
I, the Reincarnated Holy Lord, Am Undercover at Dragon Clan Kassel Academy
转生圣主的我卧底龙族卡塞尔学院
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- Completed
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- 163k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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1. The protagonist feels very awkward, and it would be better to give him the power of the Holy Lord than to a pig. 2. The author also said that the protagonist with the Ox Talisman can easily lift a train. I think the author probably doesn't know what this concept is, otherwise he would not write the protagonist... How should I put it, he seems to be very weak. According to the original work, with this power, as long as he does not encounter the Dragon King with a dragon body, anyone who comes will be able to punch him. Of course, except for the speedster 3, and I didn't see who the heroine was after reading Chapter 50. Why do I want to create my own heroine? 4. The most unbearable thing for me was when I met the dragon-turned-female Deadpool in China. Why are you running? With your strength, you can kick her to pieces with one kick. And the part about the moon is just a one-step answer. 5. Finally, I would like to remind the author that the Uesugi family only consists of Eri and the former emperor. There is no third person. How can you get a sister for Eri out of thin air?
Shennong is here, complaining. First, the timeline is confusing. Concubine Ming has just entered school, and the Kuimen plan has not yet started. Caesar went to the Three Gorges to kill the Hammer Dragon King; Second, there is a logic error. In the original work, all three of the eight Seraki families are dead except for the Uesugi family, and they are the only Uesugi family. This senior's surname is Uesugi. Third, the problem of setting is that the Holy Lord and the eight demons are one-sixteenth of the world, and your statement is the weakest group. The twelve talismans were separated from the Holy Lord after Lope defeated him. The Holy Lord corresponds to the "Li" of the Bagua, and the demonic energy of fire is the core of his power. The Holy Lord himself is still a great magician, and the twelve talismans are more like separate magical abilities (of course this is only a personal opinion). Fourth, basic common sense, the chapter on Curse Blue insults the book I have read for more than ten years, which is outrageous. Fifth, there is the problem of character design. The actions of the childhood sweetheart of the male protagonist at the beginning and the subsequent magical operations after enrolling in school are really disgusting. I don't know if it's the author's writing skills or something else, but the character design is quite disgusting. If you consider the safety of the other person (I didn't see this in the article, I only saw that the male protagonist Qingmei thought she was superior to others, and then abandoned the male protagonist), then break it off immediately, instead of fantasizing about the other person's blood after seeing her noble blood, and how the male protagonist still likes her, my evaluation is ridiculous! Nausea! There are others, which I won't go into details here. It disgusts me so much that I don't want to write about it anymore!
I have always had this idea, and I especially hope someone can write it down, but I didn't expect that what was written would actually be a defense reply.
I usually don't criticize in the comment area, but I have criticized the books of all the people, including the author who stopped for three seconds and couldn't grab the gun to kill him. He was really tough and didn't criticize me before it was put on the shelves.
? ? ? Have you never read a book? All junior high school students know what it is like on the moon. The temperature is over 100 during the day and over 100 below zero at night. The air is so thin that it cannot even travel. You also used the rat charm to resurrect Kassel with photos on your cell phone? Why don't you resurrect Superman? Then you can clear the level directly. And if you open a dust-free place on the moon, there will be oxygen? Genius, discharged from hospital! You are such a tang.
What qualifications does the Japanese branch have to send missions to Super S?
This so-called childhood sweetheart sounds like trash and makes me feel disgusting.
After reading it, I got the feeling that the author has never read the original work 😅
This is the first time I saw reviews of recommended books, all of which were scolding.
Is Curse Lan dead now? No matter how bad it is, it's still the 8 demons, right?
It's disgusting. To be honest, the power of the Holy Lord is better for a dog than for the protagonist. I joined Kassel not to find the twelve talismans, but to be a dog. With the Shadow Army, most of the talismans can be obtained, so I won't go there.
The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not. The plot has a lot of breakdowns. Combat strength also collapsed
The power of the Holy Lord is given to the male protagonist and you are still holding back like this. Don't insult the Holy Lord.
The Holy Lord is in the Dragon Clan. It is a good subject to be written like this, and it is also awesome. There was a lot of scolding, which at least proves that the author did not spend any money. The most taboo thing about the dragon clan is (in my personal opinion) magical plot changes. If the author fabricates a holy lord out of thin air to travel through the world of the dragon clan, and his power is weakened, it would be fine, but he has to add an apostle and separate the spell. For readers, it is almost 2024 in 2023 (●—●). If you still engage in this kind of plot, the audience will be too small.
What can I say, the writing doesn't feel like a dragon at all, the plot line is also messy, and the power of the Holy Lord is not reflected, anyway, it is very embarrassing. . .
With such a good subject matter, you are also a real talent when you write something so ugly.
Stop writing, are you deliberately making people disgusting?
Don't look at the garbage. You may be poisoned and die.
Even if the Holy Lord has the same strength as ordinary people, he will still be covered by the black energy, as long as the balance is not broken
The protagonist is like a five. I came to see the Holy Lord Shark Sifang, not to see Boiling Sheep.
I can only say that the plot is very awkward, the setting is unreasonable, and the feeling after watching it is not very good, but this is not a reason to scold someone casually. I don't know what is happening with the Internet nowadays. There is such a strong smell of gunpowder that many promising novels have been forced to stop. Just because they are not in line with personal tastes, they have started to fight with each other.