Dragon Ball Cultivation to Become the Strongest

The introduction idea is quite novel, but after entering it, the writing is really unflattering, the typos are really hard to describe, and the protagonist's intelligence is really... Well, because of the last point, I gave up on the second chapter. How should I put it, young... Cough, a little immature, you can polish it again.

Not to mention taking over, do you have the position to cultivate immortals like the Supreme All-King Archangel? 😅 Destruction God Kai Oishin creates the world, relying on Toei's original theatrical version, the power of cultivating immortals is really small. Even practicing magic is more interesting than cultivating immortals. At least Babidi's father also made a Majin Buu.

Come on!

If you want to become an immortal, don't mess with Dragon Ball. Dragon Ball is about punching to the flesh and sending out energy waves. It's a hot-blooded fighting game.

The imagination is not big enough and the appeal is not enough.

The writing is childish, but the idea is good, but the writing is not good.

It's very well written, keep up the writing. There aren't many Dragon Ball fanfics to read now, but yours is pretty good.

How did the protagonist's cultivation of immortality come about? Am I looking for the power of thought?

Are there any other Dragon Ball books? If so, please introduce them. Thank you.

As far as I know, after Son Goku turns into a Super Saiyan, his combat power is around 3,000! 😜