Football: I Am Really Just a Midfield Engineer!

The main thing is the Macau team, right? The protagonist can't lead it. The strength of the Macau team and a player with the level of a football champion can't beat South Korea and Japan. The gap is really too big. Some people will be scolded when writing about the game like this. If you really want to write about the Macau team, you have to ignore it and find a reason for the protagonist not to join the national football team. Otherwise, you can't carry Asia's fourth-rate team into the World Cup alone, right?

The special start, starting from the Russian Super League, is indeed novel, and the writing is not bad. After the Russian Super League, you can consider the Red Army Liverpool.

Support 🐶 friends. This kid doesn't write well and reads pictures every day.

Macau can't stand it any longer. There are not as many football players in Macau as there are national football teams. Macau is no longer a matter of size. It's better to write about Macau than the national football team.

A small suggestion is that the rhythm of the Russian Super League should be as fast as possible, and go to the five major leagues as soon as possible. I don't know many teams in the Russian Super League, and the sense of immersion is a bit low 😂

The writing is quite good, but it lacks a bit of passion. There is no explanation for the crazy shouting, and it feels like something is missing. The protagonist has a defense of 90+, and has unbeatable physical fitness. He is a top defensive midfielder, and he is not yet 20 years old. He is a rising star who has made a name for himself in several major leagues. Why does he still seem to have just debuted? Also, playing all the time is actually very boring. There is no need to write too much about the relationship. It is not necessary. But after playing in the Premier League and playing against so many wealthy stars, I performed well. As a result, the media's pursuit, the opponent's opinion, the fans' love, and the praise of the famous stars were not included. This is a bit unreasonable.

If you would rather not write about the national team, you can still join Macau. Stop watching. Annoying.

I feel like what I'm writing now is a bit boring and lacks passion. It is recommended that you write down the reactions outside and on the court, which will make it more enjoyable to watch. The description on the court can also be written in more detail, such as how the goal was scored and how the pass was passed.

Why do I show you have written ten chapters?

The current problem with this book may be that it lacks passion and the desire to read it. It is relatively unpopular with the Russian league. But this start is really eye-catching. In fact, this book can help you practice your writing skills and how to make your writing more passionate and make people have the desire to chase. Then the next book will be about the Russian league. But it takes a few chapters to cover it, and the beginning of the chapter is about entering the five major leagues. Then when I recalled it, I asked how I entered the Russian Super League and how I managed to play football in Russia? The subject matter is novel enough. The rest is to see if your writing style is familiar to everyone. Come on, author!

There are currently two problems in the entire book: 1. The protagonist has grown too fast, causing the invincibility state to be too fierce, making the protagonist's "growth" unable to be reflected 2. Time advances too fast, and the protagonist's abilities are not fully demonstrated in the game. Like writing a running account, the main perspective changes from "Gong Bin" to Liverpool

I hope I can go to Liverpool. I haven't seen many books going to our army.

Russia is at war. Will a shell make the protagonist eat a box lunch? The book is finished.

What a talent. This is the second book I've seen starting from the Russian Super League. The last one was written by Lin Hai.

Come on, the author writes, and I'll give you a monthly pass

Isn't it the Barcelona best actor behind Sammer? Why has it changed?

Why are the current novel introductions so confusing? Why don't you want to score?

Who is Mi Kebai? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

If you write a story about a hammer, the protagonist plays for Liverpool for one season, and then just scores goals and assists in double figures and then disappears, is that a fool's errand? Sometimes the score of the game is not written down, it's just a win! So what am I paying to see? Look so lonely?

Klopp written by the author is more interesting than the protagonist. If you have the chance, you can try coaching Wenha