Pillow Knife

It's so damn good-looking, it's already a god in the early stages. I can't find a martial arts novel like this in the entire online literature. I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you run out of ideas, you can finish it directly and divide it into several parts. Gu Long did the same thing in the past. Instead of writing millions of words in one breath, a book of hundreds of thousands of words can maintain the quality of the book, his character, and his popularity.

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I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and it is really well written. Considering that I have read so many martial arts novels, it is really good. I personally don't like most of the writings in martial arts novels nowadays. They are not cool writings, or they are fighting writings or they are terrible. No description etc. But this book is different. The protagonist's IQ is online and the fights are detailed, making people imagine the story 🤭🤭. It's just that the author is a bit short and weak 😭😭 Highly recommended, strongly recommended, strongly recommended! Say important things three times! 🤫

There has never been a good ending to White Jade Tiger, which is very, very regretful. This book is very suitable for second generation. There are endless descendants of various top figures. Thanks to the unfinished nature of the book, there are still many loopholes and foreshadowing that have not been recycled, which gives the author a lot of room for creation based on the original work. Please ask the author to write a copy of White Jade Tiger. Master Tang Ao. Mr. Tang Da. Ancestor of the Tang family. And the master of the retreat in Dafeng Hall. Ksitigarbha, Xiaodong Tower. Too many regrets and reluctance. From the introduction point of view, the timeline also matches

The book written by an old reader is worthy of my childhood dreams.

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The writing is good. From one chapter to the release, there are too many fights and killings. The early stage is very attractive, but it is a bit boring in the end, just like going to work. You also want to talk about love travel, right? The world is not just about killing and planning, but also adventures, the love and sorrow of children, and the joy and hatred of wandering in the world. The author should balance it out because there are too many fights and kills, and put some breaks in between, otherwise it will be boring!

I was wrong. I mistakenly thought that Ye Gong was a mess. Who would have thought that he would write such a masterpiece?

Among the female characters in Gu Long's books, Shangguan Xiaoxian is definitely my personal favorite. In addition to her regrettable life experience, what is even more heart-warming is that she dared to fight for her destiny in the face of adversity and did not regret it even though she died. When I read this book, I hoped that Shangguan Xiaoxian would have a good ending, and the author also said that there was no heroine, so I thought of a way to get the best of both worlds. My personal opinion, 1. Given the current situation of the protagonist, since he was not an invincible stream at the beginning, struggling to survive and surrounded by enemies, I don't know how lonely it will be when the protagonist grows up to be invincible. The human body is only a hundred years old, and the status, rights, and wealth earned through hard work in the first half of life always need heirs, and the prerequisite for a good heir is that both men and women are very good and at the best age for pregnancy. 2. Before the protagonist is invincible, he has no time to find a woman and may not even have the ability to protect her, so a good heir can only find a woman with scheming, means, martial arts, and power at the right time. Even if there is no love, Shangguan Xiaoxian has the conditions 3. As time goes by, the protagonist becomes more and more powerful, and the probability that Shangguan Xiaoxian wants to kill the protagonist becomes smaller and smaller. However, Shangguan Xiaoxian's character will never give up. According to the Protagonist Law, the protagonist basically spends his time killing and has no time to cultivate his own heirs, so the task of cultivating his heirs falls on the woman. Therefore, the protagonist can give her a child by mistake at the right time and lay the groundwork. 4. Since he can't beat the protagonist, as time goes by, Shangguan Xiaoxian will most likely place his hopes on his children, and then become both mother and father, trying his best to cultivate the protagonist's children, and this not-so-good heir will come. 5. There are two possible endings: 1. The happy reunion. As the children grow up, the protagonist and Shangguan Xiaoxian finally come together, help each other, grow old together, and their hegemony also has an heir. 2. It is a little regretful that the love and hatred between the two people will continue to be entangled until the end of one's life is approaching decades later. Maybe by that time, there will be very few old friends and enemies left, and all grudges can be put aside. The two finally meet and feel relieved. They swim together with arms, sleep together in life, and die in the same hole. The two people's inheritance still has an heir.

The white snow and the freezing cold wind make it difficult for people to meet each other. The kindness of food is hidden in the heart, and the sword of gold is ringed in determination. There is no defeat in the world, but death and grace are no more. Only the tripod peak and the green dragon can show Shangguan Dai. A hero is nothing more than an ant. I am lonely and lonely, and ghosts and gods avoid it. After a thousand dynasties of humiliation, you can obtain forbidden laws and reap utilitarian benefits at your fingertips. The power of Jinling rises, allies all over the world, and dragons enter the sea. Killing the temples, I am the only one who dominates, and the gods of martial arts are in the sky. {"NickName":"Yansantu","UserId":1553625} Add refinement

Laughing to death, I'm not interested in other titles

This book ranks among the top three Gu Long fans I have read, and in terms of writing style alone, it ranks first. The reason why it cannot be ranked first overall is because one of them reverses too much, which will lead to failure; the rhythm of the two is too tight and cannot be relaxed, which is not bad, mainly because it is combined with the former factor, and it becomes very bad. The other two are by Ku Kong Sanren. Ku Kong Sanren has written three Gu Long fanfics. The first one is too young and you can skip reading it. The second one is the best. The third one I am writing now is slightly inferior to the second one. I rate it as simpler and more coquettish. Of course, it may be that this book and the third volume of Ku Kong San Ren are both unfinished, so the only completed one ranks first in my heart. I have also watched The Melon Swordsman. It is neither ancient dragon nor martial arts. It takes a relaxed and cheerful way, but because of this, it has a wider audience.

