
Naruto: This Sasuke Has a Narrator
火影:这个佐助有旁白
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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311Chapters
5.7kRecommendations
46.5kFans
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After looking at it from all angles, starting with Konoha is still the right path... Although starting with Konoha is too common and we're tired of it, at least the protagonist's stance in fanfiction is roughly the same as the main characters, namely the Hokage, which can satisfy the readers' needs.
I came across a post today that I felt like sharing here, but it can be deleted.
After watching it, even though I wasn't a fan of the Uchiha clan before, my romantic ideals still feel shattered.
Holy crap, that's so cool! A 3D Naruto! 😭
This Sasuke is cultivating immortality.
After reading the first 70 chapters, it feels like Sasuke isn't going to school but cultivating immortality. Cultivating oneself: Learning and practicing with the most natural lifestyle. The world tests one's heart: be kind to others, cherish the memory of loved ones, and understand the hardships of ordinary people.
This Sasuke's Mangekyou Sharingan probably isn't Amaterasu, right?
The Mangekyou Sharingan's abilities will likely vary depending on the awakened user's strengths. What kind of Mangekyou Sharingan abilities will this all-around Sasuke develop?
It's too wordy. It was already wordy enough before, but it's gotten even worse since the resumption of updates. When writing about Edo Tensei, it feels like it has to elaborate on the thoughts of every single character. It's gone off the rails.
It's a bit strange. Why does Sasuke want to help Konoha become better? Isn't Sasuke's dream to be resurrected and to seek revenge? Watching Sasuke talk about Root without any emotional fluctuation, while he's still lecturing Kabuto on some grand principles, makes me speechless. It feels like the author made Sasuke seem like an emotionless robot in order to create an emotionally stable character.
The interpersonal relationships are written very awkwardly, especially the Naruto and Sasuke segment. They really shouldn't have gotten together; they're just products of Ashura and Indra's chakra, lacking any genuine connection. Overall, it's quite cringeworthy.
Good visual impression
Sure! (*≧∪≦)👌🏻 With the system's assistance, Sasuke won't be in so much pain anymore. Keep it up! Regarding Itachi: Itachi undeniably made a mistake, and that cannot be denied. His actions cannot be forgiven on behalf of his deceased clansmen. However, in this story, Sasuke intends to resurrect his clansmen. It remains to be seen how the resurrected clansmen will view this situation.
Nobody likes a system with emotions; that's a major flaw. I think the setting could be completely changed. Replace the system with a transmigrator. The transmigrator transmigrates and becomes a cat, only a spirit. They can only gain a physical body by helping Sasuke grow and seek revenge. Wouldn't that be better than a system?