Witcher: Start with the Parsing Panel

The plot after arriving at the wizard's tower is inexplicably written. There should be some content that was not written out, making it confusing. For example, the protagonist suddenly runs out of the tower to kill the three apprentices, which is very baffling (the three apprentices seem to be the murderers of Edward, but are they related to the protagonist? Even if it is for revenge or to avoid revealing their wealth and being implicated and remembered by the murderer, the protagonist's inner story must be written to introduce how the protagonist is going to respond and when he is ready to act, so that the reader knows that the protagonist is about to take action).

I hope the protagonist will kill decisively, be self-interested, a bit dark, and well written🥰

Is there Shennong, is there someone who falls in love and pretends to be sexy?

How did you write these chapters? It's weird.

The calm intelligence is online and the purpose is very strong, but the pace is too fast and it is almost too much.

This story is okay, but it seems that I have to make up for it myself. You are a book writer who doesn't explain. In the first few chapters, he was still fighting in the wizard-contaminated land. The protagonist suddenly returned to the great medicine man to give medicine, and then quickly changed the map. Then it seemed that a few chapters were missing in the wizard tower. Why did the neighbor check the cause of Edward's death, why he was killed, and why he wanted to avenge Edward. He didn't have this idea when he came here. Everyone has to fill in the details...

The plot is very good, but the writing is not very good, just like a running account...

Why is it all about analysis and studio?

The content is okay, but sometimes it's a bit messy and hard to understand. You need to pay attention.

When I read Chapter 17, the plot was a bit dull, but I still kept reading. The golden finger setting is more enjoyable than the chip.

The plot is excellent, but the logic of the previous words is a bit confusing, and it should have been written more urgently. The whole thing is a bit stiff, and he speaks dryly without any description. Is he a newcomer?

The book feels okay. The details are not handled very well, and the writing style still has a lot of room for improvement.

There are typos, missing words, and sentences that are not fluent. Wouldn't the author correct it after he finished writing?

There is an explanation of why you are in such a hurry to transform, and you are not short of magic stones.

The writing is not very good, I feel like I wrote it in a hurry. No details, just dry.

To be honest, it seemed a bit dramatic at the beginning. The author wanted to show the ruthlessness of the aristocratic family, and the protagonist seemed very stupid

Summoning Shennong, Is it Monk Wen?

Let's change the name before it's developed. Otherwise, when you look at the title of the book, it looks like the output of a factory

If you really change, I will run away.

The article is also a bit too fast. . I always feel like the car will flip over later.