The 200,000 Gu Long earned from writing articles before byd has not been spent yet, right? No new book has been released yet.

Accept them all or write them both to death. Shangguan was killed after being pregnant for ten months. Li Yaoshi died again to save Li Muchan. He died behind Li Muchan's back. Finally, on an unnamed island overseas, Li Muchan, who was left with half a hand, took the Wu family boy Wu Ming as his disciple with his two children. It's a literary youth, it's a pity, or else it should be written like this. Interesting writing

The intelligence collection and transmission here is N times more powerful than the prehistoric saints' deduction of heavenly secrets.

Let me ask, what kind of army can surround and kill a person who possesses the Four-Illumination Magic Skill, the Wuxiang Magic Skill, and the Heavenly Buddha Scroll, even if he brings along two burdens whose martial arts skills are only slightly weaker than his own?

I started learning martial arts in my twenties. After a few months of practice, I was able to defeat masters who had been practicing martial arts for decades. With gloves and armor, I could treat people who were stronger than me as fools and kill them. Wandering among the three top forces, no matter how high a master you are, when you meet the protagonist, you can only injure him and then run away, and he will even come back to plot your life in a short time. After reading it, I just feel that the masters in Gu Long's novels are all useless 🤭.

What are you struggling with? Everyone wants to see you go to sea just for the ending with two heroines. If you don't want a family-friendly ending, why would you write "Going to the Sea"? You might as well wait in the Central Plains for Zhu Da and the others to come back and let the Tianxia Alliance besiege them. Why would you want to go to sea if you didn't want to save your wife? Li Xunhuan, Shen Lang and Li Dachongzi have no relationship at all. At most, they can find someone who has a relationship with the Shen family as a disciple in the future.

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As the title says, don't write about Chinese martial arts, it's too niche. Otherwise it will be pounce again

The Great Compassion of Heaven and Earth Conquering Yin and Yang

How can a senior brother and sister who have been together for twenty years not be as good as you for a dozen or so days? Moreover, the protagonist is not the kind of person who gets along well with each other. The two people were just superiors and subordinates in an impure relationship from the beginning. The protagonist simply gave up when they tried to play the charm card. Do you think you have no feelings when others respect the orders of senior fellow apprentice and lurk in the demon sect? 😜

When will the new book be released? I've also finished reading Sword Out of Hengshan. Can you recommend any good books?

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure and wonderful martial arts novel. Most of the martial arts novels nowadays are just trying to sell the dog's meat, and they don't have any flavor of martial arts at all! It's rare for someone like the author to get up at 6:30 in the morning and see the present. Come on.

This is probably the most thoughtful book written by Eunuch Ye. It was almost until the death of Gongzi Yu that he started to change the writing style. For the previous books, it felt like he would just change the writing style after two or three volumes, maybe it would be a direct change.

After the Battle of Taihu, the Demon Cult swept the world. The former leader Qiu Xiaolou and Xie Xiaofeng of Shenjian Villa died together. From the leader Qiu Xiaolou down, the two deputy leaders died in the battle. The Great Elder killed the traitor Princess Tianmei to sacrifice the flag, and took the position of leader. For a time, he was invincible and no one could stop him. The money gang leader Shangguan Xian'er and the Demon Sect's Paradise Girl, who had the instinct to fight, each snatched some of the remains of Li Muchanyi, the former deputy leader of the Demon Sect and the Netherworld Master, and then disappeared. After that, the two families joined forces to strangle the remaining forces of the Blue Dragon Society like crazy, chasing the Nine Dragon Heads with no way out in the sky and on the earth. In this way, the world has been in chaos for fourteen years, until...

This large section is actually the protagonist's repeated trials, just for one attempt. First, Yaoshi Li was given the power to control some people to bewitch her and test her ultimate goal. It can only be said that she was destined to be a different person. What Li Yaoshi pursues is not power, but something that only her senior brother Gong Ziyu can give her. So this time the backstab appeared, it was also within Li Muchan's expectation. When he practiced Wuxiang Magic and chose to travel to the Western Regions instead of taking land and water to the waters of the Yangtze River, he saw that he was being attacked from behind. At that time, he already understood that he could not give what Li Yaoshi wanted, and this back-to-back was just his last act of soft-heartedness (after all, Li Muchan was still a person who grew up in modern times and had a modern view of good and evil) and lost all his last emotion for Li Yaoshi. It's time to wrap things up. Long Xiaoyun and Xie Longteng should be nearby. Long Xiaoyun came here to deal with Li Yaoshi (the short section of the Yangtze River waterway has already been mentioned), Wang Lianhua's true biography is against Wang Lianhua's granddaughter. The protagonist's relationship with Pharmacist Li is not considered a love affair between a man and a woman, but rather a feeling of recruitment and trying to find a fellow traveler.

It feels a bit monotonous, like a fantasy upgrade story has been stripped down.

From the plot point of view, it has always been a cycle of desperate situation → desperate → escape, and although the author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is "ruthless and cold-blooded, strategizing and killing people," there are not many characters in the original book who are killed by the protagonist. It falls into a strange circle: the protagonist is embarrassed → the protagonist is surrounded by people and is in a desperate situation → the protagonist breaks out of the siege → but the protagonist will be surrounded by the same people again next time. In terms of characters, the portrayal of the protagonist is really weak. Apart from the author's label of "ruthless, cold-blooded, strategizing and murderous", I can't think of any image of the protagonist in my mind.

So here comes the question, how many female protagonists does the author have? I personally can't accept the idea of ​​multiple girls 🙂, but the author writes very well, so I wanted to ask, because I read a book before and ordered all of it, thinking there would be no heroine, but then suddenly a harem started, which made me sick.