Time Travel: My Achievements in All Heavens

Get to know the Hong Kong Police

Awesome, the author successfully surpassed the third young master of the Tang family and created a protagonist who is even more awesome than Tang San.

Do you think these women are pretty? Are you born in the 1980s?

As the title says, tell me about the problem. First point, when writing about film and television, it is about film and television. Why mix a film and television game with a game? Will there be an anime later? Too mixed! ! ! Second point, the character of the protagonist is not well developed, giving people the feeling that without a system he is a waste, and with a system he is still a waste. He is always complaining about this and that. Unless everything goes well and the world revolves around him, he will feel right. The third point is that deliberately suppressing the protagonist's strength may seem like a reward for having too many thieves, but in fact, it's all rubbish. The fourth point is to follow the original plot throughout the whole process. Since it is the original plot and nothing has changed, then what the hell are you watching? Is the protagonist just a passer-by in thousands of worlds?

The writing power is not enough, and the basic requirement for points and rewards is to kill plot characters or tasks. You follow the plot completely, and you feel like you are being led along, which makes you look particularly useless... The experienced author directly sets a trap for the target character, and takes all the initiative in his own hands. He does not care about the plot at all, rejects surprises, and controls the whole scene is the style that the time travel plus system should show. It seems that you have been eating the melons and watching the drama without paying attention to the plot. You have no initiative at all, so you are not a manifestation of waste.

Future female flying tiger sniper. Double D Owner.

I don't have the same views, so I skipped the second chapter, and it felt like there was no point in following the plot. . . Although society is real and many people are evil-minded in reality, in the book, Zhong still wants to retain the persistence in his heart.

What can be achieved? The god of obscenity?

Why are you writing so obscenely 😰

The biggest problem is that the protagonist treats real people as game NPCs, and there is no bottom line.

Liang Kailin, Miss CIB Chen Wei'an's intelligence source.

Half the sky is water! It's all become a sea

I finished reading the first world script. . . So bland and boring. . . I didn't feel any better. . .

Do you want to go to the world of The First Commandment? In the movie, the ghost finally wins, and evil defeats justice. I think the protagonist can go in and change it. The ghost in the movie cannot be eliminated. There is really nothing you can do against him. It's heartbreaking to watch

LYB Fang Keming, a petty old man

The subject matter is good, but unfortunately I don't like the characters, and I don't like the world either.

I haven't read a few chapters, and the writing is okay, but the main character's behavior is really unlikable!

Ordinary female college student❌ The Queen of Arms✓

Aunt Bu Lao Wang

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