Reborn: My First Sword Slays My Beloved

I really don't understand. What kind of talented women are criticizing the male lead? He gave up a promising future and went to Hangzhou for Li Yuqing. He came to a strange city with a clean reputation and bought a car and a house with a loan over a few years. The comments section says that the male lead is poor and incompetent. Can they please consider their own abilities?

Having written 650,000 words, how did you manage to achieve this? There are no satisfying moments, no logical flow, you can't even cleanly cut off your crush, and while there are plenty of angst-filled moments, they feel forced and contrived. You can't write slice-of-life stories well, you can't write romance well, and you still can't write satisfying stories well.

These 20+ subscriptions I spent on your book are like throwing money away. Look at the garbage you've written! A reincarnated protagonist? This reincarnated character isn't even as good as the security guard downstairs from my house. Subscribing to your book is masochistic! (Sha 🐶 protagonist)

Before the book was published, the author mentioned that his wife earned 8,000 yuan a month and looked down on him for earning 3,000 yuan a month. Now that I see this pathetic male protagonist, I can only say that inspiration comes from real life! The male protagonist's constant talk of rising to power is like the empty promises the author makes to his wife!

The male protagonist started dating Liu Ruhui to avoid Li Yuqing. However, Liu Ruhui already had a fiancé, and both Li Yuqing and Su Rou knew about it. They initially wanted to stop the relationship, but when they tried, they deliberately kept the fiancé a secret. The male protagonist didn't really like Liu Ruhui and didn't even plan to marry her. He was only dating her to avoid Li Yuqing.

Li Yuqing truly loves the protagonist, and the protagonist was indeed poor in his previous life. Was all of this Li Yuqing's fault? The protagonist himself also has issues. Since he was reborn and has ways to make money, there's no need for him to be so ruthless. Overall, it feels strange.

Let me talk about the character Su Rou. I hope the author won't write her like in other novels, where she gets together with the protagonist without any status or relationship just for money. I think Su Rou's demand for a 10 million yuan dowry might simply be because she wants to avoid harassment while studying; she only wants to change her fate through education. I think the lyrics of the song "Hu Guangsheng" could be used to express Su Rou's destiny.

Please be nicer to Su Rou! She's really... I'm crying my eyes out 🥺

It's obvious the author dug so many plot holes for Li Yuqing... And then went on to write about another female lead. The author has absolutely no heart.

The story of a poor boy and a rich girl who fall in love and get married is marred by the constant humiliation, difficulties, and contempt they face from the girl's family, which can lead to some psychological issues. For example, my former boss. When I was just an ordinary tax bureau civil servant, I was constantly looked down upon and made things difficult by the boss's wife's parents.