Starting from Covering the Sky, It Spreads Across the Heavens and All Realms

Ji Wuxian is fine. Li Wuxian has always been a show off. Can he change his mind?

The author can either directly change his surname to Ji, from Li in his previous life to the Ji family in this life. Don't let others call you Ji Wuxian. In your heart, you only admit that your name is Li Wuxian. This makes it look like there are no human beings on both sides.

Stop writing about that sister. Her unruly character is disgusting.

So why did the author delete the book review? Don't you want others to express your opinions?

The protagonist goes to another world without even bringing an imperial weapon with him. He really doesn't think others will bully others with his strength. He has no trump card, haha.

Could you please read the original work before writing it? I just looked at the first thirty pictures Let's talk about a few loopholes 27 Isn't it funny that the Immortal Lord said that he can tell through the passage of time that the protagonist does not belong here? Your Majesty has this ability. You said that the Great Ax City was to protect against world beasts and other peak races, but in the original work, the Ancestral God Cult only announced it after devouring the corpse of the late God King. Before that, few people knew how to defend themselves.

Why make the protagonist's sister so unruly? She is just another Wang Teng's younger brother. Don't try to trick her later.

This sister has a really bad mouth. Still in her 50s.

What time period is it in? Is the seniority written wrong? Void Chengdao is still in front of Queen West.

Zhetian specializes in destroying the great road of heaven, and has no fear of the law. Zhetian fights and devours the stars.

The Lord of the Universe can barely compete with the Supreme, the Great Emperor can barely destroy the universe, and the Eternal True God can compete with the True Immortal, transcending the universe. The Lord of Chaos versus the Immortal King, and the God King versus the Standard Immortal Emperor. Ordinary Hunyuan is against the Immortal Emperor, and World Hunyuan is against the Sacrificial Dao. Lord Hunyuan is on the altar.

The main character, the great emperor's family, hacked the system to become the king of killing. How come after 10%, some beasts and horses appear as kings, and what the hell is described, and the corners of the mouth are curled up in disdain? Is this an urban novel? What do you think of a king? Huh? What kind of bullshit? It's all done in one fell swoop. It's estimated that after the protagonist becomes the Great Emperor, there will be Great Emperors everywhere.

The writing is okay. However, there are still shortcomings. The first problem is that it is too short. It would be better to write at least two to three hundred thousand words before traveling from Zhetian to other universes. Writing the beginning of the Zhetian fanfic like this now, before attracting many readers, I immediately switched to Devouring the Starry Sky. You are not sure about the sky-blocking powder, and you think it is not authentic and has no internal flavor when swallowing the powder.

You wrote it before reading the original work...

It's ridiculous. Many people say that the Lord of the Universe is equal to the Supreme. Compare the world scale yourself. The Swallowing Starry Sky Galaxy is only one of the eight galaxies of the Blue Silver Empire of the Elementary Universe. The Black Dragon Mountain Empire commands thousands of elementary empires. The Ganwu Universe Kingdom also controls hundreds of thousands of medium Universe Kingdoms. The human race has 1008 Universe Kingdoms and a large number of secret realms. Then the four peak races occupy a quarter of the original universe. Zhetian is just a fragment of the perfect Nine Heavens and Ten Earths plus a few fragments of the Immortal Realm. The whole Zhetian world consists of dozens of living planets. Others that can survive humans are small worlds created by saints or secret realm imperial cities. Look at the Swallowing Starry Sky Galaxy. There are more than 1.5 Million living planets. There are 8 galaxies in the Blue Silver Empire. The Swallowing Starry Sky Immortal requires at least 100 times the body's strength. You can also learn the body's physical amplification and can exert up to 10,000 times its own strength. The planet's first level power is 2000 tons. The star level is 1024 times the planet's level one power. Then the universe level is 1024 times the star level's power. Pushing back to the realm master, you have to play the realm master. The power of the most rubbish realm lord is twice as powerful as the realm lord. The power of the realm lord is 1024 times that of the realm lord level one. How much power is that? When it comes to immortality, the minimum requirement is 100 times the realm lord's power. The immortal war lords are all 1000 times the realm lord. Starting with the power of the Lord, 10,000 elementary kings, 100,000 advanced kings, one million world lords, the limit of kingship or invincible kingship, tens of millions times to be a cosmic venerable, and the cosmic venerable can also achieve 100 times genetic enhancement The strength of the upper body is 100 times. All the Masters of the Universe have learned that the physical increase is just different. The original book introduces the battle of Feng Wang and destroyed three galaxies with a single A. If it happened in the Zhetian World, Zhetian World will know all the living planets and all the stars you can see will disappear. Does it feel very far from the Earth in Zhetian World to Beidou? The closest trading planet to Zhalong is hundreds of thousands of light years away. The universe that humans can observe with intelligence is only over 90 billion light years. Most of the articles about the world of Zhetian are about the areas in the Milky Way. The Milky Way is only 100,000 light years away. The nearest trading planet is hundreds of thousands of light years away. Are you saying that it is easy to swallow the starry sky to live forever? He is very weak. 003 Light years, you will know how big the volume of the starry sky is. Compare the original universe to the solar system that covers the sky and throws it in. It's really just a grain of dust. It's a grain of dust from the solar system, but it's not from the earth.

When I read Chapter 5, the whole book gave me the feeling that it should be classified as urban. It has such a strong urban flavor, and does not have the feeling of fantasy and immortality at all. The writing style is not very good, and maybe there is too much urban writing, so it is not suitable.

If you don't update it, it's just for the sake of watching Wu Shi. Who will read this update? Do you think you are in the snow?

To be honest, it is better to just go to the other side of deep space and follow the standards of Wang Laoliu. After a few thousand years of fighting monsters and upgrading, you can come back to target the Immortal Emperor. After tens of thousands of years, you can come back and push the plateau. Just sacrifice the entire world view of the trilogy over and over again and sacrifice yourself as a sacrifice. Then restore the world view of the trilogy and restore the timeline to the Zhetiantian era. Then, eat melon seeds and watch the show on the six sacrifices at the source of the sea of ​​time.

The writing is okay, Swallowing and Covering the Sky are my favorites, and I'm also looking forward to the plot of the Immortal Realm. And we must let Wu Shi attain enlightenment! Don't steal other people's opportunities to attain enlightenment, otherwise who would turn their backs on all sentient beings, right? Looking forward to the protagonist and Wu Shi fighting again. It's best to fight in the saint stage, where the protagonist wins slightly and sets the pace on fire. The one thing Emperor Wu Shi Zhengdao wants to do later is to fight with the protagonist and regain his face. But the protagonist is unable to fight due to various reasons. A tens of thousands of years of agreement from two peerless geniuses completely fills the suspense and leads to the subsequent plot of Ye Fan's era... Perfectly inherited. I almost want to write a book.

The Great Emperor's Tribulation is actually in Beidou Star? ? ? ? The Emperor's Tribulation that can't even criticize the planet? Is this a weakened version of Zhetian? And the quasi-emperor can survive the Great Emperor Tribulation at an early stage?

I'm an Immortal Emperor, go to the small world of Journey to the West?

Journey to the West mentions that Pangu broke through Hongmeng, and it was Li Laojun who created the world.

Let me go, you, a woman, can't explain clearly what you have. You have been to so many worlds and you just took them all in one go. Then when you went to Journey to the West, you turned on the crazy mode, either killing people or on the way to kill. What kind of trouble are you trying to make, author?

When will you go to other worlds?