Entering an Otome Game: I Made the Heroine Cry

All I can say is that the protagonist is too self-righteous and conceited.

I really get more and more confused the more I read the story. In Chapter 278, the third male protagonist was killed and left speechless. After killing the male protagonist, he was given more than 2,000 purple energy. I don't know if the author is stupid. The plot becomes more and more confusing the further he writes. Even the Demon Emperor's wife was killed, didn't the Demon Emperor notice? In the Demon King's territory. The ancient demon had originally said that he had immortal level strength, but in the end he was defeated by Da Shengqi with his immortal sword. Let me put it this way, the gap is one realm, and the gap behind it is one realm. Basically, it can be killed directly with a slap. I don't know how to write the distinction between realms. I never said that the fourth junior sister likes the senior brother, but then suddenly the fourth junior sister likes the senior brother and sister. If you don't know how to write, you should just stop updating it. I really don't know how to write it. The plot is very confusing. It is said that the Demon Emperor and the Beast Emperor are getting married for their own benefit. It will not affect the interests of the two of them if the Demon Emperor goes to find a demon. I really don't know what to think. And they both have similar strength, how come the Beast King can knock out all the Demon King's teeth? I really don't know how to write it.

If the protagonist accepts all the five male protagonists, everything will be OK. If gender can be an obstacle to love, then what kind of love can it be? 😁

Talk about the shortcomings. 1 The protagonist can't hide his offense from anyone. Because of the thunder method, it was accurately positioned on the protagonist. 2. The protagonist is really lucky, and he pretends to be a bitch when he goes out. The junior sister is the false protagonist. And only the protagonist is a lot of shit. No matter what you do, there will be emergencies.

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The debate section is so stupidly written. If you read any white text, it will be smarter than this section. It doesn't do anything to advance the plot at all, and it's so ridiculously well-written. As the leader of the righteous path, the Ziyang Sect has no allies. It is bullied by other righteous paths every day. Others are tearing apart in debates. The Ziyang Sect is still indifferent. Can the author use his own brain to think about this possibility? What kind of leader is this? The existing system will inevitably protect existing vested interests, and no one will get any benefits. Who do you think can be so patient?

Uncle Dong is very happy that you can update, but Uncle Dong doesn't like the speed of the update When I ask you to update, it's either windy or rainy Do you know how I spent 23 hours and 59 minutes without an update? The most important thing when working out is reputation. If I say 20 photos a day, I will take 20 photos a day. Fellow fellow, the donkeys in our cooperative's production brigade don't dare to rest like this. I heard that you are not good at coding, and you are looking for me everywhere. Do you want to compete with me, Liu Huaqiang? Do you have the strength? You will be useless even if I give you a chance.

Open the harem if it can be opened, forget it if it can't be opened, all this nonsense and aloofness, before I wrote that the third junior sister likes the senior brother but failed to realize it correctly, and now I want to pair up the third junior sister and the fifth junior brother, what a disgusting way to write it

Don't read it if you are a pure party lover, because there is more than one heroine, and don't read it if you are a harem party lover, because Chu Yao, who was suspected to be the heroine in the early stage, eloped with Li Junshang in more than 300 chapters.

I've read almost one hundred and twenty chapters and can't stand it anymore. To be honest, the protagonist's partiality will only plant the seeds for the three women to turn against each other and push Chu and Xu to the path of female villains. You can be partial but not to your grandma's house. Just give Yun Kai Xiaozao and teach the other two more skills. There is no plot of Xiaozao. The truth will be revealed one day. Then these two can smile and say it doesn't matter. Are we all good sisters? That's too stupid and loses the vitality of the character.

The author of the female channel is so scary, and the male channel also writes disgusting plots.

What is the trend of this book? In the first chapter, the author said that he has a father-daughter relationship with Yunli, so I took it as such and continued reading it. In the next chapter 121, I asked Yunli whether she should be the heroine or not. I couldn't make any decisions after writing so many decisions. Now I see pure love and harem floating around, which makes me feel awkward while reading. Have you read the rest of the book to tell me whether it is confirmed that there will be a single heroine or harem, or it will be ambiguous all the time. I will leave as soon as possible after confirming the situation.

It's quite disgusting to watch. The male protagonist is so hypocritical. Has the author imitated Tang's writing style? How else could it be disgusting? It's best not to watch it. It will make you sick all day long.

