Cannon Fodder Plays House

From the beginning, looking at the title, I thought it was some strange novel. As I looked at it, I found that every character was quite fleshed out, whether it was the foreshadowing in the words or the descriptions of their appearance, it was as if they were the real person. Han Zhao has always been thinking about preserving his strength and leading his team to rebel against the Demon Queen. Just like the title of the book, it depends on the development of the protagonist group to the later stage. While advancing the main line, there are many cryptic writings in the article, but they are just right and not offensive. The portrayal of Xiao Nizi, the maid, and the female characters are also very delicate. The characterization of the male protagonist is also very good. This is a good work among similar articles. The current chapters are very well written. I feel that it is easy to ignore the comments in the article. The pace is very good and you can often read it to the end in one sitting. I hope the author will continue to update the book with good quality and quantity, which will definitely lead to more fans. I really feel that this is a good book that stands out in a book shortage.

The first is the overall look and feel. The writing is smooth and the plot is reasonable. Although there are some irregular plots, the environment description and character creation are quite full and there is no sense of violation. Then there is the character of the protagonist. His IQ is online, he is not a prisoner, and his harem is certain. He is brave and resourceful. The shaping up to Chapter 30 can be regarded as completely replacing the original body. In terms of poison, there is only one minor typo except for a few negligible typos. That is, there are a few paragraphs about the soul of the original body in the first 5 chapters, but they disappear soon. If you don't want to read it, you can actually skip those paragraphs. Finally, this book is currently just food and grass, with half the qualifications of a fairy grass. I highly recommend it. Come on, the author.

I've read two hundred chapters, and I feel pretty good As for the meaty drama, I feel like Shen Heyun:) The main plot is advancing slowly. After two hundred chapters, I haven't even finished half of the prologue in the background game (probably). The pace is a bit slow Unlike Xiaobai, the author's level is currently good, and the plot is relatively good. It's reasonable. The villain has a little bit of intelligence, but if the protagonist is well-acted and can fool him, it can be accepted. Referring to the marriage part, benevolent people have different views on benevolence and wise people have different opinions. I don't think the problem is big In short, the food and grass are up, this result is a bit sorry for the quality, I hope it will get better and better Read more and report again...

The title of the book is too bad, I suggest you change the name The writing is excellent and the plot advancement is also remarkable.

It's really good, neither the enemy nor we are in trouble I almost didn't recover, there will be a trap within three chapters It's comfortable to watch, the plot is smooth The interruptions are very humorous, and the poems are written at a good level It's difficult to get to the realm where the subject matter is restricted, but it's just a break It's just right for leisure reading There are some small flaws in the original consciousness and the plot of the game, and the subsequent patches are rounded and reasonable When I read it, if I felt uncomfortable, I read two more paragraphs, and the small flaws and minor flaws were quickly fixed and alleviated At present, it seems to be the top-notch in this genre, and it has the talent of a great emperor.

Just reading the introduction feels like it's going to attack my brain.

To be honest, I glanced at it just now and thought the title of the book was "Friends, don't waste our late-game invincibility" 😅

It looks like what others have said about women's videos. It's too literary and youthful, and the plot is depressing.

It is indeed a masterpiece Whether it is the rhythm, the thickness of the plot, or the setting of the golden finger, it is very suitable I don't know where the old author came from to pretend to be a newcomer 🙂

The title of the book "Hold the Fuck" reads as "Friends, please don't waste your time... There should be some hope 🙂"

Change your name, change cannon fodder to cannon fodder 🤔

50 Chapters, 213 minutes, almost no comments, you know the value 🙂

How strange? Why is it that my writing is pretty good but my grades are so unsatisfactory? Isn't it true that he was buried by Qidian?

Your narrative style is not suitable for writing a novel. Although you have entered it, you cannot let the readers do it. If you are just writing a novel for yourself, just pretend that I didn't say anything.

That's it? That's it? Do you still want to write a novel at this level? I advise the author not to be ungrateful and send me the next hundred or so chapters and let me comment on them and then teach the author how to write them! 🤝🤝🤝

I mistook it for someone from "Playing House" and came in to fight 1

I have finished reading the latest chapter, but I want to say seriously: I have read a book that is very similar to this book elsewhere! I suspect that the author of this book plagiarized!! Because this book only has more than thirty chapters, that book has been updated with sixty or seventy chapters. In order to dispel my reasonable doubts, I also hope that the author can prove his innocence, so... The author, please publish forty or fifty more chapters. After comparing me with that book, I may just know the plot in the early stage!

I would like to make a small suggestion, could there be less self-composed poems? I can understand that the author wants to write in a higher style, but the poems that don't even rhyme would look awkward, like digging out three rooms and one living room with one's toes.

After reading dozens of chapters, I got the same feeling: homogeneous. I don't think anyone got to the point. The writing is good, the plot is okay, and the updates are diligent, but it just can't give readers a reason why I have to spend money to read your book instead of the book of Master xx. It's just that your book has no distinction. I have read similar characters and plots too many times. There are also many books by Master xx. Most of them are just copied, but people's IPs have their own traffic. If your writing is similar to that of a great master, I will definitely read it. And readers are naturally biased against books with no traffic, and they think there must be something wrong, so the first three chapters have to give readers a reason to read on. A great master can write a hundred or two hundred chapters without nutrition, but a new author cannot. Even if you make a bad plot, it should be so bad that it has its own characteristics so that readers can remember it and know that this style is something that only you can see, rather than a plot that can be seen everywhere.

The outline seems okay, and it has a good air, but the writing style is too pretentious, and it always uses some weird words, and the plot is not that good, which is a pity.

The writing is really messy, forcing all these crazy scenes

This result is too poor, sorry about the quality.

It's okay. It's just that the way the heroines died is a bit too harsh. It's either worse than a broken car or they were trained into a cauldron, which is a bit difficult to hold on to.

The author tried very hard to write Zou Zou, but his writing was not strong enough, so many places were awkward to read, giving people a delicate and artificial feeling.

Murong Yuanwei, is she the heroine? In more than 300 chapters, watching the protagonist push her to the supporting role, I feel inexplicably poisonous 😰

It feels really good so far, keep up the good work

I don't know if anyone else can see it, but I'll post it anyway.

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After Chapter 10, I feel pretty good. Please support me.

Do you have any second brushes? ? Can you tell me what the ending is like? Now that the male protagonist and A Xingtian are together, why doesn't the male protagonist not become emperor in the end?😅