
Pirate: Son-In-Law, I'm Determined!
海贼:女婿王,我当定了!
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- Completed
- Length
- 818k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Curious
What will happen if Blackbeard uses his ability against Brook? What will happen if he uses his ability against Luffy in Gear 5?
Even if you work 200 times harder than that trash, you can become a great general. Author, you must not work 200 times harder to become a great god 🤔
What did Oda think? There are deserters who work 200 times as hard as others.
200 Times the effort, Oda really dares to say that! Other anime before have also said that they work harder than others, but at most they say several times. This is a direct two hundred times. When training with others, they are all paddling, right? The most you can say is that the amount of training is two hundred times that of others, and the amount of effort is two hundred times that of others, just for fun. As I said in a post before, A can do up to 100 push-ups a day before reaching the limit of collapse, while B can do 21,000 push-ups. Suppose A does 100 reps a day, and B does 20,000 reps, then you can only say that B's training volume is two hundred times that of A. But in terms of effort, B can't even compare to A, because he hasn't reached his limit. Even if B has completed 21,000, you can only say that B is more talented than A, but you cannot say that B works harder than A, because they have reached their respective limits. If you want to praise the Deserter King, just say it straight. It is really disgusting to say that Kebi has average talent but works 200 times harder than others. As I said, it is normally impossible to work as hard as others. Even if the amount of training is the same, it can only mean that you and others are more talented than others who have average talent but work hard. Oda should just go to sleep, Wano Country was ruined halfway, and now it is ruined to the end.
Author, you should pay attention to one thing. The protagonist can be impulsive, but don't rely on yourself as the protagonist to do so. Why is Luffy called the sit-up king Luffy? Isn't it just because you know that the other party is very strong, so you just fight hard? In Luffy's Alabasta chapter, he knew to bring water with him when fighting the sand crocodile. When he arrived at the cake shop, he knew he had some plans. When he arrived in Wano Country, he stopped pretending. I am the protagonist, I am invincible, and my teammates will not die. Follow me and charge! This led to a turnaround in word-of-mouth! All of my teammates have stronger endurance than animal fruits, which is really hard to watch. . . The protagonist can obviously train to surpass Crowe before taking action, so why does he have to take risks?
This book can be discarded
After working 200 times, the goal of becoming a general was achieved easily (cheating). The title of the book was changed twice. It was obvious that the author did not have an outline and changed his mind several times during the writing process. I very much suspect that this book is the same as the previous one about Teacher Kai. The teacher is not good enough and his strength has reached the upper limit. He can only do some bad work and compile the latest comic content into it 😅
The latest information is that Bonnie is not the biological daughter of Bear. She was born by the Draco who raped Ginny. Bear is so miserable 😰
Can the author grant me a wish and let the protagonist eat the navy hero fruit and strive to form it?
It turned out that the protagonist couldn't defeat Vergo with his own strength. He relied on the help of his subordinates, relying on his own blood, using a trap of mutual death, and defeating Vergo by cheating But what does this prove? The protagonist's strength is still not as good as Vergo's. What's the point of training so hard and fighting Vergo every day? It has become a joke, and there is no sense of satisfaction. To take the most extreme example, if the protagonist has no strength and relies solely on conspiracy, traps, and traps to defeat the Yonko, can he become the Yonko? Can he prove that he has the strength of the four emperors?
The characteristics of a general, the natural fruit, that is Xiang Lei... Although Xiang Lei fan fiction has been rampant in the past, I have never seen Xiang Lei write well. On the contrary, there are outstanding fan works in the superhuman and animal types.
You have to update 200 times more than others
The pirates have a new life. Every three years, the Tianlong people will lead the navy to massacre a non-franchised country to add to the fun. They have massacred 288 non-franchised countries so far. Valley of the Gods was one of those massacres, and Garp was on the team at the time.
The protagonist is cruel to Blackbeard, but shows mercy to Ace again and again. This is too much of a double standard.
After three years of training with Zefa, there is nothing missing. The former general is better than you in paradise. , The first half is strong, you can practice more this night and repair your body. After a year, you don't have to follow Zefa, don't learn skills from him, go to fight with the bad guys to realize your enlightenment. If you are not proficient in the six styles of Haki, why not learn from him for a year and a half, and then go directly to become a pirate if your strength exceeds the graduation standard. Isn't it different? You can also have the title of disciple of a general. If you are more powerful, you can write a fruit and add it to it. The three generals will not follow you? He can be as strong as the best among his peers by just guessing by himself, and he can't be stronger if he can be taught by a general. He has to learn in this time before he defectes. He has a wide network and power, and the fruits of hard work can come. Isn't it the best? I really don't understand why I wrote this thing in the first place. It's so annoying. I am so strong in my own efforts. During the day, I don't understand what I am missing from the golden finger training during the day. I also say that there is not enough time. I just have enough time to fool around outside. I also want to kidnap people to form a force. Do you have the strength? Do you have the background? The elites of this department leave the general teacher alone and do not learn. Going to Rogge Town with you?
There have been too many descriptions of Ace in recent chapters. What is there to write about a newbie like Ace?
I still don't understand what the protagonist's fighting style is, he uses both swords and fists For example, Garp's fighting style is "fists", Luffy is "rubber", and Zoro is "sword" The protagonist's swordsman is not like a swordsman, nor is he a bare-handed fighter, nor does he eat fruits, so I don't understand.
I also saw the thunder fruit blowing. Controlling thunder and lightning is just one of Teacher Kai's abilities. How powerful can the thunder fruit be? And until now in the comics, the world has been dominated by the fantasy beast species. The natural type was very strong in the early stage, but that's it now.
This book was originally supposed to be a passionate story about climbing up to the level of admiral and marshal step by step, then dominating the world and resisting the world government. However, it suddenly turned into a harem invincible story. I was really speechless.
I wish the protagonist could get a magnetic fruit. Kidd's development direction is really speechless. It is said to be one of the four basic forces, but it turns out that it can't even compare to the movie version of Magneto, let alone the comic version of Magneto who creates and destroys the universe.
The protagonist can become a great general if he works 200 times harder, so if the author updates 200 chapters every day, he can become a great god! ! !
The character of Yamato is quite rubbish to begin with. The reason why she became the number one heroine was just to ride on the popularity of her last book.
The front part is too weak, and the protagonist has no potential fruit abilities. It also emphasizes that the talent is not as good as Ace's, and it only has 820,000 words. Later, the title can overthrow the Celestial Dragons, which feels unreliable.
I feel like the book is going to be a tj. After I wrote about the war on top, letting Ace Lu fly into the water, and becoming the coach of the four emperors for Ace, the subscriptions should have started to drop, and the author probably didn't have the heart to write anymore.
As long as the author works two hundred times harder, he can become a novel king by updating 400 chapters a day.
How should I put it? The author's idea of cultivating Ace as a knife is a bit overwhelming. It is a pity to abandon it and tasteless. To sum up, it is not interesting.
After saving it for so many days, there are only about ten chapters at a glance? Want a eunuch?
The new books I read during the same period are all almost broken. The author needs to be strong.
It's over soon. Hold on. Everyone gathers together and pushes back. It's over. Stop being a eunuch.
After finishing this book, the author will write another One Piece book. Write about transformation, becoming an empress, beating Blackbeard hard, Ness!
I haven't read it for a few days, why is it ending? It's been so long and it's just finished with these chapters
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The writing is very exciting. When I saw that the author is Lost Pigeon, I always felt that it looked familiar. I clicked on the author's works and saw that I had ordered the previous one. Please read more, love to watch, and still support you