Douluo: I've Already Become an Immortal, Why Should I Still Be Titled Douluo?

I wrote three episodes of "One Minute Thing", four words to describe it, nonsense literature

Too ancient, content. After reading half of it, I found that the writing style of the whole article is from around 17 years old. It is said that he is a novice writer and a bit of a literary youth. To be honest, I don't know if the author is simply practicing writing or if he is suffering from literary youth disease. In short, it is very painful to read, or is he not writing a novice novel at all?

The content looks like ancient national transportation 🙄

I don't understand. If a passerby asks you to play monkey, you should immediately do it. If I tell you to kill anyone who wants to see your sword, don't you want to see my sword? You can also kill chickens to scare monkeys. Doesn't it make you more powerful? Swords are weapons that kill people. If you are not a performer, you just show off. In the eyes of those who have swords, you are just a younger brother.

In Douluo Continent to spread the law and cultivate immortality, you are really not afraid that the love brains in Douluo Continent will destroy the world for love in the end. These love brains in Douluo Continent feel even scarier than the love brains in current TV series. The main character only wants love, and everything else is unimportant and does not care about anything.

As everyone knows, one can have divine consciousness during the period of cultivating immortals and practicing Qi, and only when Douluo becomes a god can one have divine consciousness.

Isn't it funny how you can always look shocked? It's such a big deal, but I'm convinced you can write 6 chapters.

Do you know someone is number ten? At the age of 4, he moved to the Blood Realm. He could swing a hundred and eighty kilograms with one arm. That thing of the God King is not one punch at a time.

There is really a lot of nonsense, hard water, what will happen to the immortal cultivator if he leaves this ink mark? The first task is to move a stone. Where does all this nonsense come from? Just move it. If the Soul King blocks the way, just give him a slap to scare the monkeys.

A stone in the middle of the road can be used to water 10 cards. It can be seen that there are paid chapters later. After reading this book, I felt that my IQ was insulted. The monthly tickets must be paid by someone 😰

The second chapter starts to disgust people, a lot of nonsense

This is a pretentious article. I don't even know what the protagonist is doing in Douluo Continent. It is both watery and poisonous.

Awesome, the second chapter is poisonous, the plot, characters and plot are all awkward, but it can still be written, awesome 🙂

After reading the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. Qi training or physical training, I remember it was linked to many martial arts novels Xiantianxia (The Mirror of Acquired Heaven), but I misremembered. I read it a few years ago. Foundation Building is too lame.

It's garbage among garbage. After reading a few chapters, it's full of poisonous points.

The division of realms is very consistent with the title of fantasy "sewer". I haven't read it yet, so I'll comment first after reading the introduction 😃

There is no point in playing monkey on the street. There is no merit in preaching on the street. You need to build a dojo in the forest and hold a forum to preach. There are dozens of million-year-old soul beasts lined up on both sides, talking with BGm and light and shadow.

It's watery and poisonous, and there's too much nonsense.

The exercises generally written are a bit outrageous. There are so many exercises that can be used in the foundation building period and there is no thunder tribulation.

I put poison when I opened the map, and met Qian Renxue and Liuerlong as soon as I came out.

I'm just curious whether people in the Douluo World who become immortals ascend to the legendary fairy world or the divine realm of the Douluo World.

In ancient times, Long Ao Tianwen was ridiculed for no apparent reason and then slapped in the face.

There are many small realms missing here, such as the Tribulation Pill

There is no one in the book, including the protagonist, who looks like Shapi