I'm Devouring the Stars and Controlling the Beast Unscientifically

As soon as Luo Feng came into the scene, the protagonist became a nanny, and many fans could not escape this trap.

This book actually took a long time to write, and it was not even ready to be released at the beginning The first draft was about half a million words, and then I felt that there were some difficult problems, so I put it aside Later I picked it up again, and based on the principle that I can do it, I revised it from the beginning~ With the encouragement of some fan authors, I started publishing the book It seems that the writing is getting smoother now Maybe the story will not satisfy everyone I like it, but this is the story I want to write, so that's enough It's not that I don't want to listen to readers' suggestions, but this book has already reached 125W, and your suggestions are probably not used... If possible, let me use them in the next book~~ If there is any principle conflict with the original work, please point it out, but for those parts that are not clearly left blank in the original work, please allow me to make some modifications, otherwise the fandom will not be written.

Come on, author, this is one of the most interesting fanfics I've ever read. It's very imaginative and interesting. I didn't copy the original work. Like the others, I basically just changed the name of the protagonist and the name of the secret method, and then followed the original work throughout, and added some dross. Even if I copy it, I can't understand it.

In the original work, there is no difference in Luo Feng's understanding before and after he seizes the body. He only understands the field because of his talent in law.

The earth shattered, Huyanbo took over the earth, and the higher-ups in the universe bought the earth, but no one took action. All he needs is the Earth's lineage to recognize the Star Tower. Even if he is an alien, he only needs to be born on Earth. With his status, how could he care about such a trivial matter. Even if City Lord Luo can take action in the future, as long as you don't mess with his relatives and friends, given his state of mind, he won't care.

I have read the Swallowing Starry Sky and Unscientific Beast Control. What the hell is this book about?

Talking to myself too much, it seems like I'm trying to make up the word count

After reading the first two chapters, I hope the author will write about the beast-controlling race native to the Devouring Starry Sky. I think the first contracted beast is an unscientific beast-controlling copy. What other beast-controlling templates are there? Swallowing Starry Sky is a big world with many races. The beast masters need to have the characteristics of swallowing. If they are all prototypes of Shi Yu, then what is the meaning of this book? There is no sense of expectation at all.

The subject matter is quite novel, but I always feel that the content is not very attractive. I feel that there is too much nonsense.

The writing is okay, but it's not exciting enough. It's not scientific about animal control. It focuses on relaxation. I haven't encountered anything really dangerous. There are always big guys around.

The writing is okay, but there is a problem. Can your system only use the beast-controlling template of the protagonist in Unscientific Beast-controlling? Can't you choose other beast masters to train?

The human race should all have double the genes, because the original book said that the Manka planets have long-term improvement of their bloodlines through the reproduction of strong men. For example, the planet-level children of the ninth-level bloodline have better talents than other ninth-level bloodlines. The advanced bloodlines of the human race are all bred through long-term such behavior, so the highest level is the domain lord level bloodline, and the genes are also doubled. The human race does not have groups with multiple genes.

The author's writing is a bit verbose🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

You can reduce the dialogue between the protagonist and the beast, so that it can be streamlined

But what about the clone? This is the most unique thing among Swallowing Starry Sky. It is the most life-saving and can enhance talents.

I still prefer the style. . .

It's pretty good so far, food +

The writing style looks comfortable, come on

I really can't stand it anymore, the writing is mediocre, the protagonist talks to Ling and Liuhuo every day, and he is very speechless.