Traveling at the Same Time: I Cast an Immortal Name in the Heavens

When I saw the Marvel chapter it was actually the original hive travel + one unique talent in each world (which can be shared and upgraded), plus the mastermind behind the scenes gave the parasitic ability to others It was a bit embarrassing to watch The author stopped all the time and switched worlds before what I thought would be an exciting plot. Capacity development means writing your own stuff, but the excitement of the plot needs to be strengthened, which is a bit bland... In the middle, it transitions to the nesting dolls of the world and the portraits of the masterminds behind the scenes. Although I think the author has no problem with the outline design, and I can feel the author's intention, but the author seems to be unable to find the position and customer base It's tasteless, it's a pity to abandon it

Do you Yang An also like Li Jiayu?😁

Yang An wouldn't really approve of it if he didn't do it 😃

If you want to write about comprehensive martial arts, you can just mention it in one stroke. Otherwise, you are poisoning yourself and just abandon the book. If you don't have good writing skills, I really don't recommend the author to write this.

If Yang An doesn't have the Goddess of Light card, I won't recognize him if he can't offend me.

Yang An, just add Mohei Yang An and reach the sky in one step.

Come on, the dark Yang An, I'm looking forward to how the author writes it.

The evolution talent is too dramatic, and it loses the feature of the clone sharing stream.

In fact, only one evolutionary ability is enough

I don't really agree with Li Jiayu

Many studios are not sure about writing this kind of subject, and most of them are gg. They might as well write unlimited streams. I hope the author will not collapse.

Yang An is such a drama, I think of Li Jiayu, the protagonist still remembers Li Jiayu by the Daming Lake 🙂

Come on Yang An, the Yangshen, the champion!

To be honest, the talent awakening of the plug-in is redundant. Your plug-in can superimpose constitution and strength, which makes you invincible.

Does the protagonist in the author's ghost-blowing world really plan to make a big living in the future? ... In terms of the world view of Gui Chuu Deng itself, there are really multiple ancient gods of the universe and diverse 🌲 and destinies. Should we also go and see it?

DC and Marvel are fine, but don't get involved too much. In fact, it's best to write about original worlds. Of course, some science fiction movies, TV series, and novels are also acceptable. Even a world like Love of Death can gain you a lot of popularity.

When I was reading the novel, I discovered that there were some typos in it. After the readers pointed it out, they just hung there. It has been hanging there for half a year and the typos have not been corrected 🙂

Talents are a bit redundant. Everyone has one talent and can share it. This is already a bug. As a result, your evolutionary talents can continue to increase, plus your ability to learn acquired skills, which is mixed but not refined.

I feel that the most taboo thing about doujinshi is to change the world just when the protagonist is pushing the plot. It was really fun to watch it, but the fire was immediately extinguished in the changed world.

Has the author changed since Dragon Clan? When Doupo arrived, he kept pretending to flirt with women.

You sit in so many worlds and you pop up a Marvel movie. Do you think the style of painting is the same?

The setting of this opening is very confusing. You have achieved nothing after traveling 20 years. Even if you forcefully say that you just want to be a salty fish and don't want to work hard, but you still lie there knowing that it is a ghost, you can only say that it is a plot for the sake of the plot. It is boring.

It's just a hammer here and a stick here and there, but it won't work after too many times.

What's going on? Have you stopped updating?

Can you answer the previous question?

There is no way around the dragon world

So what is the protagonist's ambition?