I Choose to Become Stronger

This... Seems to be a very new type of Yakuza style? Female Jakuza?

It was the first heroine arcade book I read, and I was looking forward to it. The opening was still relatively green, but after more than 20 chapters, it started to get better. The heroine, who just picked up a knife and killed her with a bloody river without any nonsense, was really domineering, especially several characters who were suspected of the protagonist's characteristics. If they were against the heroine, they could not survive more than three chapters. It was really cool to do it so neatly. However, the plot of Good Sisters is a bit baffling. If you don't like it, I suggest you skip it. If you like it, just pretend I didn't say it.

You should write something that makes you feel like the protagonist is a female protagonist. Such as clothing. Appearance and all, you can't do anything other than kill people, although it's quite cool. But it gets tiring easily, forget it. This is not guidance, just advice. Just follow the author's lead

This thing looks really cool, it's a bit cool at the beginning, and the whole killing process is decisive and without any hesitation.

Why is Lin Daiyu uprooting the weeping willows and looking stupid to me?

The protagonist's words are all from me and me... What kind of things are from me?? They are all women, and they are still acting like me. It looks so disgusting! And the way he speaks is no different from that of a man. If you click on a chapter, you won't know that the protagonist is a woman if you don't see the description of [her]. They are already eating the heroine's bowl of rice, and they are still staring at the pot, wanting to have their cake and eat it too... It's too greedy. Since all descriptions are written in terms of men, why should we write about female protagonists? Just write about men!

Please, all the bosses 😌😌😌

The writing is really good. Do you want to give up like this? I'm sad.

How should I put it? If the Yinjang does not describe the appearance and emotions (it is not about the relationship between men and women, don't carry it), then the word "female" will be meaningless. It would be better to be a man from the beginning and push this world around. Writing about the Yinjaku and describing her emotions is not easy. It is better to push it horizontally.

All I can say is that your book is not satisfying at all and has no potential for development. The main reason is that it is all about killing and killing, and it is too easy to get tired of aesthetics.