Reborn: My First Sword Slays My Beloved

I really don't understand. Those who criticize the male protagonist are all talented and talented women. The male protagonist gave up his promising future and went to Hangzhou for Li Yuqing. He came to an unfamiliar urban area with a clean clothes and spent a few years buying a car and taking out a loan to buy a house. The comment section said that the male protagonist is poor and has no ability. Can you weigh your ability? Or is it that the rich second generation in the comment section think that BYD is not a car and a house of more than 70 square meters is not worthy of being called a house. And the place where he studied at university was in the Magic City area. He could have worked as an intern in a large factory after graduation. His future was bright, but he gave up this opportunity for Li Yuqing. Isn't this courage? Isn't this love? What he got in the end was breaking up, blacklisting, and finally owing millions in loans. If he had chosen life in the first place, he would have ended up like this. After rebirth, the male protagonist did not retaliate against Li Yuqing, but chose to break up peacefully. The reason was simple and clear to the other party. It was Li Yuqing who refused to let go. Although Li Yuqing loved the male protagonist, the male protagonist did not dare to insist on his own life. From what Li Yuqing said, the male protagonist's heart had been broken.

You have written 650,000 words, how did you do it? You have to be cool but not cool, you have to be logical but not logical, you have to behead the person you like but still can't be clean, and you have to torture a lot but it's just for the sake of being tortured because of hypocrisy. You can't write well in daily life, you can't write well in romance, but you still can't write well in cool articles. The writing is not good, and the final result is not good. I actually know that it was not good enough in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is bloody, and it is very forceful, which cannot attract new readers. It also disgusts the readers who have subscribed for a long time. It really sucks!

Spending more than 20 subscriptions on your book is just like feeding the dog. Take a look for yourself to see what you wrote. What about the reborn people? These reborn people are not as good as the security guard downstairs in my house. Those who subscribe to your book are too masochistic! Sha🐶Protagonist

I remember before it was released, the author said that his wife's monthly salary was 8,000, and she disliked his monthly salary of 3,000. Now when I look at this FW male protagonist, I can only say that the inspiration comes from life! What the male protagonist has always said about rising up is just like the pie the author drew for his wife!

In order to avoid Li Yuqing, the male protagonist made a girlfriend, Liu Ruhui. However, Liu Ruhui already had a fiancé, and both Li Yuqing and Su Rou knew that Liu Ruhui had a fiancé. They originally wanted to stop the male protagonist from talking to Liu Ruhui, but when they tried to stop them, they refused to tell her about her fiancé. The male protagonist was not very happy at first. She liked Liu Ruhui and didn't even plan to get married. She was talking to Liu Ruhui just to avoid Li Yuqing. If she knew in advance that Liu Ruhui had a fiancé, she would not talk to her. But in the end, she insisted on not letting the male protagonist know. After talking to Liu Ruhui in the end, the fiancé directly greeted the male protagonist's parents, but what about the male protagonist? I'm addicted to food. I come from a rural background and go against my fiancé's big family. I could have relied on my past life memories to grow up, but I just want to be a prostitute. Now I'm being abused all the time, so be careful!

Li Yuqing really loves the protagonist. The protagonist really had no money in his previous life. Is all this Li Yuqing's problem? The protagonist himself also has problems. Now that he is reborn and has a way to make money, there is no need to be so crazy. Anyway, it looks weird.

Let's talk about the character Su Rou. I hope the author won't write it like in other novels, where she gets together with the protagonist for money without any distinction. I think Su Rou said she wanted a 10 million betrothal gift because she just wanted to not be harassed while studying. She just wanted to change her destiny through studying. I think we can learn from the artistic conception of the lyrics of "Hu Guangsheng" to express Su Rou's fate.

Be nice to Su Rou! She really made me cry to death 🥺

It was obvious that he had dug so many holes for Li Yuqing. . . Then he wrote another heroine, but the author had no intention at all.

From the time they fell in love to the time they got married, a poor boy and a rich girl were humiliated, made things difficult, and looked down upon by their mother-in-law's family, which made them somewhat mentally unhealthy. For example, my previous boss. When I was an ordinary civil servant in the tax bureau, I was despised and made things difficult by the boss's parents. Now that things have changed, his own wealth has surpassed that of his mother-in-law and his family for many years. He is still worried about this. I say I don't mind, but actually I do. He often shares with me how he now makes it difficult for me to go back and disses him🙂 The bad marriage after free love led to complete disappointment in marriage. It is not uncommon for him to end up as a prodigal who only needs his kidneys but not his heart. A few of my classmates are like this (both male and female). Not to mention the death of a loved one, but there is nothing I can do about it, something that can drastically change my outlook! So I can understand the abstract behavior of the male protagonist after his rebirth. After all, I have a deep understanding of how twisted and abstract the actual behavior of people who have actually encountered these things is... I treat this guy as a guy with abnormal brains. Although such a protagonist is very unpleasant, from an abnormal point of view, it is normal. But. The author has been rereading the hero's previous life. This is no different from brainwashing PUA, they are all trying to create an ideological stamp. Justify the protagonist's actions. This makes people feel very pretentious, with a feeling of being both responsible and established. It gives people a very bad feeling. It's very watery! 😅😅😅 Have we subscribed to new chapters? As ordered! Shall we read the new plot? As read! Author, you must write like this. I can only think that this is your novelized autobiographical memoir to vent your anger🤔🤔