I Built a Civilization on a Desert Island

I've read Chapter 20, and here's a brief summary: 1. The heroine seems to be set up to be a CEO or something, and the ending is completely incompetent and stupid. Currently, only men can survive, and you can't even form a team. How did you learn management? 2. The man is set as a wilderness survival master. He ends up not knowing how to make weapons, but only makes food in 10 days, and even kills himself and goes into the sea to fight with sharks! A part-time job has no brains. Anyone who doesn't know how to survive knows not to get hurt and needs to get weapons. 3. Others come to grab food. Food, a deserted island, survival, why don't you kill the person, leave him half disabled and then let him go? The second time someone comes to grab the food, do you let them take it all? The third time, I caught a woman and asked the male protagonist to do something. I don't remember and I didn't read it after that 4. Conclusion I wanted to write a cool article, but it didn't make me happy. There was no logic at all, and the character setting was messed up. What are you still?

I could barely watch it at first. Later, when they come to give you all the food and take away it, won't you resist? Since they don't even dare to touch you, how much food can you get by killing that little devil? If you just tell them how much food you killed that person, wouldn't that be the end of it? If you insist on taking away all the food for them, I can't understand why you ran away on your own. The most basic thing is that you just tell them how much food they need to kill the Japs and how much food they need to kill the lackey. Isn't that enough? Well, I want to treat you like a cash machine, I can't figure it out.

It's fine if others don't like it. Anyway, I'm fine with it. Authors don't have to listen to those people. They stick to themselves. Everyone has their own preferences. Some people just leave if they don't like it. Don't take yourself too seriously. If the earth is gone, we won't continue to move around. Let's have some moral integrity. How many authors have been forced to regress by you. By then, they will all be studio articles and no one will have to read them. Are you satisfied?

It's said to be about building civilization, but the rest is just to play desert island survival with a bunch of women, and the men are still impotent.

Dozens of people were ruled by three Japanese. They had no weapons, ammunition, or support. If they were killed, they would be gone.

Disgusting people😡

Instead of all the yelling and cursing, how did this starting point lead to the release of this book?

It's been more than 150 chapters and you still have no trace of civilization. You don't even have a safe place to hide in Tibet. There are endless enemies. When will you be able to build civilization? The title seems to be a construction flow, but in reality it is like an apocalypse flow.

I feel that the author's character design of the male protagonist is too inhumane. He does not have the cunning and selfishness of a small bourgeoisie. In addition to simplicity, he is kind and responsible. A beautiful woman can bear it to her lips and use her own blood to save others. Author, if you could time travel, could you do this and transcend human nature? Is this a human being? He is a pure inhumane saint walking in the world, give up reading decisively and stop wasting your time. I advise you to be kind and let the protagonist bring out the humanity of a steel worker on a construction site. Could it be that the moment you get the system, people's self-cultivation and values ​​are elevated to the level of saints? If you don't know how to write, you don't have to write. The author should commit suicide.

A group of people come, kill, another group of people come, continue to kill, another group of people come, continue to kill, endless routine

This is not a migrant worker, just a fat otaku.

What follows is an idiotic plot with all kinds of foreigners infiltrating the scene.

Death from poison💀

A cool article is not like a cool article; an abusive article is really an abusive article.

The abusive master tortured very rhythmically and retreated.

What kind of carbon-based life can withstand 8 AKs? It's too fake.

I would like to make a suggestion. I feel that the description of Gu and the protagonist in the previous chapters can be changed. Now Gu's image is good, cold, rational and smart. In the first few chapters, Gu's slander about being superior and the protagonist's inner humbleness have seriously poisoned me. It will be much better to revise the senses appropriately. The rhythm of the writing is good now.

Actually, I think the writing is pretty good, and the comment section for Weisa was full of curses.

Come on author, you write well, you can become a god if you write enough, the harem is okay

It took me five and a half hours to watch this. It's not bad. Although it has flaws, it's very creative and thoughtful. Come on.

I think it looks good, please support the author! Awesome.