What you wrote is really nonsense. You don't have to write it like this. Isn't this just disgusting to readers? The author of the novel has the final say on the direction of the plot. I can understand that it is forced to suppress the plot to prevent the small BOSS from going offline early in the early stage and making it difficult to control the plot. But why write it like this. Let me talk about my impression of this paragraph 1. The protagonist's camp is a bunch of ✓💩, and so is the sect. Not a single ally? According to what you wrote before, he is also one of the top sects. When his outstanding disciples are framed, none of the sects are on the protagonist's side? Enemy to the whole world? The reason? I didn't see your specific description. It can't be just because their lightning skills are stronger. 2. You can't hide the fact that the person named Ye is obviously colluding with the evil way in your description. From the reaction you wrote, it seems that several of the referees who helped to distract him were also suspicious. They didn't dare to swear, right? Then why did he join Thousand Fantasy Sect in the future? A ruthless and ruthless bad guy who killed his cousin and colluded with the evil ways. I can't think of any kind of righteous way that can be accepted as a disciple. Oh, those who were killed were Qian Huan Sect's own disciples. Is Da Zhou so powerful? Do all the cultivating sects have to look at his face? 3. You can just end it hastily. Why do you want the protagonist's master to come out and say harsh words? I thought there was a reversal at first. After saying harsh words in the next paragraph, I put my tail between my legs and started to comfort myself. "They will pay the price, but not now." Indeed 6 I am indeed a clown who is fully expecting a reversal🤡 You can write it from the outside, such as launching a public opinion offensive, and the protagonist stays out of the incident and the villain has nothing to do. Or just skip it and just write a rough outline of why the whole family can't be surnamed now, and write about the external constraints, right? Instead of all gongs vs. Gongs and drums confronting each other, and finally a so-called tie I don't think it's okay to suppress first and then improve, but this part of yours should obviously be promoted. The previous part was framed and assassinated. Why do I feel so uncomfortable

To sum up, is this a story where the male protagonist has no emotional line and the eunuch adopts the daughter? Is it a story about a male protagonist who acts as a father and a mother to protect his daughter without a serious female protagonist? Daughter and heroine have no emotional lines? The male protagonist has no emotional line, and the female supporting role has no emotional line? Does the plot depend entirely on the male supporting cast?

The villains are united, and the protagonist's side is fighting fiercely.

I hope there won't be a plot to give away the girl in the follow-up, I felt anxious watching it

Yysy, open high and go low, the previous plot is very good, the part about selecting rewards in the underworld is also very good, but the writing behind it is very good. . .

I finally understood it. The protagonist's sect is a mess of excuses, and the entire righteous sect is also dragging its defense. The protagonist's master is also an excuse, pure and troublesome. The heroine and the co-star are well written. The protagonist has no big problems except for being conceited. As for the plot, the first part is pretty good, and the second part is about the defense starting from entering Youzhou. Until now, I can only say goodbye to Jianghu, bye, and delete it from the bookshelf.

Not many female protagonists, bad reviews, I still like harem after reading a lot, this is a novice novel, all I can say is that it doesn't matter to me, please continue 🙏

Fortunately, after reading dozens of chapters, I decided this was garbage. It's really hard to speculate in stocks. You don't have to find any reason. This cannot be collected and that cannot be collected. Now that I've watched the finale, it's really rubbish. It's really written like a female channel.

Tang, the more I wrote, the more I strayed from the topic. The focus was completely on the emotional drama. The plot was all for the development of the relationship. I wrote it.

Nervous, Maoqiu is actually the heroine, and the third junior sister is actually married to the fifth junior brother Wu Yu, and the fourth junior sister is better off not being with the male protagonist.

It's really getting worse and worse later on, just read the free chapters 😅

Oops! The character Kari Maoqiu is the heroine, and Hazy Moon is also the heroine. What the hell?

The evaluation is getting more and more outrageous. It feels a bit like the mindless sadomasochistic plot of a female channel. The protagonist's handling of the emotional line is very open, and the career line is in chaos, and he is ready to give up.

Xingtie has a character that has not yet been implemented, named Yunli 😥

Nothing interesting to see, a bit rubbish

Let me go, I really didn't expect this to be your trumpet, @

You are so cute, why did you end up so unfinished? I've been raising him for so long, I saw it today, updated 7 months ago, 23 chapters unread, not a buddy, co-author I've been raising him for so long, but in the end the clown is actually me?