this game as a love game, but I don't quite understand why this character can accept fighting players on the condition of finding another player to fall in love with. It feels a little conflict with Shanoer's character, or maybe it's because I have little experience (//∇//)) Currently, I am still looking forward to the plot of Undertale. I haven't seen this kind of plot in a long time ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

God=clown, protagonist=god, protagonist=clown🤡

The latest plot, my head tells me it's weird, and my other head tells me I like it very much, let me not worry about it so much

In fact, this book has a problem that many people ignore, that is, there are too many characters. There are too many characters, and the space assigned to a single character will be greatly reduced, resulting in the supporting characters not having a complete character development at all. After reading over a hundred chapters, you asked me what the names of the characters other than the protagonist were, their temperament, their strengths and weaknesses... I didn't remember. I just remembered a female anchor and her sister, but forgot everything else. There are a lot of characters on the stage, and there is no very clear distinction between the characters. There are almost no real personal stories, and the supporting characters have a very weak sense of existence. And this book is a Japanese light novel whose main selling point is the interaction between the supporting characters and the protagonist. The absence of supporting characters makes the book feel very average. Online novels are updated with four to five thousand words a day, so the number of characters must be streamlined and the images must be very distinct. Physical books can prevent hundreds of thousands of words from appearing when a character is incompletely developed, because readers can read the plot in a relatively concentrated period of time, but online books cannot. The absence of a half-finished character in a web article for more than 100,000 words means that he has been hidden for more than half a month or even a month. For most casual readers, they have long forgotten who this person is. If the character image does not have a particularly outstanding and unique color, the name is not easy to remember, and there are few personal plots, then this character is a non-existent person for readers. This is very fatal for Japanese light novels, because light novels do not have a prominent protagonist's growth line and rely on outstanding supporting characters to attract readers. And this book failed in the creation of supporting characters. Without outstanding characters, there is no way to cultivate character fans and inspire readers' "cooking power". For an urban love fantasy light novel like this book, no character chef means no cp speculation, no discussion of party disputes, and no popularity. Big G special G, totally pizza.

Try writing unit dramas. The world view of the main line can be very large, but the world view of each unit is smaller. If you can't stand it, you can change the map for the ending, a new chapter and a new story to ensure freshness. Classic characters from the past can occasionally appear as easter eggs. Your writing style is suitable for the box garden type. The small space is filled with surprises. Readers follow the protagonist and read, and leave with some souvenirs after watching a world. As long as the protagonist does not collapse, there will always be people looking forward to the next world.

The first game was well written, but the second one relied a little too much on the players of the previous game to solve problems. If the princess had not played this background, it would be an overturn. I feel that it should be more based on the game's own settings, which is completely different from what was mentioned in the early stage of referring to Undertale and escape.

Alas, I believe there are still some people who subscribe, and I still have 300 points left to reward you with a disciple. I will not dare to read your books in the future, even if they are good-looking and have few words, I will not dare to pursue them anymore. I can only say that there is no guarantee for the author of Eunuch 😭

I ran a few character designs of Qing Yehui, I don't know if they suit my collaborator's taste The reason why there are tears is because when I applied the tear mole, zzai really thought there were tears. QAQ But it just seems to highlight the male succubus. I still feel pity for it? A few more half-length photos

Damn it, I haven't updated it in 2 days. I'm not going to die.

(Crazy work, contains spoilers) "Xia Nuoer... Xia Nuoer..." On the screen was a charming young man The girl who was staring at him was sitting leisurely on the chair, leaning against the back of the chair with a little force Let the chair fall backwards, keeping it in a state of not falling But the figure in his sight never left Just as the chair hit the ground, the sound became louder and louder The part in the boy's eyes gradually became smaller from bottom to top ... "Xianuoer" has a thin waist Da! "Xianuoer." Neck Thump! "Xianuoer?" Cheeks Dang! "Xianuoer!" Eyes Bang! ... Finally, the chair completely overturned backwards It felt like time had slowed down The girl and the chair fell backward slowly and unswervingly At this time, the girl's eyes finally broke away from the person on the screen in front of her "Xia..." No sound came from the girl's ears Only the severe pain remaining in her body br>Let the corners of her mouth rise high Let out a sweet sigh "hee~~~r" "So... Sweet..." —————————————— In the middle of the garden, the girl seemed to see a pair of butterflies flying among the flowers Although she knew it was her own body But watching the young man put his side face to the cheek of the person opposite A dark emotion began to burst out in his heart "It's jealousy." That's me, but... Why not me They are just puppets It's not worth your more emotions You, my..., I said that I will love you forever, so you should " You should only love me forever" "The only one, me" ———————————— In the maze, the girl was trying to improve her level Crazy killing in silence She knew that the monsters were converted from the save files of other players But when she thought that they had briefly owned Shanol she became jealous Crazy Finally, she was hindered It seemed to be an angry guardian The girl could not resist and was finally defeated Before she died, she screamed like a vent "He! Is mine!" While waiting for rebirth, the girl outside the screen anxiously gnawed her fingernails Hurry up, hurry up Find That village Then find him Take him away, find him, and "Tell him not to worry so much" —————————— The guardian with only one breath left The face similar to hers was stabbed in a mess The girl dragged the fake's foot with one hand Embarked on the road to find her love

I finally realized that the title of the book is a little different from the content of the story. Should I change the title quickly?🙂

After going around in a circle, the update time has to go back again.

There are too many characters, Qiangwei is not very good to watch, but the rest of it is good to watch. The main themes are novel and attract me to continue reading.