Douluo: Wuhun Strange Fire, Jie Hu Xiaowu

Author, at your level, a high school student? You can talk to yourself so much! ! ! !

Shennong has passed away, with two feet of grass on his grave and a hundred years of poison left behind! ! ! Have seen the latest chapter!

I am talking to myself throughout the whole article, verbose and awkward. This is not a novel, this is my reaction after reading the original work, + the self-addiction of angry youth. It's too much like a primary school student's composition, with insufficient writing power and a bit childish.

The author suggests that the bunny should be a sister and the kitten a lover! One is cold and the other is hot. It is quite interesting for two people to compete with each other. Don't open a harem, stud horses, and don't spread rumors in the world, it will be even more embarrassing. No more self-talk from God's perspective throughout the article!

The pace is too fast. From awakening the martial spirit to Shrek Academy, it only took a dozen chapters. According to the steps of other authors, at least fifty chapters could be written. The system provides martial arts and fighting skills, and the author does not need to directly initiate the master. All these can be written in detail. Also, if Xiao Wu joins Notting Academy, she will be discovered by Tang Hao. This may be because the author has his own ideas. Finally, I just wish the pace would be slower. It's really too fast, as if I'm reading the details. Come on! ! !