Evolution Through Leveling Up from Scratch

The first chapter persuaded me to quit. In the first chapter, the company went bankrupt. He yelled at the HR of the company, complaining that the company was gone. Where could I find such a good job! My company has been liquidated and dissolved, so I still have to worry about your future? What does the company owe you? And this company is quite good. When he resigned, he was given n+1 compensation and was introduced to a new job. However, he complained all over the place and felt that the bosses of the company did not care about his life and death. You are a part-time worker, and the company was dissolved and gave you n+1, and even found a job for you. What else do you want? Then the author's inexperienced side emerged. The protagonist's monthly salary is 12k, with no car loan, no house loan, and no family to support, but he complains that his salary is not enough, the rent and living expenses are too heavy, and the pressure of life is too high. He feels that after leaving his job, he may starve to death. Are you kidding me? You are a single man in Hangzhou, and 12,000 a month is not enough? How do people with lower wages than you live? You go to bars and red light districts every day, right?

It is indeed well written. This is the only well-written novel about diaosi. The author of other books is not as good as others. The protagonist is as embarrassed as a diaosi. He writes like a diaosi but not a real diaosi. But the author writes this diaosi really well 👍👍👍

In fact, if you are really extraordinary, you really can't find a wife! At first glance, the face is full of large pores. Unless this person has the skin of a baby, it is basically impossible!

This is the first time I've seen someone write about cheating in such a distressing way.

Don't talk about the national level. It's easy to get involved and you can't control it. Just like the book "Forty Not Confused", it was originally well written and talked about the love and hatred between family and country. It's like he's a different person, and the bullshit written next is incomprehensible.

As soon as the protagonist's father was kidnapped, the book fell apart in my opinion. The father is suffering, and the protagonist cannot save anyone but can only wait and develop slowly. The author can't cut through the mess quickly. Every time a chapter is delayed, it feels a bit frustrating. Coupled with the author's update speed, it is absolutely killing it. I don't know what the author's brain circuit is thinking, so I can only give it a 6.

This book, so far, is at a good level. It is told in a eloquent way, and apart from falling in love, there are no too embarrassing plots. The shortcomings are probably the lack of drama and tension in conflicts, and the main line is not bright enough. The former is a problem with writing skills and can only be polished slowly; the latter seriously suspects that the outline is not done well and there is a bottleneck. The main plot should be the super human project, but with 0.01 Screen refreshes all day long, there is less and less expectation for growth. Internal strength has also been added, but there is no need to increase it... Is there any value in combat power? The protagonist has never had a fight so far. This story is not originally about fighting and killing, right? In fact, occasionally we should return to the main line, just like when the measurements reach 1, it should be a summary of the early suspense. But in the book, the past is gone, so bland that nothing happens. The expected physical transformation and so on are spread into countless 0.01, So diluted that it is undetectable.

Wu Fang

Don't write about women 😰 Dude, you are already extraordinary and why are you still thinking about women? The perspective is wider and extraordinary. Even if you don't reform the world, you can leave the earth and explore the unknown universe. How many years can you find a woman to support you? After all, you will be a beauty with a dead body.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit stupid. If a normal person has a proficiency-adding system, who is going to practice skimming and darts? Can't I use this for running, squatting, jumping jacks, reading, practicing calligraphy, and answering questions? If you have to practice it, it will be of no use to your own life.