Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Bamboo Spiritual Roots

Bamboo spirit root? Bamboo carving? Why not change it to Shalinggen? It's better. The Tulinggen variant can be transformed into Shalingen. Wouldn't it be more in line with everyone's taste?

Let me explain to readers: There is no outline in the Qi training period, but there is a detailed outline in the foundation building period. The first fifteen chapters set up foreshadowing plots, and the pace is fast. Chapter 16 begins to slow down the pace and describe in more detail.

It feels like the narrative speed is too fast. It seems that it will be over in the next second. Should the author consider slowing down the narrative speed and making it more detailed?

When I see something with useless spiritual roots or five spiritual roots, I have no desire to continue reading.

Liushuiwen. I only see the outline and almost nothing else. Tasteless.

Please keep it in your collection while the book is new. If you have any typos or useful suggestions, please point them out and I will correct them.

Hmm, it's interesting, but I don't know if I can write it down.

Please read the new book. If you have any shortcomings, please comment directly and I will take action.

It's okay. I hope the author pays more attention to character transformation and makes the writing smoother.

There are weapon spiritual roots, ethereal spiritual roots, and next to them there are those who cultivate immortality scientifically without spiritual roots. Bamboo spiritual roots are so ugly.

It's a bit confusing, with too many characters. After reading two chapters, I still don't understand it. I feel inexplicable and bland!

Don't use haha ​​in dialogue, it seems frivolous and lacks confidence.

Thank you all readers for your investment, and thank you for your candid and thoughtful recommendations. It's too tiring for newcomers to blindly follow the tradition of writing fairy tales, and the writing style is too poor. Let's write fan fiction about anime that we like. Power generation for love, don't be tired and don't be afraid of hitting the street. Opened a small account, see you in the world. Sorry for the investment brothers. One bow and two bows. Bow again. Bye.